
A Journey Through the Three Kingdoms to Cultivate Immortality
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The Eastern Han Dynasty was extremely weird. The literary Taoist priests could control the wind and rain, and the martial Taoist priests could defeat ten thousand people. Su Chen felt that he had arrived suddenly, and before he could get used to it, his mother Wu Yunluo kicked him out of the house!
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Official(9)Scraped 23d ago
I hope the author will keep this in mind
① I think the character must be cold and ruthless, the kind where kingliness and domineering coexist. You don't want the Virgin, because in the novels of the Three Kingdoms, you must not want the Virgin, otherwise you will be criticized by book friends. ②Up to now, with the development of this book, the author will definitely inherit the Xiliang Army to conquer Luoyang, and lead the emperor to command the princes. My assumption is that Dong Zhuo can die at this time, that is, Dong Zhuo is not needed to lead the emperor to control the princes, but the protagonist leads the Xiliang Army to lead the emperor to control the princes. If the author has not understood what I mean, I will simplify it a bit, that is, Dong Zhuo is dead at this time, and then he entrusts the Xiliang Army to the protagonist to fulfill his last wish, and the protagonist goes to fight the heroes of Hulao Pass. ③There are only four most important people in the Xiliang Army, namely generals Li Ru, Hua Xiong, and Li Dun. Among them, Hua Xiong and Li Ru can recruit Li Guo and kill them. ④ You can add some sects to this novel. For example, there is a sect behind Dong Zhuo to help him with some things. You can add the Tao Ping Dao and other sects.
Come on⊙▽⊙Write well, good book
Good luck with the good book⊙▽⊙I hope you write it
This is his mother's second grade.
I hope the author will accept it personally.
It doesn't matter if Xu Chu takes it or not, and it's okay to leave it to Cao Cao, but it's not okay to leave Dian Wei to Cao Cao. I think Dian Wei should be given to the protagonist. Will he take Zhou Yu? I like Zhou Yu very much. If the author considers including Zhou Yu, that would be great.
Come on, the author. By the way, I will give you some suggestions.
① If this book continues to develop, the protagonist will definitely go to Xiliang. When he goes to Xiliang, he will definitely meet Dong Zhuo. I think if Dong Zhuo follows the previous Three Kingdoms novels, Dong Zhuo seems to have no son. You can just betroth Dong Zhuo to his granddaughter or daughter to the protagonist, and then let the protagonist become the heir of the Xiliang army to conquer the entire Luoyang. ② In terms of scribes, Xi Zhicai, Guo Jia, and Li Ru! ③As for the fierce generals, Hua Xiong, Dian Wei, and Xu Chu! ④In terms of generals, Xu Huang, Zhang Liao, Gao Shun! ⑤ Don't be too simplistic in your collection, and don't be too brainless in your description. ⑥Don't want Cai Wenji. ⑦The supporting characters should not be too brainless.
Collected.
I haven't watched it yet, there are a little few updates, I'm waiting for more updates.
Already attracted by fictional history
It's very interesting. The author is very serious about writing. I can tell. Already collected, hope to update soon.
Confused and completely dizzy. can't read.
233, I have no idea what this book means.
The writing is pretty good, but the punctuation marks are a bit uncomfortable.
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Official(9)Scraped 23d ago
I hope the author will keep this in mind
① I think the character must be cold and ruthless, the kind where kingliness and domineering coexist. You don't want the Virgin, because in the novels of the Three Kingdoms, you must not want the Virgin, otherwise you will be criticized by book friends. ②Up to now, with the development of this book, the author will definitely inherit the Xiliang Army to conquer Luoyang, and lead the emperor to command the princes. My assumption is that Dong Zhuo can die at this time, that is, Dong Zhuo is not needed to lead the emperor to control the princes, but the protagonist leads the Xiliang Army to lead the emperor to control the princes. If the author has not understood what I mean, I will simplify it a bit, that is, Dong Zhuo is dead at this time, and then he entrusts the Xiliang Army to the protagonist to fulfill his last wish, and the protagonist goes to fight the heroes of Hulao Pass. ③There are only four most important people in the Xiliang Army, namely generals Li Ru, Hua Xiong, and Li Dun. Among them, Hua Xiong and Li Ru can recruit Li Guo and kill them. ④ You can add some sects to this novel. For example, there is a sect behind Dong Zhuo to help him with some things. You can add the Tao Ping Dao and other sects.
Come on⊙▽⊙Write well, good book
Good luck with the good book⊙▽⊙I hope you write it
This is his mother's second grade.
I hope the author will accept it personally.
It doesn't matter if Xu Chu takes it or not, and it's okay to leave it to Cao Cao, but it's not okay to leave Dian Wei to Cao Cao. I think Dian Wei should be given to the protagonist. Will he take Zhou Yu? I like Zhou Yu very much. If the author considers including Zhou Yu, that would be great.
Come on, the author. By the way, I will give you some suggestions.
① If this book continues to develop, the protagonist will definitely go to Xiliang. When he goes to Xiliang, he will definitely meet Dong Zhuo. I think if Dong Zhuo follows the previous Three Kingdoms novels, Dong Zhuo seems to have no son. You can just betroth Dong Zhuo to his granddaughter or daughter to the protagonist, and then let the protagonist become the heir of the Xiliang army to conquer the entire Luoyang. ② In terms of scribes, Xi Zhicai, Guo Jia, and Li Ru! ③As for the fierce generals, Hua Xiong, Dian Wei, and Xu Chu! ④In terms of generals, Xu Huang, Zhang Liao, Gao Shun! ⑤ Don't be too simplistic in your collection, and don't be too brainless in your description. ⑥Don't want Cai Wenji. ⑦The supporting characters should not be too brainless.
Collected.
I haven't watched it yet, there are a little few updates, I'm waiting for more updates.
Already attracted by fictional history
It's very interesting. The author is very serious about writing. I can tell. Already collected, hope to update soon.
Confused and completely dizzy. can't read.
233, I have no idea what this book means.
The writing is pretty good, but the punctuation marks are a bit uncomfortable.









