Twilight Boundary

How should I put it, it seems to be dragging, no matter the plot or the writing description. But one thing is undeniable. If the sense of suspense fails, there will always be a feeling of light up. Disadvantages: 1. The character creation in the early stage is very good. The strong character of 100 chapters is gone in one chapter, and the only thing left is a certain sentence between the lines. 2. The protagonists were all ten surnames, and they were all assassinated. The opponent did not even dare to kill them all, saying that it was a covenant of the ten surnames. The protagonist's halo is great 3. When the protagonist encounters everything, he is hesitant and indecisive, feeling that his abilities are of no use. But at the end, suddenly something comes up. The protagonist does not know the background of the ten surnames, so he handles the matter. It is really a 100-chapter foreshadowing and a pretentious sentence. Break the old waist Advantages: 1. Full of suspense, what did the mother-in-law do, how did the protagonist finally return to the ten surnames to get slapped in the face, and what happened to the ten surnames. According to the way it is written, it is estimated that the finale will be passed over in one stroke. 2. The setting is good: group penetration, werewolf killing. There are countless time travellers, and they will burn incense to contact each other. Because of the Great Purge and distrust of each other, protecting yourself is the most important thing. 3. The upper limit is very high, that is, the golden finger is unlimited. Because of the setting of the connection between group travel and burning incense, the technique is transparent, which is equivalent to launching satellites through ancient times. Aboriginals: How does this work ! Therefore, the later stage has a big layout, and the expectation is grand and imaginative.

Okay, the summary is as follows: 1. The atmosphere of the previous and previous chapters is different. The Cthulhu atmosphere in the front, the traditional fairy tale novel in the back. (The changes are so big that I feel like the atmosphere is no longer the same as before, and I don't like it very much.) 2. The writing is more detailed and the small characters are better portrayed, but I don't like Yang Gong. 3. Repeat a lot and feel uncomfortable in some parts. (The one about escorting the girl to the devil's cave was a good twist.) 4. There is nothing wrong with writing in more detail, but I think some parts really don't need to be too disturbing to the senses. (The later part feels less exciting, nothing eye-catching.)

It was good at first, but the more I wrote, the more rubbish and wordy it became, and I especially like to add drama to some side characters. Although your book has a group portrait label, it is not used that way. In order to highlight the cruelty of the protagonist, he sacrificed a family in the village and deliberately made others write that he was vicious to death. Later, in order to highlight the compassion of the protagonist, he went to the old tree stump in order to save people, and by accident he understood what the Hu family was. These are fine. The most annoying thing is that some female characters are deliberately added to the drama. I don't know if it's a female character, a female character, a female character, or something like that. Baijiu puts a lot of importance and possibly even his life on the male protagonist. The reason for not burning sweet potatoes is very reasonable. Her character is indeed very reckless. But Erguotou currently seems to be more worthy of trust in terms of handling things and being a person. The way to forcefully disgust people is still the rescued sweet girl. The male protagonist said that if she was a member of the Li family, I would eat the lantern. It's so disgusting, I've never seen a woman before. It's all cliche. The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes

After reading nine chapters, I can see that the protagonist's IQ is not that of a college student. He worked as a security guard before finishing junior high school. He works 12 hours a day. His brain is rigid and he doesn't use his mobile phone at work. He is blocked from messages until he passes through the explosion. It's easier to accept it. Now that I see it, I feel that it is not as good as Lu Xin. He has always been exposed to the outside world because of his childhood environment. There is little contact, but Lu Xin is not stupid. The protagonist still feels like his soul has returned, but his IQ has not. (Of course, if the protagonist is originally an evil spirit, he swallowed the time traveler when the time traveler was possessed by Hu Ma, and sealed the memory of the evil spirit to avoid being discovered, but if he did not swallow the entire time traveler and his IQ was improved, it would be acceptable)

Advantages: rich imagination, good at foreshadowing, good writing style, fluent and readable Disadvantages: The amount of information in the chapters is too little, and there are too many useless words. After reading a chapter, I feel as if I have not read it

In my 200th chapter, the style of Tsing Yi's Trouble is very obvious and different from the previous period. I have been following it for a while. I originally wanted to read the book. I wanted to see the weirdness. It directly became the 10 surnames invincible in the world. A collateral clan of a collateral clan can kill a house with cholera. How can others get it? In the early stage of shaping, the protagonist was rescued when possible, ran away when in danger, and stayed silent as long as he could. Later, he suddenly changed his temper and became great and upright. Before, he was trying to save his life by fighting for the inheritance of others. The plot is also a bit weak, it will be resolved soon, so it has to keep talking nonsense.

