I Am Not a Cheater If I Work Hard

There is nothing wrong with the book's purpose and systematic background. But there are also some problems. The most fatal problem is the description. The author narrates too much in his writing! At first I thought the author had a lot of volume in each chapter. . . But when I read it later, I realized that there was a lot of content, but there was no big breakthrough in the plot. Moreover, when I read this novel, I always felt that there could be a lot of large content, but it didn't matter. It can be streamlined, streamlined and streamlined again! To put it simply, who you are next to affects the progress of your plot! The author did not control the degree of narration well, resulting in too much narration, and the plot that really needs to be described in words is always mentioned in one stroke! To give a few examples, when the author wrote that the protagonist went to Julu City to kill wild beasts after ten years of silence, there was very little description of the protagonist killing wild beasts! There are few descriptions of fighting! There is no communication between the protagonist and other Dongtian disciples! And the focus of this chapter should be "the protagonist competes with other Dongtian disciples and stands out from them" scenes, and there is no scene! The scene where the most important protagonist defeats the other Dongtian genius disciples in a one-on-three battle is even mentioned in a single narration! All we can see are various narrations, narrations and narrations. All are narrations written by the author. Another point is when the protagonist is taken by the senior deacon to be promoted to true successor. The main description can be about the praise and praise of the protagonist by his disciples and elders, the heroic deeds of the protagonist, and the various emotions of the protagonist's friends. This is enough. The author also wrote this, but the problem is that there are all kinds of redundant narrations that cause the protagonist to have 2 chapters between being taken away by the butler and actually appearing. There can be narration, but it must be based on the plot! Don't let the narration take up too much content, otherwise it will feel tiring and affect the viewing experience. If you look closely at the narration, you will find that the narration content is not superfluous and has its own reason. All the author has to do is streamline. Sometimes a dozen lines of narration can be reduced to one sentence.

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The protagonist is not the kind who just adds points to upgrade without thinking after having the system, but goes to his own limit every step of the way and implements it in a planned way. The golden finger is not very strong, but has an online IQ, which is very good! ! Come on, the author, update more every day! ! !

This book should be pretty good. Why do people give it such a low rating? Except for the fact that the chapters are a bit short now, I think this book is quite good!

After reading dozens of chapters, although the protagonist's character seems pretty good up to this point, can you please stop talking about your hard work and add some solid foundations to do what you want? It's so annoying. If you have a cheating device, you will improve quickly. You may have to mention a few sentences every once in a while. It is really fake. No reader will know that you cheated. But you still think that you are a genius and your improvement is slow. To be honest, you are nothing without that cheating device. Just adjust your mentality. So thick-skinned.

Since boxing is the key point, why don't you top it up? After your boxing skills are perfected, other things won't be easier to improve. I don't understand why this is the most important thing. I feel like my brain is sick. Since it is a cool article, it has to be cool. After all, masochism is not this style.

I haven't read the book, so come here and get some experience.

If you are not of my race, your heart must be different What Wei Long did made my blood boil. It's a bit watery in the early stages, but it looks great in the middle and late stages.