Swallowing the Starry Sky: the Road to Transcendence

First of all, this book is indeed a pure invincible flow novel. The main character is super big. You can understand the general content just by reading the introduction. Because I like Luo Feng so much, it's good that I didn't take the opportunity to blackmail the protagonist. If the biggest reason for reading this fanfic is to have fun, well, the literary point is to make up for regrets. After all, although Luo Feng has a lot of problems in Swallowing, he actually worked hard step by step. There are many hardships and crises, so it is inevitable to feel regretful and aggrieved at times. As for this fanfic, the main character is really hilarious, and the important events along the way have been pretended to be, and I have to say that it is quite comfortable. But! Here's the point. In my opinion, the only good thing about this book is that it's enjoyable and some parts are too pretentious. If you appreciate Luo Feng's hard work and self-improvement, there's a good chance that you won't be able to stand this protagonist. (Ps: I just read the first 20 chapters and couldn't help but want to complain about him. I won't comment on the subsequent plot and the author's writing style) The specific disadvantages are as follows: 1. The degree of acceptance of the author's writing style varies from person to person. So far in the chapters I have read, the author has used emojis and parentheses to copy the author's words many times. For example, after a description, he directly said that the author could not describe it. He said that a passerby who did not know the name asked the author to name it. He also said that he did not know the name of a tomato that was so big. I can accept this kind of ridicule and direct joking without writing the parentheses after it once or twice, or if it is added at the end of the chapter. But there are too many emoticons in this article. I feel like there are emoticons in every chapter. Even though I thought the author was cute at first, I just thought it was a joke later on. Personally, I am used to imagining when reading novels. For good novels, I will feel that the world described in this book is real, but this kind of writing really makes me laugh. In short, the writing style needs to be improved. I think even if it can't be written, don't say that the writing style is not enough in the parentheses of the text. Either say it at the end or say it in the comments of the text. Wouldn't it be more fun and won't cause trouble for readers like me. 2. The character's realm and strength are in a mess. Swallow's world view and strength levels are relatively complete and detailed. But the main character of this fan club is a second time traveler. I haven't seen Jiuding and don't comment on it, but the author's description of the main character's strength after time travel is: Innate secret method, life level 6000, recognition of the 5 basic lower origin laws, how to say 9th level of star level, the talent is really awesome, but after all, it is only star level, right? How do you say that with this strength, the Realm Lord is nothing and you are not afraid of ordinary immortals? Although I know that I want to say that the protagonist is very powerful, the strength setting is outrageous. Even if the star level is the strongest talent in the history of all races in the universe, it is still the star level. There is no training and hard work, and the game is not directly said to be invincible. This is just embarrassing, you know. It's especially outrageous when a child at home suddenly tells you that I am the strongest person in the universe. The first thing that made me think was not that the protagonist was so strong and cool, but that I subconsciously doubted him. Is he joking? That's too much! 3. The protagonist's character is set. . . Just think of it as a very strong ordinary person. Although the mood is said to be lofty and transcendent, playing in the human world, I just feel that the protagonist is a bit childish and pretentious, and he is extremely crazy without describing too much strength, which is very unpleasant. The protagonist said that he didn't care about the Lord and the Lord of the Universe. He said that he only respects the Lord of Chaos City because of his contribution to the human race. Otherwise, it doesn't matter? ? ? ? Let's not talk about how much you have selflessly dedicated yourself to the ethnic group. Looking at your strength, how dare you! ? No matter how talented you are, you are still a genius and not a strong person! ? Luo Feng is also very talented and knows that he will be extraordinary in the future. He still respects those who are better than him at this stage. Just this state of mind, I am very fascinated, and I don't want to be lofty. The author also said in parentheses that I don't know how to write it, so it is better to keep it mysterious to the end, be steady and leisurely, we can pretend, but we must pretend to be reasonable and real, otherwise it is not called pretending, but a fight. Summary: It's not too serious, I just want to see the protagonist invincibly crushing the flow in the devouring background. The entertainment version is welcome. If you are interested in the protagonist's character, logical setting and writing style, then your acceptance will vary from person to person.

I have read all of Tomato's books, but Swallowing the Stars is the first of his books that I have read. The most important thing about Tomato's book is that the protagonist has a good outlook on life. This is very important. Luo Feng, Xiao Yan and Tang San are often compared on Zhihu. It is very interesting to see who is suitable for making friends. Tang San must first stay far away, and the way to death cannot be underestimated. Although Xiao Yan is also good, he values ​​love and justice, but compared with Luo Feng, I still think Luo Feng is better. Of course, benevolent people have different opinions. At the age of 30, Qin Ming accidentally traveled to the Jiuding World. After a lot of struggle, he became the strongest and broke the void. He wanted to return to the earth from the broken void of the Jiuding World. As a result, his goal was achieved, but this earth is not that earth. By accident, Qin Ming came to the Devouring Starry Sky World. When he first arrived at Devouring Earth, Qin Ming was enveloped by the law of origin. Not only was he favored by the law of the five elements, but his life level was increased to 6,000 times. What was even more outrageous was that he was gifted by the origin of the universe. At the beginning of Tianhu's life, he would at least become a lord-level Hunyuan powerhouse. The protagonist of this book has a good mentality. He plays in the world and does everything. He seems to care about everything, but in fact he doesn't care about anything. He has a pure heart and doesn't care about other people's opinions. He has his own persistence and bottom line. The protagonist has his own path to rise and his own path. He will not rely on Luo Feng, nor will he seize Luo Feng's opportunities. If he doesn't plagiarize entire chapters and large sections of the original work like some fans do, then I might as well read the original work? This book opens up different story lines in the context of devouring, which is more to my liking. The key is that the author of this book is a bookworm for more than 20 years. There are no brainless villains in the book, the plot is reasonable, and there are no brainless routines that are pretentious and slap in the face. It adheres to the original setting and can withstand scrutiny.

