
Starting from Swallowing, Krypton Gold Becomes a God
About This Novel
Xu Yan traveled through the Devouring Starry Sky World and became Luo Feng's uncle. After discovering that he had no talent for cultivation, Xu Yan decided to embrace City Lord Luo's lap. The next day, Xu Yan awakened the krypton gold system and could become stronger by charging money! In order to make money, Xu Yan did whatever he could to find a way to make money. ... N years later, Xu Yan's evil reputation spread throughout the universe. "Be careful with that human!" "You will lose at most one life if you fight with others!" "If you fight Xu Yan, you will really be blackmailed and bankrupt!"
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Official(112)Scraped 11d ago
The words below are my copy of your original text, and the screenshot below is the original text of Devouring Starry Sky
Xu Yan took out the water bottle from his backpack and took a sip, and asked in confusion: "Brother Lu, why are there more monsters in these abandoned cities than in the wild? Logically speaking, shouldn't it be more suitable for them to survive in the wild?" "I know this." It was Du Hongyuan who answered Xu Yan. He smiled and said: "Scientists in the past have also studied this problem, and finally came to the conclusion that abandoned buildings are ready-made nests for monsters. Didn't you notice that in the building under our feet, many monster cubs were killed along the way?"
Tell a joke, the author has read the original work
The professional third-rate novelist is talking about the author himself. He probably stays in a small room in a studio with a simple document in his hand and writes tens of thousands of words a day.
You don't even understand your realm. Sometimes it improves and then falls back. You don't know what the hell it is. It's nonsense. It's rubbish novels. Those who time-travel are all trying to grab opportunities and give away women. It's really fucking rubbish.
Read the original work twice more before writing it, Liushuidiwen
What are you writing about? The A-level test is the easiest one to take when entering the training camp. B-level is more difficult than A-level. The original book asked Luo Feng to take the B-level test because there were no places. I can only give you one star after seeing this.
Relying on the defense, the more you go to the back, the more poisonous it becomes. It is about this way and that way and it is a transcendent universe. The writing is awesome, but the real combat power cannot be seen at all. It is written without thinking, and without reading the original work. You can write whatever you want, and read the fan fiction directly, otherwise it will poison you.
Garbage, open the door for garbage, garbage is at home
The garbage is home. Garbage, garbage, garbage.
What you write is enough, right?
Is Mingyue Community in the HR alliance? Do you really dare to write that Planet Level 4 went to the God of War training camp just for a black god?
I don't know what the author wants to write!
I barely made it to Chapter 98, but I really have no intention of reading any more. I really want to write whatever I want, without any logic at all. If you don't want to write a fanfic, don't always feel guilty that you've robbed the protagonist of an opportunity! When writing fanfics, just write fanfics well. Don't ramble all the time. It's OK to bury the story, but don't bury it so deeply? The author's writing style is not good enough and he has to bury deep foreshadowing, which makes it look very awkward! For example, 'The plot of the genius battle has not even ended yet, and the foreshadowing of the Hunyuan Universe has begun.' Really rubbish! 🤐
The author is rough,
Can you not go to the five core departments? It would be great to have a system to practice on your own, then go to the outer battlefield to train, then go to the Ancestral God Sect, go to the Universe Overlord and then go to the Primordial Star. It would be great to practice and then go to the Universe Sea to explore. Everyone is tired of seeing the five core companies and so on. The key is how to retreat. I have basically gone through the fighting in a few strokes.
not good
First, why write about the eight gods? Normal swords, swords and the like can only be interesting. Or at the beginning, the novice gift pack can be passed down and it can be interesting to watch with krypton gold.
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Community(0)
Official(112)Scraped 11d ago
The words below are my copy of your original text, and the screenshot below is the original text of Devouring Starry Sky
Xu Yan took out the water bottle from his backpack and took a sip, and asked in confusion: "Brother Lu, why are there more monsters in these abandoned cities than in the wild? Logically speaking, shouldn't it be more suitable for them to survive in the wild?" "I know this." It was Du Hongyuan who answered Xu Yan. He smiled and said: "Scientists in the past have also studied this problem, and finally came to the conclusion that abandoned buildings are ready-made nests for monsters. Didn't you notice that in the building under our feet, many monster cubs were killed along the way?"
Tell a joke, the author has read the original work
The professional third-rate novelist is talking about the author himself. He probably stays in a small room in a studio with a simple document in his hand and writes tens of thousands of words a day.
You don't even understand your realm. Sometimes it improves and then falls back. You don't know what the hell it is. It's nonsense. It's rubbish novels. Those who time-travel are all trying to grab opportunities and give away women. It's really fucking rubbish.
Read the original work twice more before writing it, Liushuidiwen
What are you writing about? The A-level test is the easiest one to take when entering the training camp. B-level is more difficult than A-level. The original book asked Luo Feng to take the B-level test because there were no places. I can only give you one star after seeing this.
Relying on the defense, the more you go to the back, the more poisonous it becomes. It is about this way and that way and it is a transcendent universe. The writing is awesome, but the real combat power cannot be seen at all. It is written without thinking, and without reading the original work. You can write whatever you want, and read the fan fiction directly, otherwise it will poison you.
Garbage, open the door for garbage, garbage is at home
The garbage is home. Garbage, garbage, garbage.
What you write is enough, right?
Is Mingyue Community in the HR alliance? Do you really dare to write that Planet Level 4 went to the God of War training camp just for a black god?
I don't know what the author wants to write!
I barely made it to Chapter 98, but I really have no intention of reading any more. I really want to write whatever I want, without any logic at all. If you don't want to write a fanfic, don't always feel guilty that you've robbed the protagonist of an opportunity! When writing fanfics, just write fanfics well. Don't ramble all the time. It's OK to bury the story, but don't bury it so deeply? The author's writing style is not good enough and he has to bury deep foreshadowing, which makes it look very awkward! For example, 'The plot of the genius battle has not even ended yet, and the foreshadowing of the Hunyuan Universe has begun.' Really rubbish! 🤐
The author is rough,
Can you not go to the five core departments? It would be great to have a system to practice on your own, then go to the outer battlefield to train, then go to the Ancestral God Sect, go to the Universe Overlord and then go to the Primordial Star. It would be great to practice and then go to the Universe Sea to explore. Everyone is tired of seeing the five core companies and so on. The key is how to retreat. I have basically gone through the fighting in a few strokes.
not good
First, why write about the eight gods? Normal swords, swords and the like can only be interesting. Or at the beginning, the novice gift pack can be passed down and it can be interesting to watch with krypton gold.



















