Under One Person: My Inner Scene Connects All Realms!

Your settings include system cheats on Wanjie. This is understandable and I quite like it. But you still have to learn Baijiayi, and then teach you the secrets in a martial arts competition. The secrets of these sects can be passed on so easily. It's a bit too taken for granted, and I don't like this aspect very much. Why don't you say that cheating can make this system stronger? .

Why are people willing to teach you if you have eaten from hundreds of families? Just because you are the protagonist? Isn't it enough to have interior scenes?

What should I say? You should write about traveling through the heavens and practicing world by world. The author's writing style is very good and very attractive. But what should I say? I'm off topic. The world of one person is not that high. The world cannot support it. It is too high a level. It can be said that it is already at the critical point of the end of the Dharma! Just like the old Heavenly Master, he talks about how great he is, but in fact, to put it bluntly, it is equivalent to half a step of building a base, and it still cannot collapse! To put it bluntly, the world can no longer support you. If you ascend, the world will kick you out. But if you are not strong enough to leave the world, you will die. If you don't ascend, you will be stuck here. You cannot use your full strength. If you use your full strength, the world will collapse faster, and the world may also kick you out.

Personally, I think the writing is very good, but, is the protagonist so awesome? Some thousand-year or two-thousand-year-old problems have not been solved, but the protagonist has solved them? When writing about a person's urban practice, it should be strong, but not too big. It cannot be the same as fantasy, it is easy to substitute it into reality, and then you can solve the problem that has been unsolved for thousands of years. You keep saying that the world is deep for one person. How can I put it this way? It's very well written, just this little problem.

Putting the cart before the horse, there are more than 200 chapters. Do you still remember that you are writing fan fiction? In fact, to be honest, the writing is not bad, and the various ideas are very good. In this case, why not write an imaginary one? Isn't it enough to imitate one person's world view? The writing and ideas are good, but it feels like a fraud. There are more than 200 chapters, and the plot of one person has not yet begun. Isn't this selling dog meat with a sheep's head? I came here because of the words "Under One Person". I saw that the plot of the latest chapter has not started yet, but the protagonist is about to be invincible. And this combat power is also very strange. The protagonist keeps winning anyway, but the position of the combat power is unclear. It seems that he can win against anyone, but has the protagonist developed for a year? Overall, if this was a fiction, I would definitely give it a five-star rating, but this is a fanfic, so it's a bit of a put the cart before the horse, but the flaws don't hide the flaws, and the writing and ideas are pretty good.

The protagonist's seniority is so high, it can be seen that everyone has to call me "senpai". In real life, a forty or fifty-year-old man would call me grandpa. This is seniority, and I have to agree. I feel that the protagonist's seniority is of no use. Among the older generation, this is the rule. Without rules, everyone is called senior. So what's the use of your seniority? , Seniors, seniors, how can they bear it? Isn't this a shameful thing? The protagonist just doesn't understand his status.

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Throughout the whole process, I was looking for someone to learn my skills and introduce each inheritance to another. Is this still a fan?

It looked pretty good at first, but I felt like it was a bit off topic. Are you under one person or a drama between a dragon and a snake?

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