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Official(6)Scraped 11d ago
The author suggests revising the beginning of your book. Firstly, the background of the world is not mentioned (the background of the era is not mentioned), and secondly, the identity information of the protagonist (for example, the protagonist is a time traveler, both of them must explain it clearly, such as the information about the body that takes over the body, and the information about the soul that has traveled through time).
. . .
It's not cold-blooded enough, it's too kind. It's okay in peaceful times, but in troubled times, are you sure you can survive the second episode?
Nothing at the beginning
I really can't see it, there's no background whatsoever, I just added this and that randomly later, it's completely unreadable.
The male protagonist clearly knows that it is the emperor's beauty trap, but he still jumps into the pit. He must have a trick in his head.
I just abandoned the article after one chapter of whatever it was I wrote.
The author should not be one month old
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Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 11d ago
The author suggests revising the beginning of your book. Firstly, the background of the world is not mentioned (the background of the era is not mentioned), and secondly, the identity information of the protagonist (for example, the protagonist is a time traveler, both of them must explain it clearly, such as the information about the body that takes over the body, and the information about the soul that has traveled through time).
. . .
It's not cold-blooded enough, it's too kind. It's okay in peaceful times, but in troubled times, are you sure you can survive the second episode?
Nothing at the beginning
I really can't see it, there's no background whatsoever, I just added this and that randomly later, it's completely unreadable.
The male protagonist clearly knows that it is the emperor's beauty trap, but he still jumps into the pit. He must have a trick in his head.
I just abandoned the article after one chapter of whatever it was I wrote.
The author should not be one month old
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