Daming: Self-destruction at the Beginning and Time Travel, Establishing a Chat Group

Personally, I think it's good. This novel has a lot of joy. It's hard to be strict about the party. However, the writing is interesting and there are some suggestions. If you want to write for yourself, don't worry about it. I think it's comfortable to just come out with everything without explaining anything. But I feel that it's not difficult anymore. Writing novels is all about routines. The general routine remains the same, but you have to change the method, such as asking for something. We don't have to let the protagonist do it. After all, we don't think it's anything nowadays, but it was very old-fashioned in that era, and the combat aspect was too sloppy. The character of the protagonist is well portrayed, and the writing is okay. But for the fragments that almost arouse the readers' emotions, I think more attention can be paid to the details. It's generally good, and since Goldfinger has become like this, it's hard to change, which is quite poisonous for serious readers. To sum up, it's great. At least it can be on the new book list after I read it. Come on, author! Although the chance is not great this time, if you lay the foundation well, you can become a great master one day. Nowadays, many people like funny writing style, which is rare. This is how I take my time step by step. Also, if the work becomes popular, the trolls will control their mentality more. Big

Poison, the eldest princess is still so unreasonable, 6

So, is this system so meaningless?

There are a lot of poisonous points, was it written in AI? Such a high rating.

Too much bullshit. I read ten chapters. Didn't see the point at all

Rubbish, no common sense at all! The Hu Weiyong case has occurred, Queen Ma is about to die, and Prince Zhu Biao is not married yet!

Zhu Xingzu was not Zhu Yuanzhang's brother. He was defeated by Zhu Yuanzhang and betrayed Lao Zhu once

It must be six stars. One more star will be given to you in another way.

6 Every other line is like a mountain. I hope you succeed.

From the first chapter, having Hu Weiyong next to you is a big failure. It's fucking disgusting that you have to pay money to read this book. I originally spent dozens of dollars to read it because the subject matter was okay, but I gave up decisively after reading the first chapter. Hu Weiyong, who is so greedy and harms the people, the protagonist can chat and talk to him in a pleasant manner, which shows that the protagonist is not a good person.