Howling West Wind

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I saw Chapter 17. I reviewed the previous book, but of course, I didn't survive the book review evaporation incident. The author has made great progress in this article, and the subject matter may be particularly ideal, so the passion and writing style in the work resonate, which makes the first dozen chapters coherent and expressive. To improve, the barrier between writing style and core should be penetrated, which is the author's expectations for the character. For example, the most obvious chestnut is that Mr. Xiao suffered tremendous grief, and that mountain-like pressure did not penetrate into his character. Although the protagonist's character changed as his life experience was revealed, the tone of the writing was not followed up in time, resulting in the protagonist's conflict. For example, on the night when I learned the bad news about my mother, there was a scene where the person under the lamp looked like a ghost and turned into a demon by pressing the knife, which was very good. The one-armed man was pleased with his anger and could profile him. The princess's feelings for him can be written in a more direct and pure way. Characters don't follow the author's mind, but their soul. This barrier also leads to some structural problems, such as the steppe ruthless man should be dismantled and the bloody counterattack should be exciting. For example, you should have a wolf-like desire for the princess, get it and snatch it away! For example, One-Armed's men actually died in battle. He was disappointed not so much in the grasslands but in the Central Plains. The scholar should also have a deeper understanding of the princess and a process of change. The probability of him dying for the princess will be greater. In the end, the man takes the lead and takes the lead, bringing beauty and establishing a career. This is God's start. The list of books has been added, and I am a fan of each other.