
Perfect: Unbelievable Understanding, Creating Invincible Methods at the Beginning
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New book: "Shading the Sky: My Villain Hua Yunfei Kills All the Heavens" Opening his eyes again, Shi Xuan awakened to his heaven-defying understanding, only to find that he had been transplanted with Shi Yi's Supreme Bone with Double Eyes. Skynet is restored, retribution is unhappy! Am I avenging Shi Hao? Since then, I have been on a roll. [During the transplant, you were discovered by Shi Yi's mother. You only said one word: bury. Since you learned the Earth Escape 'Earth River', you almost buried Shi Yi directly in the ground with quicksand! ] [When you were suffering from the pain of medicinal bathing, you actually created the Taishang Body Tempering Method, which included refining blood, forging bones, changing tendons, and cleansing marrow. After completing the strongest physical body, in a quarter of an hour, he reached the extreme state of moving blood! ] [In your spare time, watch the duel between countless divine birds. The magic skills are dazzling. If you have some enlightenment in your heart, you can create the sky-swallowing chaos skill! ] [You created the Immortal Court, passed down the Immortal Dharma, and led all the people in the world to become immortals. You showed the appearance of cultivating immortals in human beings, used the inspiration of the world as food, and created the divine and demonic arts that transcend the heavens and the earth! ] You drive Contempt of the King. Singing the song of Biwang. Summon King Bi's true form. Command God, rule over the world, reincarnation is irreversible, and you will be the only one for eternity!
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Official(56)Scraped 9d ago
Two pages a day, one page requires 2,000 words, 4,000 words a day. This is relatively stable. What is the talent of the protagonist? Forced fusion, this feeling is still not as good as innate. I think you should write like this, write about an ordinary first generation who is reborn in the upper world. In the end, with the advantage of his own memory and the advantage of a time traveler, he forcibly seizes opportunities and seizes the heroine. Finally, it is intercepted from the trilogy that runs through the trilogy, destroying the strange plateau and finally becoming a priest. However, you are still considered normal. There are some people who are very abnormal, such as having many children and being blessed, and other messy things. You are still considered very normal. I think you can go back to the world and become a first-generation person with no system and the memory of a time traveler. Finally, you can create a chaotic body in a perfect world. With a physique like this in the Ancient Era, it is not as good as double pupils, but it is at least the top first generation. It should be no problem to become a true immortal. Finally, Nunu works hard to become the Immortal King. I think the protagonist rises later than the desolate world because No. 10 Of the Ancient Era is the only protagonist, but no matter how it is written. In the end, the main goal is to destroy the strange plateau. What you want to see in a perfect fanfic is the kind of competition between geniuses, the kind of realms that cross extreme realms, the fusion of realms, the creation of new laws, and some messy things anyway. The most important atmosphere of the perfect world is the atmosphere of the last issue, the atmosphere of old friends, beauties, and relatives leaving one after another. Embodying the cruelty of the dark war, writing to the end, finally destroying the ultimate boss, the strange plateau, and having a happy reunion in the future. This is the ending of most novels. However, how to write it depends on you as the author. It depends on the author's whims. Don't come up with some nonsense about having many children and many blessings. I think the biggest advantage of the time traveler is that the memory can know a lot of opportunities in advance. Well, how to write it depends on the protagonist himself. I summarized it from reading Perfect World and the same paper. Nowadays, perfect fanfics are in a mess. Your book seems to be quite serious. Just don't be too cheap. There must be a heroine. The popularity will drop by half. The heroine depends on the author. However, Yunxi must be reserved for No. 10. You can grab anything else, but don't think about it. Otherwise, if Little Shitou cannot be born, it will be fine even if you give No. 10 A heroine. This must not be touched. Okay, having said that, it depends on how the author writes it.
To avenge Shi Hao? Shi Ziling still has to thank the protagonist? What kind of brain circuit is it? It's like your one million was robbed by a relative, and then that relative was robbed by another relative. If you don't thank that relative, you will only feel that you are the same. Everything has to be reckoned with. If you robbed Shi Yi's eye bone and returned it to Shi Hao, the couple and the future Shi Hao will be grateful. You dug out Shi Yi's eye and took Shi Hao's bone. The protagonist's behavior is like a mantis stalking a cicada and an oriole behind. This offends both parties.
Leave one Huo Ling'er for Shi Wu and keep the rest.
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Official(56)Scraped 9d ago
Two pages a day, one page requires 2,000 words, 4,000 words a day. This is relatively stable. What is the talent of the protagonist? Forced fusion, this feeling is still not as good as innate. I think you should write like this, write about an ordinary first generation who is reborn in the upper world. In the end, with the advantage of his own memory and the advantage of a time traveler, he forcibly seizes opportunities and seizes the heroine. Finally, it is intercepted from the trilogy that runs through the trilogy, destroying the strange plateau and finally becoming a priest. However, you are still considered normal. There are some people who are very abnormal, such as having many children and being blessed, and other messy things. You are still considered very normal. I think you can go back to the world and become a first-generation person with no system and the memory of a time traveler. Finally, you can create a chaotic body in a perfect world. With a physique like this in the Ancient Era, it is not as good as double pupils, but it is at least the top first generation. It should be no problem to become a true immortal. Finally, Nunu works hard to become the Immortal King. I think the protagonist rises later than the desolate world because No. 10 Of the Ancient Era is the only protagonist, but no matter how it is written. In the end, the main goal is to destroy the strange plateau. What you want to see in a perfect fanfic is the kind of competition between geniuses, the kind of realms that cross extreme realms, the fusion of realms, the creation of new laws, and some messy things anyway. The most important atmosphere of the perfect world is the atmosphere of the last issue, the atmosphere of old friends, beauties, and relatives leaving one after another. Embodying the cruelty of the dark war, writing to the end, finally destroying the ultimate boss, the strange plateau, and having a happy reunion in the future. This is the ending of most novels. However, how to write it depends on you as the author. It depends on the author's whims. Don't come up with some nonsense about having many children and many blessings. I think the biggest advantage of the time traveler is that the memory can know a lot of opportunities in advance. Well, how to write it depends on the protagonist himself. I summarized it from reading Perfect World and the same paper. Nowadays, perfect fanfics are in a mess. Your book seems to be quite serious. Just don't be too cheap. There must be a heroine. The popularity will drop by half. The heroine depends on the author. However, Yunxi must be reserved for No. 10. You can grab anything else, but don't think about it. Otherwise, if Little Shitou cannot be born, it will be fine even if you give No. 10 A heroine. This must not be touched. Okay, having said that, it depends on how the author writes it.
To avenge Shi Hao? Shi Ziling still has to thank the protagonist? What kind of brain circuit is it? It's like your one million was robbed by a relative, and then that relative was robbed by another relative. If you don't thank that relative, you will only feel that you are the same. Everything has to be reckoned with. If you robbed Shi Yi's eye bone and returned it to Shi Hao, the couple and the future Shi Hao will be grateful. You dug out Shi Yi's eye and took Shi Hao's bone. The protagonist's behavior is like a mantis stalking a cicada and an oriole behind. This offends both parties.
Leave one Huo Ling'er for Shi Wu and keep the rest.































