
Martial Arts Immortality: Starting from the Spiritual Beast Map
by Longbaoyu
About This Novel
"In the ninth year of Yuanxi, there was a severe drought in Yingzhou, and the autumn harvest was only 20 to 30%. The winter was extremely cold, and many people and animals froze to death." Zhao Lin, an office worker, traveled through troubled times and became an ordinary farm boy. Relying on the spirit animal map that can absorb the souls of alien beasts, he awakened the power of a bear and the speed of a leopard... Step by step on the road to longevity in martial arts. A new book has been released, "I Used My Spiritual Body to Cultivate Sainthood", and has been signed. I hope everyone will support and collect it. Thank you.
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Official(56)Scraped 6d ago
The goal is immortality. He has just left the novice village with more than 300 chapters and is still practicing the third level of Qi Maka Baka. This author is a talent. Can he reach the foundation building level with a thousand chapters? Can three thousand chapters lead to golden eggs? Can thirty thousand chapters lead to immortality? If the immortal cannot live forever. Does it require 300,000 chapters? I have to mention a bunch of relevant and unrelated things, and then push it aside and write it again when things come up. There are all kinds of forced plot killings, either my mother is being targeted, or my hometown is being targeted. With your ability as a water chapter, do you need to forcefully arrange these plots?
Changes are not good
Later, after entering Tianxuan Continent, the spirit beast map changed into a spiritual cultivation map. It was really stupid. I didn't want to read it immediately. The fun was greatly reduced, and I felt that I had become too stupid.
I asked you, can you please give me more information?
Who can see enough of this? Don't let the software next door think that we are looking down on you, here are four more chapters, six chapters every day!
It should be a crime-solving novel, not Gao Wu
Originally, Gao Wu was very good, but you insisted on the main character being a detective to solve the case. I was confused when I read it. I thought it was an over-plot... Who knew that solving the case took more than ten chapters and it was so detailed that it felt like it was off-topic? There is an introduction, but the introduction is quite vague. To be honest, it would be much more reasonable to just set it from the beginning that only exotic beasts can be included. Also, the method of finding people with the beard is too awesome, right? It feels like you are more powerful than the official F. Can you find out what happened a few months ago? If there is such a powerful force, it shouldn't be so small, right? Not to mention that the leader is just a blood mirror and not the overlord of one party? It feels a bit forced. The plot is a bit forced. The main character is a force mirror, can he use a gas mirror, or is he a master of air mirror? It's a bit of a stretch. Especially in the back, the master said that even the blood mirror may not necessarily be able to hold the air mirror. It feels special. It feels a bit forcibly weakening the blood mirror. Also, the protagonist's system feels really average. It absorbs 3, so echo positioning seems to be useful. The rest is strong. There is no bonus in training. It's a bit boring to rely on the protagonist's practice. Next time, really don't write about solving the case. Let me take this plot away.
No wonder no one is reading it. I am going off topic as I write.
I went to work on the case as soon as I wrote it. I was speechless when I looked at it. It went off topic and the plot twists were abrupt and forced to lower my IQ. When it comes to writing plots, the writing is really poor.
I think it would be more appropriate to change the golden finger to the ability to absorb animal souls. As you say in your book, the specialty of dogs is their sense of smell. The sense of smell of pigs is several times stronger than that of dogs. Can that still be considered the specialty of dogs? As you say in your book, you have to be the best among animals to be considered a specialty. Then pigs have a better sense of smell than dogs. Why do they get the sense of smell by absorbing the animal soul of a dog? Domestic pigs that have not been bred by humans do not grow meat quickly. As for lazy pigs that are kept in captivity by humans and have no other activities except eating, of course they can only sleep. So you subjectively think that the specialty of pigs is laziness or fattening? Its sense of smell is obviously several times better than that of a dog, and it is also afraid of absorbing pig souls. I am really speechless.
Did you make a mistake in just one more chapter? !
I have plenty of money, so update quickly.
He's too verbose, and his realm improves so slowly, he would have died long ago.