It's so frustrating, and the character of the protagonist, what the hell? I can't stand it. One is the Virgin, the other is ruthless, and there are reincarnations. Isn't it said that the old leads to the new? When I encountered the second number, he actually asked for conditions, so why don't you just write the first one and there are many more. In short, it's very awkward, so let's go.

The protagonist will definitely be liquidated in the end, and the Hu family is at least the emperor's biggest nemesis. No one can stay if he succeeds, and there are still ten tribes The perfect ending should have ten tribes guarding hell Yin: ten tribes Yang: Emperor Yang Demarcation: The protagonist and his mother-in-law had a big quarrel over there, and then broke up the reorganization

It seemed like the whole book fell apart after chapter 300. First of all, there is the currency system. The blood Tai Sui seems to be very valuable in the front, but it is really a mess behind it. The Bai Tai Sui has completely disappeared, and the same is true for silver coins. Then there is the strength system. Except for the protagonist, the strength of everyone else has experienced a huge appreciation and rapid depreciation. In the end, it is completely incomprehensible. The strength evaluation between various disciplines and characters is very confusing. The worst thing is that the Red Lantern Empress has not even appeared in a serious role, and her character is completely gone. Then there is the style of the whole book, from weird and suspense to conventional immortality. Although this is difficult to avoid, the gap is quite big, but I personally can accept it. The last thing is the verbosity. It takes a long time to write several chapters, and I like to add drama to the supporting characters. In addition, I really don't like the character Yang Gong. It's really abrupt and disappointing to suddenly give him the emperor's life. However, this book still has many advantages. I think the overall character creation is not a big problem, there are some novelties in the settings, the overall writing is smooth and the writing style is good, the whimsical things are quite good, and the foreshadowing and suspense are also grasped. However, after 300 chapters, all the previous problems are magnified, and I will probably only eat dust on my bookshelf in the future.

Repeated too much, and suddenly explained why he used this trick? The hole dug ahead must be filled when the plot is tense. During the fight against Hall Master Ji, he thought he was dead, but he was not dead. It was not until the end that Hall Master Ji said those words. The whole process was like being used as a sandbag under the two of their faces. The meticulousness of the protagonist cannot be highlighted. The perspective of the whole fighting process is always very passive. Suddenly, from the perspective of Red Grape, and suddenly, from the perspective of the protagonist, it should have given Red Grape a knife while restraining him, but under the care of many helpers, he was given a lesson and then forced to explain. We don't know why red grapes were given as a big gift at that critical moment. If you want to highlight the superb magic power of red wine, but also let the protagonist get an opportunity in a reasonable and reasonable way to improve his combat power, but in the final fight, giving the opportunity and explaining why it is a good opportunity always feels too delayed. You have a great ability to highlight young people, but you can't do it over and over again, making the audience think it's over, but it's not over yet. At the beginning, the tiger was relatively cold, but among the five evil gods, Yang Gong suddenly introduced a way to break the situation. Yang Gong itself gave the audience a very reckless feeling, and the two were also at war with each other in the initial shaping because of their identities as Hongxiang's disciples. It started out fine in the front, but I couldn't stop the car in the back, and all kinds of things got involved. It is also necessary to reasonably know the secret of this year-preserving talisman through the tiger, but the protagonist is so passive in the early stage, rather reckless, and afraid of getting into trouble. The Five Evil God Na Shanjun chatted with the Five Evil God Fona again, asking what the Hu family's abilities were like. He pretended to be profound, as if he had already guessed it. Great God, sometimes I am very big, and sometimes I am worried and scared. I cannot explain clearly. The key is that the third child in Plum Blossom Lane suddenly became more sensible after procrastinating too much. Mainly because many important things happened around Zhuangzi. The identity in Zhuangzi remains unchanged as recognized by outsiders. I felt that at that time there were no opportunities for promotion, but the abilities of the descendants of the Hu family were so powerful. There is always a sense of gap. The character of Erguotou was initially portrayed as a kind-hearted veteran, but he began to change again. He always felt that he was not doing his job properly, but he forcefully explained that he went to Fox Coffin Village to seek opportunities, and later emphasized that he was so stubborn.