Xuanwu Family

When writing about a tide of sea beasts, I write it as a tide of land beasts.

This novel about cultivating immortals is so good so far, but there are some unreasonable things. It's a bit ridiculous that you can refine the Foundation Establishment Pill at the seventh or eighth level of Qi training. The Foundation Establishment Pill you get in this way is not valuable at all!

1. In terms of character dialogue, how can it be possible for two good friends to call each other by their first names? Many conversations are straightforward, but there are no titles like "Friend Liu," "Fairy Liu," or "Brother Liu." 2. If you want to go out for development and take so many tribesmen out, the people of your tribe will definitely notice something unusual. The locals will definitely become suspicious if they don't see you as a famous person for a long time, so don't be too strict. According to my idea, I would only take a few core clan members out to learn about the family, and the rest would all have babies with spiritual roots. 3. It is true that the family raises the clan members, but the clan members are also people and have their own independence. They cannot ask the clan members to make selfless contributions. They must ensure the privacy of each clan member. Every clan member wants a share of every opportunity the protagonist gets. Is it necessary for such a family to exist? As long as you are a member of the family, if you use the things obtained by the clan members on yourself and improve your strength, the family will also benefit. The tribesmen are not workers.

It is recommended to modify. Foundation-building spiritual objects can also build foundations on their own, and foundation-building elixirs can also help them. Both of these are auxiliary aids. However, it is not written in your novel that you can build foundations by yourself. When building a foundation, you need two auxiliaries. In this case, others have one auxiliary and spiritual objects. If you give it a try, they may have a golden elixir.

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh.

It was okay in the beginning, but when I saw the protagonist Wu Nao giving the family spiritual stone, my first feeling was that the book collapsed, and about the family, you could not see the development and future of the family at all, nor the characteristics of the family, nor the way to make money.

Tell a straight story.

I'm here, support, come on, no more eunuchs.

Xiaobai novel, once the protagonist appears, everyone in the family becomes a genius

Hush, don't say we are the Xuanwu Liu family, the four major families. Don't say it, but keep saying it, for fear that others won't know.