Three Kingdoms, Liu Feng, Shu Han Shangzhu Kingdom

You can tell from the title about the plot direction and style It's just that he traveled to Liu Feng and was trapped in Shangyong at the beginning. Outside, Cao Wei threatened Liu Bei and was suspicious, and inside there was a traitorous family ready to make a move. In the beginning, Meng Da, who was in trouble at home, was dispatched to rescue the second master personally. Of course, the conventional operation is to collect girls and shoot enemy generals. The writing style is just like that, it can tell the story clearly, but it can only tell the story clearly, not much exciting, not many details, and it is also a little cool and idealistic. What's commendable is that it's not abstract or complicated, it's relatively serious, the language is concise, and it's not procrastinating. Then, the development of the story becomes relatively monotonous. Liu Feng himself is like a living person among all the servants. One moment, Jingzhou was attacking Sun Quan, the next was the Northern Expedition to Yongliang, the next was Jiaozhou, the other was pacifying the Southern Barbarians, the other was the Western Regions, and the other was Hetao... The whole process was filled with internal suspicions that he was afraid of his superiority, but there was no choice but to let him go. Liu Feng saw through the enemy's various conspiracies and plots without any reason. Women of all kinds descend from the sky, business women, medical women, barbarian women, metaphysics women, useful and useful in various aspects. All kinds of ingenious schemes that do not focus on numerical values ​​but only on mechanics are thrown into the street. Liu Feng abstractly dealt with the follow-up, such as asking the nine clans to have fun, which caused internal controversy, and internally suppressed the controversy and rewarded him. During this period, except for Liu Guanzhang who was about to die of old age (and indeed died of old age one after another) who provided substantial help, everyone else was transformed into a 666 tool. Jiang Wan and others are all tools of internal fighting that hold him back, and Zhou Cang and others are all prerequisites. The protagonist of the plot mentions it when necessary, saying that he has secretly trained for many years to create a navy army. That's about it. The characterization is basically close to street stall literature and conspiracy theories, but it doesn't go astray so far and is not too entangled in it. The narrative focuses on Liu Feng himself. The rest, such as the foresight, the expansion of merchant land, the cultivation of gunpowder, and the elimination of aristocratic families, everyone has seen a lot, and they are all here, so I won't go into them. Saying all this is not a criticism. Because after reading the first two sentences of this book, you can tell that it belongs to the category of fast-food novels. It is good if the story can be told clearly. By this standard, this article is more than adequate. It is recommended to take a casual look at it without having too much expectations or being too demanding. If you see something that you are not interested in, just throw it away. After a while, just look at the catalog to see the follow-up development that interests you.

Pretending to be Guan Yu's son to talk about cooperation, you also made a political marriage in Guan Zi's name, promised hereditary succession in Guan Yu's name, and took the opportunity to seize Xiangyang. When the time comes for the Wei and Wu armies to join forces to attack Xiangyang, Liu Bei won't recognize it even if he knows that you promised him casually. How can the Barbarian King know that you lied to him? He would defect to Wu, but he would not be loyal to Shu for a daughter, and Soochow would not stay away from each other for a long time just because he killed a general, not to mention that he was killed by Liu Feng. Liu Feng also saved Guan Yu's family, and Guan Yu's daughter's attitude was also very unpleasant. There are also many scenes involving women, which is also a failure.

What is wrong in you is not one or two. The road conditions are still the same as those to Chengdu, but you are too stupid just to ride this horse. Moreover, you smoked a lot of things just a few days ago, and it seems that anti-inflammatory drugs are going to do something. You are still in it, and you promise this and that to yourself. It's not my ancient time, this is a big taboo. Let him and please wake up. You have been conquering Chang'an for many years, but you have been conquering Chang'an for seven or eight years. You have conquered Bingzhou, and you are still in Chengdu. Have you made a mistake? I don't know what Chang'an is, what's the point? Have to wait until 2. In 229, it was conquered for several eighty-nine years before it was moved to Chang'an. I said three or four years at most, but it turned out that I had to wait until you had conquered a large part of Binzhou Yunzhong, and then you took it down. Originally, we could have moved to Chang'an when we captured Tongguan, but this complete defense system was lost. Don't you know that the slogan of the Shuhan Group in history was to revive the Han Dynasty and the emperor's nine capitals, but in the end, you have been working on it for a long time and can't figure out these meanings? The time of Huang Zhong's death seems so ugly, and Huang Zhong was obviously waiting for Cao Cao to die after Guan Yu, what do you think? You have traveled through time, and you took out the anti-inflammatory drug, allicin, and Huang Zhong lost a few years of his life. After all, he is still the father-in-law of your protagonist Liu Feng. Adding the number of enemies killed first was so nonsense that Cao Ren's thousands of people were suddenly reduced to 1,000. As a result, thousands more people showed up behind me. What does that mean? And for every historical record you write, you use vernacular language. Shouldn't these and other kinds of things be based on classical Chinese? He didn't feel this way, he didn't feel immersed at all.

The writing is quite good. It's not easy to have this kind of outline and plot in this age of AI metabolism. Keep up the good work😄

I think it's okay, but the writing is like a running account

Updates are slow. Updates are slow and interrupted. . . . Short update

This can really be made into a TV series. The thinking is clear. Come on.

It's written like a running account, and there's no sense of immersion in reading at all.

Huang Zhong died now? Didn't he die during the Battle of Yiling?

It's more to my liking now. I looked through all the major apps before I found your book. I hope there won't be any failures in the follow-up, and more updates will be added! One update a day is a bit slow