Start with Awakening Bluesilver Grass

Come on, come on, come on, come on＾0＾~

Wherever you travel, you start making guns, making guns, making guns. It's annoying to watch. In another world, when you play with guns and black powder, they all end up in the trash. Really annoying.

Two rubbish martial souls, if you talk about strategy and mortal flow, they might still be interesting to watch, but when it comes to plug-ins, there are all kinds of cheats, and they are basically nothing interesting.

I really don't understand why the protagonist wants to change the world in more than ten episodes? I am obviously a little guy, but I still harbor the dream of being a saint. I really understand how such people survive in a fantasy world. To briefly evaluate this protagonist, he is a daydream in a fantasy world, arrogant and murderous. It was simply more disgusting than Tang San.

Keep it for now, wait until it gets fatter and then take a look. 10

When I saw it on the shelves, I didn't have much impression. In a different world where cultivation is the main focus, what kind of firearms and weapons do you want? I know it's fantasy floor tiles, but if you're strong enough, you won't be able to do it well? And it's too long! When I read a Douluo fanfic, I wanted to see the main character making guns and improving weapons every day? It is a unique growth system Martial spirits, soul rings, soul bones, soul skills, gods. The five cores of Douluo Continent Refining medicine and making weapons are all embellishments. Your article is too big! It's good to improve and evolve the blue silver grass through the soul beast. As a result, we started talking about pills, weapons, and one or two things. There was too much nonsense! ! Keep describing. I know that thermal weapons are powerful, but out of the context of Douluo's original theme, it's boring.

What I wrote in the beginning was okay, but it turned out that I was worried about the country and the people when it was so rubbish at more than ten levels. When I looked at the setting of this book, I could pretend that I hadn't seen it. But it turned out that it became more and more complicated later on. A memory is unlocked every ten levels. Is it possible to write so many things? What is the focus of a hodgepodge? I must have been confused for a long time. The latter part is all about alchemy formations and exercises. The most disgusting thing is that they also use thermal weapons and firearms. Most of them are like these. I just skipped and selectively ignored them. They will poison me to death The author should figure out what the focus is before writing the book, and don't add so many things and make it so complicated. Things from other worlds are already very poisonous when they appear in Douluo. If you add so many things, you can just directly reward the cultivation of the prehistoric world in the system and then just do it in seconds. It's so laborious.

Since you all know that Yin and Yang generate the Five Elements, and the Five Elements generate all things. Then why don't you use the five elements to create and restrain each other to add soul rings? Also, the writing is too messy. I didn't want to read it anymore after reaching the tenth chapter. There is a good fanfic that uses the five elements to create and restrain each other to add soul rings.

Just finish this book. Then revise the book again. Get rid of the memory that was added before the soul power reached level 10. Don't write these memories for you. You add all these memories into it and it becomes a mess. Just write pure Douluo writing and don't add other messy things to it. I suggest you stop writing. Waste of time. 100% On the street. The book will be finished immediately, revised, and put on the shelf again. This is a fine book.

It's not bad, I can't give it full marks. Gong Teng's development of Blue Silver Grass is still great.