Lord of the Stars

This article is very well written and touching. The author has figured out the emotions, movements, and voices very well. Although the text is very long, it would be boring if it were written simply. So this article is really, really great!

After reading the introduction, this book completely caught my attention. I clicked on it and read a few chapters! The introduction is so great and the content really didn't disappoint me. I really love it!

I read it three times before I got into it. The more I read, the more interesting it becomes. I feel that the setting of this book is very powerful. This book is definitely poison for Taoist friends who are used to fast food or refreshing articles, but it is definitely a good food for old bookworms with a tricky taste. Five-star praise, my fairy grass, highly recommended.

It's a pity that the book "The Netherworld Fairy Road" is not popular. The plot development of that book is really excellent, the characterization is also average, and the writing is excellent. The lack of popularity may be due to some political factors. Well, to say it is simple is a bit inappropriate for children, which is really helpless!

The author's literary skills are very good, and he should be top-notch among online writers. Only three or five people who have read online articles have this skill. But many people will feel that this book, Lord of the Stars, is a good book, but they can't stand it. There are too many descriptions and too many details, and the plot progresses slowly. Format theory is a very interesting idea, but many readers may find it unbearable to describe it in such a large amount of space. Many online novel writers do not have very good literary skills, but they are familiar with the rhythm of the plot to build up the plot until it explodes, thus touching the reader's excitement. The novels written in this way may not necessarily be highly rated after reading them, but they can always attract many people to continue reading. With the current story rhythm of this book, I am afraid it can only attract a relatively small number of readers in the online literature circle. It is indeed difficult to achieve both the expression of connotation and the "coolness" of the plot, but it should still be possible to reconcile. I hope the author can make greater progress. Feelings after reading chapters 0 to 263.

I don't understand the main plot, plot development or even the protagonist of this book. The writing is so confusing, it's been like this from the beginning, and it makes my head hurt, so I'd better slip away and say goodbye.

I don't understand what is being said. I won't believe the comments anymore. I have to trust you.

I don't know what Xi means. Anyway, I don't understand it. Does anyone understand it?

I have read more than two hundred chapters, and there is currently no clear cultivation system. I have to say that the author's writing is good, but the article is too procrastinating and describes too many plots. A lot of it is nonsense. Of course, this is because the author did not clearly describe the world view and cultivation system in the front. The result is that everything involving these issues requires repeated explanations, commonly known as "filling in the holes." This is the reason why this book is not attractive. The popular science suddenly starts during the war and is too off-line. As a reader, you cannot be immersed in the book at all. Also, the protagonist's abilities are inexplicable and the feeling of fragmentation is very strong. The spirit is inexplicably strong, but the protagonist is a novice and doesn't understand cultivation at all. From the very beginning, I encountered all kinds of big things, but I relied on the halo of the protagonist to hold on and it was fine. Normally, as soon as I enter the practice environment, I should absorb a lot of information to supplement and improve my practice system. But the author started to make things happen. One thing followed another, and the pace was inexplicably fast. However, this fast pace gave people the feeling of inexplicable drag. Do you want the protagonist to remain a novice? I would like to give a piece of advice to newcomers, either read carefully every word without missing a word, or browse quickly. After all, there is so much nonsense and it is too offline.

The settings are very complicated and sufficient. Very real feeling The writing style is very good, unlike online articles, the dialogues of the characters, the details of the actions, and various foreshadowings are well handled, and the plot is very attractive. I feel like it can be made into a movie. As far as this novel is concerned, the audio-visual combination will be much better than just reading a book. The only drawback is that it can be tiring to read and the writing style is difficult to improve (to be honest, the content and setting of this book are really complicated) But I hope the author can make some adjustments. If nothing else, it would be better to just divide a paragraph into two or three paragraphs, because there are many small details between the lines in the novel, which are very important to the writing. If it is too long, readers will easily ignore it and then become confused and have to go back and read it, which makes it very tiring. So it is very important to speak in a simple way. As a bookworm for 10 years, I couldn't stand reading seventy or eighty chapters in one go.