Qin Dynasty Novelist

Qin Shi Mingyue is a work that I have always liked. I think this book written by the author is the best in fan fiction. I hope there will be no eunuchs, no interruptions, and more updates! 6 Recommendation votes are given away! Hold fist

After the protagonist turned 12, he slept with women like crazy and started a harem! Slipping away

The only thing that keeps me reading this book is the subject matter. Qin Shi Mingyue is just like when I read Qin Qin Ji, I couldn't put it down. But the author only has this advantage. The rest is too speechless. It's so wordless that it's written in classical Chinese. Some of the characters in it are disgusting. Now let's take a look at it: 1. Qin Wang Zheng. What a great emperor who unified the world for all eternity. He was written as a love story. He doted on a woman who had a grudge against him for killing his father and husband. He also gave the Black Dragon Order that could mobilize the Qin Dynasty to this woman and Jing Ke's son. I don't want to complain about this anymore. I have nothing but mental retardation. There is no way to describe this move... The second one is Gongsun Li, as well as the daughter of Yan Dan, the son of Jing Ke in Tianming, and the Xiaoqiang who can't be killed by Chu Nan Gong... Forget it, I can't stand it if I write it anymore. It's a pity that such a good subject... So if you can pay to watch it, don't think about it.

He repeatedly opposed the Qin State and was imprisoned. Seeing that Han Fei and Gai Nie were not killed, it was the favor of the Qin Dynasty. However, he refused to repent and concealed his identity when attacking the Wei State. One hundred thousand Wei soldiers formed an array to block the army. If the commander had not been cautious, the losses would have been considerable. He also agreed to cooperate with the remnants of Shu Mountain to break into Shu Mountain and destroy the seal to release the remaining spirit of Chi You. This kind of overt and covert opposition to the Qin State again and again will be speechless without killing him. Guigu Genie's face is always limited, because how much damage did Wei Zhuang do to the Qin State? Qin Fa, who continued to make him jump alive and emphasized again and again, was like a waste of paper. That's enough once or twice. How can we convince people if we continue to fight against Qin without killing him? Don't the other people who died against Qin's law die with their eyes in peace?

At the beginning, the protagonist was decisive in killing and strategizing quite well. Later, a remaining disciple of Guigu ignored the Heaven and Earth branch he established, and let him go just because he was a woman. Before the two sisters Shanrou assassinated him, they let him go. Haha, does the protagonist want to set an example and tell his opponents to use honey traps more often? There are many more than these, letting go of Jing Ke's woman, letting Han Fei go, the protagonist left so many enemies behind, and still wants to unify. Why did the world fall apart as soon as Qin Shihuang died? It was because he didn't kill the right person, and chose to divide the remaining countries, and chose to trap and kill hundreds of families.

Author, your book is very good in terms of "looking", but the content is too "verbose" and has a bit of a "classical Chinese" feel. Moreover, the male protagonist in this book... Has to go through a process to open a harem, and in the early stage, the male protagonist was unable to open a harem, but in the later stage " "Oh my god, it smells so good." When opening a harem, you need to have a process and have feelings for the heroines, otherwise you will feel like you are just lusting after their bodies... (I am giving you a five-star evaluation. We are not afraid that you will be proud, but that you will not change. I hope you can read my opinion)

First, the pig's feet are clearly time travellers. I don't see any changes to the original plot. Second, Zhao Ji's matter clearly had the opportunity to prevent the birth of her other two sons, which brought shame to the Qin family, but in the end he did not change it, making it seem like he himself does not have the blood of the Qin family. Third, has the protagonist become an immortal? It feels like playing a game, I don't care about anything, I don't care about anything Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. The purpose of reading fan fiction is to make up for my regrets, but this is the result?

The author has good literary skills and is full of classical Chinese articles, but what you are writing is a novel. The protagonist considers himself a novelist. The main purpose of the novel is to be easy to understand. If the author writes some classical Chinese articles about martial arts realm or fighting enemies, it will still appear competent. However, most of the whole novel is filled with dialogues in classical Chinese. When reading the plot of the novel, you still have to try to figure out what is being said. Too tired to watch. I admit that your plot is good and reasonable, but the main purpose of reading novels is to relax and have a good time. It's not about learning Chinese language and history. I'm so tired from watching😔. Thumbs up if I feel the same way.

Later on, the harem was opened. What was said before was not allowed, and the result was self-contradictory.

After entering Xianyang, the protagonist acted carelessly. He only cared about his own thoughts and ignored the overall situation. He killed whoever he wanted without caring about future development. Moreover, he had a grudge against the Qin State and did not seek revenge.