I Can Pick up Treasures in My Dreams

I want you to write about the new world, spiritual energy recovery, integration into the mainland, cultivation, and superpower development. I don't want you to write about trivial things. I'm done writing a little bit, and I keep writing and writing. Then I talk about this and that, and my sense of superiority is overwhelming. The protagonist is always standing on the top of a mountain, looking down at others. , Very boring... I admit that I have this ability and I am more powerful than the protagonist, but I am just an ordinary person. He is the protagonist in your book. Apart from being lucky, I don't see any difference between the protagonist and ordinary people. In other words, he is just an ordinary person who has had bad luck. This kind of person cannot really be called a protagonist.

Forcibly arranging a heroine is really a problem. The key is that what I am writing now is an ordinary person. What is the use of being more beautiful? He has been giving so many scenes and forcibly reducing his intelligence. It is really disgusting to watch.

The first few chapters were okay, and I was ready to follow it, but when the few people named Zhao moved in, it started to become cliche. They just licked the dog and explained what they wanted to build a good relationship, which made me vomit. The protagonist's perception has become stronger and he can't control it on his own. He writes about how many times he heard other people fart and how many times he turned over while sleeping. The water is not that watery. I gave up on it at first, but the more I thought about it, the angrier it became. If I don't come back and comment, I'll be in a panic.

The protagonist in hundreds of chapters is like an ordinary person, with a low IQ, and the struggle between countries is also very stupid. It is very funny to write a low-IQ article about a battle of wits and courage.

First of all, the setting is very interesting, but the writing is really poor. The protagonist has no sense of three-dimensionality, just like a smug vendor who has taken advantage of it. The inner monologues of various idiots are, to put it ugly, worse than diaosi. There are no behind-the-scenes stories. As for the plot, since you have written about the universe and the world group With such a grand background, don't waste too much space on trivial things like this on the earth. Hundreds of pages are written about trivial things. They are all insignificant hydrology, either people's lives or national intrigues. No pattern can be seen at all. The more readers read, the less they want to read it.

You think of the country as too weak, which is a bit embarrassing. Moreover, your writing is too big, and it will be difficult for you to be round in the later stage.

Can you try this pose? How good is this? Just like that cultivator in the winter wasteland, cultivators always compare themselves to each other when greeting each other, or give people a thumbs up at every turn. That kind of gesture is really

The writing is average, I don't like the setting of the destined savior, and the male protagonist's character is not likable. He keeps a low profile but loves to show off in front of others. The couple upstairs disliked the guy who farted too much and made too much noise. After that, the four of them calmed down. . . The plot arrangement is too deliberate, and the protagonist and supporting characters speak in a self-descriptive manner. . . Creative and endearing

All other countries are idiots, but you are smart and brainless, and you are praising the article.

The protagonist is stereotyped, the plot is confusing, and there is no main line. The branches are all messed up. The protagonist's skills are fully activated, but he just doesn't add any points. Get a bunch of ancient gods. The protagonist is a little brat who is messing around and won't die, without adding some points. Dare to open a harem. The author doesn't even know what he's doing🤷‍♀️