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I think this book is good to read, do you have any comments? 1. Wonderful, good-looking, 2. I don't think it works (please give your opinion)

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I've only read a few chapters, so I don't know what to expect next. Out of politeness and because it is a subject I like, I gave it 5 stars. As far as the first few chapters are concerned, the author should be a newcomer, and his writing style is very immature, with a lot of nonsense and no clear ideas. Let me say it first, what I write is not much better, so don't come to criticize me. Of course, there are also things that the author does well, and this is also an advantage that most new authors have, that is, they can read comments, read this chapter, and reply. This is very important for new authors. It is recommended that other readers also raise their opinions with the author. After all, he might ignore you if he gets popular (funny). Also, in the first few chapters, there is nothing poisonous, at least nothing that I think is poisonous. As a student, I don't have money to read novels, so most of them are pirated copies. But based on my 10 years of experience (yes, 10 years), this novel is very likely to become popular if the author improves his writing skills. A big fire is not guaranteed, a small fire is still possible. It is also recommended that authors read more works of other people and work hard to improve their writing skills. After all, the author's writing style still has a great impact on the reader's viewing experience. Although I have read the novel for so long, this is the first time I have commented on a novel like this. I usually read it silently (I feel shameless when reading pirated copies), but I really like this novel. I hope that the following chapters will not disappoint me, and I also hope that the author will become better and better.

Today I went to the hospital for a physical examination to check my stool. I thought the little nurse was pretty, so I thought of teasing her. I ran to the door and bought a roasted sweet potato, kneaded it into puree and put it in the stool box. The nurse said it was too much and asked to deal with it. I said, no need to bother, and I ate it with my hands. The little nurse didn't even have time to take off the mask and vomited on the spot. The person next to me: "Brother, this box is yours."

Keep at it, even though I haven't written a book, I know the ups and downs in it, so updates can't be salty!

Lao Wang called his wife, but heard the sound of a man breathing rapidly. Lao Wang said angrily: Who are you? Where is my wife? Then the man said: I was grabbing the phone, and your wife was chasing me. Let's not talk anymore. Your wife sped up~

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It's just that the main character is too mean. I don't like it. I'll delete the book and see you later! 👋

If you don't write about the harem in this kind of writing, I will cry while reading it to you.