I'm afraid my grandson won't be able to wait until the author finishes it.
I guess it won't be possible to start writing Golden Elixir without 5000 chapters.
The logic is confusing, it's completely like Schrödinger's cat. You have everything you need, and you don't have it if you don't. No matter how many holes you dig, you won't bury it.
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Official(56)Scraped 6d ago
The goal is immortality. He has just left the novice village with more than 300 chapters and is still practicing the third level of Qi Maka Baka. This author is a talent. Can he reach the foundation building level with a thousand chapters? Can three thousand chapters lead to golden eggs? Can thirty thousand chapters lead to immortality? If the immortal cannot live forever. Does it require 300,000 chapters? I have to mention a bunch of relevant and unrelated things, and then push it aside and write it again when things come up. There are all kinds of forced plot killings, either my mother is being targeted, or my hometown is being targeted. With your ability as a water chapter, do you need to forcefully arrange these plots?
Changes are not good
Later, after entering Tianxuan Continent, the spirit beast map changed into a spiritual cultivation map. It was really stupid. I didn't want to read it immediately. The fun was greatly reduced, and I felt that I had become too stupid.
I asked you, can you please give me more information?
Who can see enough of this? Don't let the software next door think that we are looking down on you, here are four more chapters, six chapters every day!
It should be a crime-solving novel, not Gao Wu
Originally, Gao Wu was very good, but you insisted on the main character being a detective to solve the case. I was confused when I read it. I thought it was an over-plot... Who knew that solving the case took more than ten chapters and it was so detailed that it felt like it was off-topic? There is an introduction, but the introduction is quite vague. To be honest, it would be much more reasonable to just set it from the beginning that only exotic beasts can be included. Also, the method of finding people with the beard is too awesome, right? It feels like you are more powerful than the official F. Can you find out what happened a few months ago? If there is such a powerful force, it shouldn't be so small, right? Not to mention that the leader is just a blood mirror and not the overlord of one party? It feels a bit forced. The plot is a bit forced. The main character is a force mirror, can he use a gas mirror, or is he a master of air mirror? It's a bit of a stretch. Especially in the back, the master said that even the blood mirror may not necessarily be able to hold the air mirror. It feels special. It feels a bit forcibly weakening the blood mirror. Also, the protagonist's system feels really average. It absorbs 3, so echo positioning seems to be useful. The rest is strong. There is no bonus in training. It's a bit boring to rely on the protagonist's practice. Next time, really don't write about solving the case. Let me take this plot away.
No wonder no one is reading it. I am going off topic as I write.
I went to work on the case as soon as I wrote it. I was speechless when I looked at it. It went off topic and the plot twists were abrupt and forced to lower my IQ. When it comes to writing plots, the writing is really poor.
I think it would be more appropriate to change the golden finger to the ability to absorb animal souls. As you say in your book, the specialty of dogs is their sense of smell. The sense of smell of pigs is several times stronger than that of dogs. Can that still be considered the specialty of dogs? As you say in your book, you have to be the best among animals to be considered a specialty. Then pigs have a better sense of smell than dogs. Why do they get the sense of smell by absorbing the animal soul of a dog? Domestic pigs that have not been bred by humans do not grow meat quickly. As for lazy pigs that are kept in captivity by humans and have no other activities except eating, of course they can only sleep. So you subjectively think that the specialty of pigs is laziness or fattening? Its sense of smell is obviously several times better than that of a dog, and it is also afraid of absorbing pig souls. I am really speechless.
Did you make a mistake in just one more chapter? !
I have plenty of money, so update quickly.
He's too verbose, and his realm improves so slowly, he would have died long ago.
I'm afraid my grandson won't be able to wait until the author finishes it.
I guess it won't be possible to start writing Golden Elixir without 5000 chapters.
The logic is confusing, it's completely like Schrödinger's cat. You have everything you need, and you don't have it if you don't. No matter how many holes you dig, you won't bury it.













