Immortal and Transformed into a Mortal, I Will Become a Saint in the World of Mortals

The first volume was really interesting to read, but the second volume started to enter the ordinary process of cultivating immortals again, which was a bit boring. At first I thought this book was about seeking the Tao, one by one, and then doing something for heaven and earth, and finally realizing the Tao and achieving transcendence. Unfortunately, practicing to a quasi-sage and then practicing it all over again is a bit putting the cart before the horse.

So far, it's pretty good, especially the first volume. However, there are still some issues that need to be refined, such as the first volume of Mortal Transformation. Since you are transforming into a mortal, you should enter the mortal world, and you should not use magic power at will (it is good to refer to Mortals and Immortals Reverse Transformation into Mortals). The cause and effect relationship should be dealt with before or after transforming into mortals, and pay attention to dependent origin and dependent cessation. There are also insights, which should be the most profound after you become mortal. If you feel something every now and then, and then time passes by, it would be better to write about your respective lives after separation (it is a bit unclear whether it is the transformation of the mortal world or the experience of the mortal world). There are still some typos, so just check them carefully.