Presumptuous! Your Majesty Will Not Go to Court Today!
About This Novel
Travel through the Three Kingdoms period, obtain the [Torture System] and become the biggest mastermind in the Three Kingdoms period! [Shop] [Pharmacy] [Hardware Store] [Mobile Phone Store] [Weapon Store] From then on, the three countries were completely different. "Penicillin", "Ibuprofen", "Antidote", "Rebar" and "Mobile Phone" From then on, farming, development, infrastructure (later plot)... Dong Zhuo: "Finally died, this grand master is too difficult!" [Torture value +10] Cao Cao: "Hold up the emperor to order all the people. Hou? Do you think I look like this? "[Torture value +10]" Liu Bei: "Recover the Han Dynasty!" Zhang Fei: "Recover the Han Dynasty!"
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Official(1)Scraped 11d ago
If the author writes books just as a hobby, then you can do whatever you want. If you want to earn some royalties, you still need to polish it more.
For the protagonist's name, either just use Liu Xie, unless you create a character of your own, and using Liu An will not give you a sense of substitution, and sometimes the two names appear together, don't you feel uncomfortable watching it? The general image of the protagonist has been established in the previous chapters. You scolded the ten ministers and asked them to surrender and kill the emperor. Although it is a bit exaggerated, it doesn't matter in the novel. It can be read according to this image. However, after the system awakens, it has no real character at all. In chapter 34, it collapsed directly. In the chapters before the system awakened, you wanted to create an image of a wise and powerful warrior who has everything under control, and the protagonist's character is enhanced. It's too high. After the system awakens, it falls directly from the sky to the ground. The gap between the characters before and after is too big. It's only been a few chapters and the protagonist's image is so stretched. The chapters before the system awakens can still be read. I suggest you polish it again. Judging from the 34 chapters you have written so far, you may not be able to make it to the shelves. If the author writes books just as a hobby, then you can do whatever you want. If you want to earn some royalties, you still have to polish it.
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Community(0)
Official(1)Scraped 11d ago
If the author writes books just as a hobby, then you can do whatever you want. If you want to earn some royalties, you still need to polish it more.
For the protagonist's name, either just use Liu Xie, unless you create a character of your own, and using Liu An will not give you a sense of substitution, and sometimes the two names appear together, don't you feel uncomfortable watching it? The general image of the protagonist has been established in the previous chapters. You scolded the ten ministers and asked them to surrender and kill the emperor. Although it is a bit exaggerated, it doesn't matter in the novel. It can be read according to this image. However, after the system awakens, it has no real character at all. In chapter 34, it collapsed directly. In the chapters before the system awakened, you wanted to create an image of a wise and powerful warrior who has everything under control, and the protagonist's character is enhanced. It's too high. After the system awakens, it falls directly from the sky to the ground. The gap between the characters before and after is too big. It's only been a few chapters and the protagonist's image is so stretched. The chapters before the system awakens can still be read. I suggest you polish it again. Judging from the 34 chapters you have written so far, you may not be able to make it to the shelves. If the author writes books just as a hobby, then you can do whatever you want. If you want to earn some royalties, you still have to polish it.
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