What Happened in the Late Jin Dynasty

Talk about why it is rated three stars, I think it is only two or three stars. I wouldn't be surprised if someone gave it one star⭐! From the first few golden chapters, it can be seen that the author has a solid literary talent, and the writing is very good! After more than ten or twenty chapters, it started to feel a little weak. It was neither a system trick nor a direct highlight. I could only write some daily embellishments. The conflict is not serious enough and can only be overdone, so that readers can't stand it from the first dozen chapters. It is too slow to heat up and the plot advances too slowly. The key is that the plot is slow to advance, and the next dozens of chapters are filled with nonsense. Several people have suggested that the narration should be reduced, but the author agreed and knew that it would be changed, but he definitely couldn't change it! Because this is the way the author wrote it, otherwise there is nothing he can do, and it is impossible to change it just because of this. Therefore, it took dozens of chapters to slowly enter the stage, and it took hundreds of chapters to start fighting. There are neither many nor intense conflict climaxes in the early stage. It has been guiding the readers and explaining throughout the whole article. It can explain a large paragraph in one sentence, and a few sentences in a chapter, so it can be written directly into several large paragraphs. I've just compiled a few thousand words for you! Then, I couldn't feel the plot at all after writing a few chapters. The fun of reading this book was always led by your guidance and explanation. I didn't feel much about the climax and conflict of the plot, and it all felt like nonsense. It wears out the reader's patience. . . Anyone who can read this kind of historical novel is not a novice, and you don't need to explain it sentence by sentence. Who can come in and read it who is not a bookworm? Even if I don't understand, I would rather search Baidu, and I don't want you to explain it sentence by sentence. It was very uncomfortable to read. In fact, I didn't want to post this comment, but this book is still good without these redundant narration explanations. After all, there are not many good books about the two Jin Dynasties, or even very few. I hate you too. If you want to make money, you have to consider the readers' feelings. If you just fulfill your writing dream or interest, you can ignore it appropriately. I don't know whether the author is a newcomer or a veteran, but this kind of writing technique, especially the way of knowing the number of words, feels like it is not something that a newcomer can do. What's more, the background of the text is so good. To be honest, the most annoying thing for readers is the low word count, and the word count is forced to be low! The last book I gave a one-star rating also had a very low word count, and I couldn't stand it. But it's still because his plot is not as good as yours, and yours is considered better. So, it's still acceptable. If you really get rid of the redundant narration, you will definitely achieve more than this. After all, there are hundreds of chapters and millions of words! It really shouldn't be, that's probably it for this book! I hope you will consider the readers more in your next book so that you can write a good book. Don't just pursue word count. If you just want to get subsistence allowance, forget it. If you want to achieve some results, you cannot rely on word count, you must be precise. Once it is put on the shelves in this way, more people will subscribe and reward it. As long as it is well written and enjoyable to read, you won't have to worry about no one subscribing and rewarding it. To be honest, there are still people who can read your book for free. It would be impossible for me to subscribe to it. After reading dozens of chapters, I will be poisoned by too many narrations. Therefore, it can be seen here that the author is obviously living on subsistence allowances and living on a meager word count! Although it is hard to search for information, there will definitely be rewards if you put in the effort. When I saw this, I was wondering if the author is a teacher by profession, a history teacher? Still really understand this. . . Although there are too many complaints, it's nothing. I hope the author doesn't mind. Hope you can work hard! Pay more attention to your body. After all, writing is not easy, especially historical novels.

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After reading the last two chapters, the author opened his mouth and asked how many taels of silver he had, and he was still explaining it conclusively. Have you ever learned about currency in ancient history? China itself does not produce much silver. It was only through trade and foreign trade that a large amount of silver flowed into the Ming Dynasty and became the mainstream currency. Have you ever understood the gold standard and silver standard? Gold is only the currency for large-scale transactions. The main transactions are still mainly copper coins, and silk and silk can also be used as hard currency. In the Jin Dynasty, you could get as many taels of silver as you opened your mouth. In addition, when the power was transferred from the north to the south, the main weapons of the cavalry were horse guns. The spear was often used in battles in the late Tang Dynasty. The horse gun was expensive and took a long time to be replaced by the long gun. It became the mainstream weapon in the Song Dynasty. In the Northern and Southern Dynasties, the Sui and Tang Dynasties, not to mention the generals, even the small soldiers were poor.

The name of the army is very necessary. From the beginning of the protagonist's army, it was called Wangshi in Qianzhang. It was still Wangshi. Is it so difficult to give the army a number?

I don't know why I provoke Princess Xin'an. Is it because I think my harem is not chaotic enough? Historically, Princess Xin'an forced Wang Xianzhi to divorce Xi Daomao and left Xianzhi disabled, just to marry Xianzhi and become his wife, regardless of other people's feelings. As long as she was happy, it would be strange if she did not challenge Xie Daoyun's status!

Here are some questions raised by book friends: 1. Some book friends say that some chapters in this book introduce too much background. Because this period of history is relatively unpopular, some background introduction is intended to prevent everyone from being confused. The author himself hates Baidu while reading. I will control the length of this aspect in the future. Of course, some of the main forces in this book have also been briefly introduced. There will not be a small half chapter introducing Liangzhou like Chapter 8. If you think there are other inappropriate places, you can point them out, and then I will add a reminder before the chapter to help you read it quickly, just like the modification in Chapter 8. 2. Is Wang Meng considered a traitor? This question... Involves a series of issues such as the emergence of Han national consciousness, such as whether Ran Min is a hero or a speculator? Is Yang Jian a hero or a speculator? Were the emperors of the Tang Dynasty Han heroes or Xianbei traitors? Since I have little talent and knowledge, I will not comment, but everyone is welcome to express their opinions. The protagonist of this article rose from Guanzhong, so Wang Meng must not be able to get around it. What's more, the main line of this work is the same as my previous two books. It must express some thoughts of patriotism and national strength. I want to express my bad butt, but I am helpless. The protagonist makes a group of Han people who originally served the Di people and Xianbei appear national consciousness and strive for the prosperity of the Han people. Isn't it a story worth looking forward to? 3. Some book friends feel that the review section of this book is a bit exaggerated and are worried about deleting the review I would like to declare that the reviews of this book are all published spontaneously by book friends. The author himself does not buy reviews (I have no money, wouldn't it be nice to have enough money to buy two books?), Does not control reviews (there are not that many book friends to help me fill my ears), and does not delete reviews (there are not many reviews on this book, even if they are critical, I am not willing to delete them). Feel free to put forward your criticisms and suggestions, and I will work hard to correct whatever I can. It's not up to me to take care of my mother-in-law. 4. Recommendation and listing There will be two more recommendations starting from Sunday and will be updated at that time. When will it be put on the shelves? The editor is on a business trip for the past two days. I will discuss it with him on Monday. This set of recommendations should be finished. Please give me recommendation votes and book reviews. This Q&A is over. If you like this format, you are welcome to leave more comments and opinions. If enough, we will do it again N times.

What era is this? Murong family, Tuoba family, Yao family, Fu family, Xie family, Sima family, novels from this era have really never been found.

Really, the characterization is pretty good, but it's just too damn verbose.

People's adaptability is very strong; there are too many narrations and psychological activities, so don't add drama just for the sake of adding drama; Wang Meng is a minister, "the emperor and his ministers are different"; there is no need to mythological historical figures, the times create heroes; the author can read the articles after "Chapter 140" of the book "The Master of the Han Dynasty" to think about it.

It's very well written, with a lot of words, eh