The maximum two poison points in the early stage. The first major poison: The author set the protagonist's character to be too supreme and forgetful, but he turned out to be a psychopath. The author's understanding of the protagonist is too outrageous. The second biggest poison: Secret books can be distributed in reality. If a person dies, all the secret books will be left behind, and aliens can get them all. The giant ax is still killing the alien universe lord at the gate of the Star Tower. Various other minor poisons can be accepted as being made up by the author himself. 😥The biggest poisonous point in the later period is the apprentice Su Yuchan. I seriously doubt that the author is called that. He also made up a character to take his place. He is said to have a heart of innocence, but he is just a foodie with no brains and no manners. His really disgusting character is completely incomparable with the innocence of Thor. No matter how innocent and cute he is, he must at least have the courtesy of a tutor. The author probably didn't read the original work carefully. He didn't know the reasons for setting many details. The changes were outrageous, and his understanding of the meaning of xinxing was outrageous. I couldn't stand it until I saw the creation of reincarnation. This is the third-to-last fanfic I've read out of the dozen or so fanfics I've read. In the early stages, I could read it as a comic book, but later on, I abandoned it because the female apprentice became more disgusting the more I read it.

Three points are given because Su Yuchan subtracted two points. I hate the protagonist's apprentice Su Yuchan. She used her so-called innocence as an excuse for her wanton behavior. When the star level appeared on the stage, she put on a mask of innocence, and even the Eternal Lord looked down upon her. He had guarded the Chaos Monument for who knows how many epochs, but she called him ugly when he appeared on the stage. When the retreat time came, she was asked to go out and come back next time, but she still resented her and went to complain, relying on the protagonist's status as a disciple and her innocent disguise. It got even worse later on. She didn't even look down on the great guardian of the human race like Giant Axe, and started swearing profusely. Forget it, there is the Origin Master, who even the protagonist and all humans must bow to show respect. She also calls her an old man, and she often says she is ugly. She doesn't even respect her master, the protagonist. Every time she breaks through, she has to lick her face and ask for a gift, and it has to be something above the True God's Treasure. Even the protagonist's natal treasure has been deceived by her. Moreover, when I broke through to the True God, the universe in my body was not as big as the protagonist's, so I thought that the protagonist was hiding something secret and did not teach her all the magic. They don't look at their own talents and what they have contributed to the human race. There is also the idea of ​​​​the protagonist's round treasure, which is not even available to the god-king-level mountain guest. There is only one protagonist. She was already planning this perfect round treasure as an early stage true god. She felt that if the protagonist didn't give it to her, he was hiding something secretly and didn't love her as a lovely disciple, so she started crying. Disgusting batch, so two points have to be taken off.

I couldn't put it down after reading two chapters of this book. The writing style is completely childish to the extreme. It is roughly equivalent to the novels written by some sophomores in junior high schools for their own entertainment, or even worse.

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The first point is that I couldn't understand it since I came from the Jiuding World through the void. The Devouring Starry Sky World is the source world, and the world barrier cannot be broken through by people from the martial arts world. The second point is that when Hong came, his realm was level 7. The original book said that Hong only broke through the realm of level 2 when the Golden Horned Behemoth came out. The third point is that the front leg said that several people would be born on different planets to hide the secrets of the earth. The back leg registered the citizen information for all of them on the administrative planet, and then they did not separate. After arriving at Chaos City, they gave wisdom to the Lord of Chaos City. The state of mind of several people cannot be explained clearly with a few words spoken by one person and a few books. Especially there are two cosmic-level little guys who can break through the 21st level of the universe overlord level of the Illusion Sea. The fourth point is that Venerable Golden Ax is only as powerful as the Supreme Venerable of the Universe. The original work mentioned that when Luo Feng was learning the 7 Transformations of the Gods, Venerable Golden Ax taught him. Venerable Guiyi mentioned that he directly became the top universe overlord here. The fifth point, I don't understand. As a peak tribe, the new Lord of the Universe in the human race is only rewarded with a top treasure weapon. How come all the top cosmic overlords to be assassinated all have a peak treasure? You must know that Guiyi Zun, as the direct disciple of the Lord of Chaos City and the cosmic overlord, does not have an ordinary soul treasure. How can the top cosmic overlords of several other tribes possess the top treasure? You must know that the Lord of Heavenly Wolf can take the best shot. There is only one high-level treasure, the Heavenly Wolf Palace. The domain treasures of the Chaos City Lord's avatar and the name of the Universe Sea are only the top-level treasures. Then, in the Heavenly Wolf Hall of the Lord of the Ice Prison Star, Sirius, he was forcibly promoted to the pinnacle treasure, the Lord of the Heavenly Wolf. His strength was also forcibly upgraded to the level 5 Chaos City Lord's treasure. He was also forcibly upgraded to the pinnacle treasure, and then he was directly suppressed in the Tianlang Palace in an actual battle. You must know that you here have turned two treasures into the pinnacle treasure. When we get here, we directly plagiarize the original work. The sixth point is the issue of strength. Can the domain lord level kill the top universe overlord in an instant? What the hell is this? The suppression of strength is not broken like this. In the virtual universe, we can reach the 20th floor of Tongtianqiao because our strength is the same, but our understanding of the laws is different. In reality, the gap in divine power cannot be made up by a perfect divine body at the main level of a district. Okay, I can't stand it anymore. I complained so much and also gave a bad review. I gave Zhang a monthly ticket to encourage me. I hope that if you want to write a fanfic for your next book, you can read more about the various settings of the original work and don't write nonsense.

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