Kingdom of Heaven and Han

The first part is the main line and sub-line of the story (accounting for 50% of the word count) The second part is the author's imaginary knowledge of political and military history, which he talks to himself, accounting for 30% of the words. The third part is the author's direct comments on the events that occur in the story. 20% Of the words People who write novels would not dare to write so much if they don't have relevant knowledge to pass the test, but the author is different. He likes to talk to himself very much, which is called discussion. If you really want to learn knowledge about politics and military history, you can directly read professional books and introductory books, which are a hundred times better. Reading selected works of Mao Zedong, social sciences, and military courses at the National Defense University is a hundred times better than pretentious discussions. People who have excellent knowledge will simply leave it out, and will not throw away the bag of books at all. They will only reveal the tip of the iceberg, so as not to affect the perception. Otherwise, readers will go directly to professional books to learn. For example, Dream of the Red Mansions, Romance of the Three Kingdoms, To Live, and One Hundred Years of Solitude involve a wide range of knowledge, but the author only briefly and concisely explains it, so that people will not be hindered by reading, and there will be no overreaching, making people wonder whether this is a literary work or a textbook.

Are you saying that the Lord Harmony Faction is trying to antagonize the Lord Zhan Faction? Then Zhao Gou must have agreed.

According to me, the protagonist can go solo at any time? Just in the name of being a coward? Didn't the Song and Ming dynasties always kill people and set fires to be recruited? If there were no pig's feet, it would only be a matter of time before Zhao Gou becomes Wan Yan Gou, and the protagonist would not become a tragic hero like Yue Fei. Yue Fei's military power and logistics are all cowardly, not Pig's Feet. As long as Pig's Feet is not stupid, it is possible to found a country on his own.

When asking the team to execute the order, the reasons are still so long-winded and the tone is so weak. It seems that even I don't understand it. How can I convince the crowd? He is long-winded, his words are not absolute, and his words are gentle and gentle. It is enough to be a scholar. When a soldier is fighting, he talks about orders and prohibitions, and military orders are like mountains. Your verbose military orders are like water, but you look like a little widow nagging. What did you say to your subordinates without thinking clearly? Give the order first and then think about it slowly, think clearly and then briefly tell your subordinates. How can a soldier listen to your long speech if he can't even read Chinese characters? Li Zicheng's slogan is to refuse to pay for food when the king comes. The Red Army's slogan is to attack the landlords and divide their fields. What they want is simple and powerful. They even discussed it with their subordinates in the book, but the key discussion has not yet reached an absolute result. How can this be a leader?

The author always talks at length, which is very annoying. Create more characters. .

Is this also a time-travel story?

He talks hard and coquettishly.

There is a reason why the author is not popular, his writing is nondescript.

The creative concept of the story is very good, the writing style is also good, and the ideas are clear, but the narration of the story is really difficult to describe in one sentence. This is a novel. It is written like a paper, and it is discussed throughout. It cannot be said that there is no reading experience, but the reading experience is really not very good. Therefore, I only give two stars as a novel.