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That is to say, the protagonist wants to help Zhang Xiaofan avoid the problem of his stubborn character and lack of flexibility in the original plot. He actually takes Zhang Xiaofan to a nightclub. It is better to study or find a teacher than to go to a nightclub. It is true that the protagonist was an adult in his previous life, but Zhang Xiaofan is a traditional child who is only a teenager and not yet underage. He also said that if he sees more beautiful women, he will not be tempted. Is that something that beautiful women can seduce? If you ask a teacher to teach him some history about the modern world and some issues about human nature, and ask Zhang Xiaofan or ask a teacher to teach him and check his reading from time to time, and ask him to write down his insights on human nature, you can change Zhang Xiaofan's problem of not being able to adapt, and And you can also train him to be more sinister. It's really not possible. Your protagonist is from the world of heavens anyway. If you later travel to a world of immortals, you can just set up a heart-refining formation. It's impossible to teach people to master things in one go. Jiao is not a nanny, why must he protect him in everything? It is undeniable that he may regard Zhang Xiaofan as a younger brother, but you have never seen a good person take his teenage, fourteen or fifteen-year-old brother to a nightclub or visit a brothel. Even a tiger has a chance to take a nap, let alone the protagonist. And your protagonist, if you don't want to be single-minded and want to have three wives and four concubines, or that woman is interested in the protagonist's strength and interests. Who wants to live a life with a girl who doesn't want to be alone for the rest of her life? The protagonist avoids feelings. If you don't like someone, just say it. You have a crush on her. Why are you hiding there? Don't you still have fantasies about letting the other person have feelings for you? You refuse directly. After that, what should you do? If she can't figure it out, then it's none of your business. What kind of emotional things can't be hurt? Is it possible? Who hasn't had their feelings hurt? After you reject her, the worst thing you can do is reduce the number of meetings. As the rejected girl grows up and has more experience, she will be able to think about this kind of thing, unless it is the kind of silly and sweet love that is hard to imagine.

I have never seen such a stupid protagonist. He lived two lives. I won't tell you how old he lived for the first time. The second time was that he struggled at the bottom since he was a child. The result was that his old story was revealed all at once. Don't say that I am too naive. I have always speculated on others with the greatest malice. I never believe in such things as human nature. So as for the little broken ball in front of you, you are right to say that you are a cultivator of immortality. Those technologies. Then I told Tian Buyi later that I couldn't understand it. Don't tell me about his character. The author said it himself. ***The main character doesn't remember this kind of thing. He can't even remember it. I just revealed the old story. I really can't understand it. Finally, I personally suggest that Xiaobai can read it if he is a bookworm for many years. It depends on personal preferences. Anyway, I can't stand it.

It's really annoying. If you don't know how to write, don't write. To be honest, I really can't understand it. The plot is a mess. Then you added those events. What's the use? I'm telling you.

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The more I write, the more fragmented it becomes. It was okay at first, but it's only the first few dozen pictures.

What did you write? The first two chapters were okay, and then it turned into Wandering Ningzhou, so it was not good

What are you writing about since The Wandering Earth? It collapsed immediately

See for yourself if you can understand it! I can't understand it since I traveled through the wandering earth. Why did you write about Gan Jing and Lu Yuan? Where was it copied?