
Fengshen: is There a Calamity to Immortality? Killing a Life and Turning it into a Calamity!
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New book: "I am practicing the Shushan method in Fengshen" ------------------ This is a world of gods that has undergone tremendous changes... What do you think of Yang Ren: Eyes in his hands, hands in his eyes, his body dies and his spirit disappears, and his true spirit is on the list. ? The actual Yang Ren: three heads and six arms, the eyes of the god of fire, turning life into disaster, and the body becoming a saint! A hundred years ago, the Immortal of the Two Sects of Chanjie who failed to kill the Three Corpses became poisonous and his practice became a disaster. Three years before Emperor Xin succeeded to the throne, the immortals appeared one after another in the rain, and in the south of Chaoge City, the young man picked up his luggage and searched for the way on a snowy night. Finally, he became a disciple of the True Monarch of Qingxu Morality in Ziyang Cave in Qingfeng Mountain. He relied on his magical power to eliminate poisonous disasters and destroy evil spirits, and gradually achieved superior results. ... Yuanshi Tianzun: "A good disciple can prosper for eternity." Taoist Zhunti: "How can Western religion flourish in this way?" Qingxu Daodezhenjun: "How can you cause trouble if you are so evil?" Yuxu's third-generation disciple: "Elder brother has great magical powers and boundless magic power!" The God of Heaven: "Don't come over!" A certain stone monkey said: "The great Immortal Technique taught by the teacher lacks killing power. What the Immortal in the Dream taught is the superior method. Hey, monster, eat my Five Fires and Seven Birds Fan!" ... This book is also called: "Black Myth: Conferring Gods". ---------------------- Old book: "Fengshen: I am not the True Immortal of Fortune", contains no water content, and the short story ends normally.
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Official(17)Scraped 6d ago
Before the Warring States Period, neither good nor evil regarded savages as human beings, and they were not as good as beasts.
If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them.
The writing is fine, what I read above is okay, and the logic is basically okay. Long Ji's part is disgusting. Long Ji goes from calculating the protagonist to being tsundere and finally turns into the protagonist's licking dog inexplicably. The protagonist says from beginning to end that he is focused on the road and cannot be tempted just because of what Long Ji gives. In the end, he says that as long as Long Ji gives more resources, he can barely make a couple with her. . . It's a good feeling, don't you think? It's better to meet the sex directly and have simple motives. I can only say that I chose the most unflattering persona of a licking dog and a steely straight man. . Slipping away
The author's writing is very good. Please update it! Please update it!
The writing is not very good, there are quite a lot of settings, and the content is even more confusing.
The time traveler is a variable and can still worship Shuntian's teachings
It's pretty, and the back part is quite interesting.
After reading a few chapters, my head hurts from reading the settings.
Fengshen Journey to the West should be written according to the popular Honghuang style. The terminology settings of the original version make my head hurt.
Can see
The structure is okay, but the writing style is poor. I deliberately wrote it in a retro style, but there are problems with fragmentation and expression. Either the language is not fluent or it is wordy and repetitive, and it is not good at writing daily life.
Wrapped in the skin of Fengshen, the content is still the same as that of the Great Desolate Flow... Isn't there a pure Fengshen or Journey to the West flow...
Don't know exactly what to write? ? ? It's just different from ordinary writing
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Official(17)Scraped 6d ago
Before the Warring States Period, neither good nor evil regarded savages as human beings, and they were not as good as beasts.
If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them.
The writing is fine, what I read above is okay, and the logic is basically okay. Long Ji's part is disgusting. Long Ji goes from calculating the protagonist to being tsundere and finally turns into the protagonist's licking dog inexplicably. The protagonist says from beginning to end that he is focused on the road and cannot be tempted just because of what Long Ji gives. In the end, he says that as long as Long Ji gives more resources, he can barely make a couple with her. . . It's a good feeling, don't you think? It's better to meet the sex directly and have simple motives. I can only say that I chose the most unflattering persona of a licking dog and a steely straight man. . Slipping away
The author's writing is very good. Please update it! Please update it!
The writing is not very good, there are quite a lot of settings, and the content is even more confusing.
The time traveler is a variable and can still worship Shuntian's teachings
It's pretty, and the back part is quite interesting.
After reading a few chapters, my head hurts from reading the settings.
Fengshen Journey to the West should be written according to the popular Honghuang style. The terminology settings of the original version make my head hurt.
Can see
The structure is okay, but the writing style is poor. I deliberately wrote it in a retro style, but there are problems with fragmentation and expression. Either the language is not fluent or it is wordy and repetitive, and it is not good at writing daily life.
Wrapped in the skin of Fengshen, the content is still the same as that of the Great Desolate Flow... Isn't there a pure Fengshen or Journey to the West flow...
Don't know exactly what to write? ? ? It's just different from ordinary writing













