Immortal and Transformed into a Mortal, I Will Become a Saint in the World of Mortals

So far, it's pretty good, especially the first volume. However, there are still some issues that need to be refined, such as the first volume of Mortal Transformation. Since you are transforming into a mortal, you should enter the mortal world, and you should not use magic power at will (it is good to refer to Mortals and Immortals Reverse Transformation into Mortals). The cause and effect relationship should be dealt with before or after transforming into mortals, and pay attention to dependent origin and dependent cessation. There are also insights, which should be the most profound after you become mortal. If you feel something every now and then, and then time passes by, it would be better to write about your respective lives after separation (it is a bit unclear whether it is the transformation of the mortal world or the experience of the mortal world). There are still some typos, so just check them carefully.