Machine Breaks the Galaxy

The current progress is 130 chapters, what can I say... The author has some ideas, and the plot is okay, but it still avoids the fatal mistake of most online articles: no clear belief! To survive? There is nothing wrong, but this proposition is too big, too spacey, and too ethereal! For strength? Too much, too spacey, too ordinary! The most direct metaphor: articles are mechas and beliefs are engines! The latter directly determines the strength level of the former! A man's responsibility makes Fatty Tian, ​​who is afraid of death, overthrow half of the universe; a love spell makes Xiao Fan point his sword at the world; a word "I have few friends" makes Lu Shuaizi risk his life to fight the dragon clan; the so-called belief is not unique to the protagonist, but should be used throughout the whole text. Pretending just for the sake of pretending is at most a meteor flash, and a pure and shining soul is the source of resonance!

This is a good book. Even if it is a little watery in the later stage, it cannot mean that it is not a good book. However, when thinking about some details, it is found to be a bit unreasonable. 1. The so-called appearance of God is mentioned in passing. I wonder if it will be explained later. God can appear in the universe of mechanical civilization. The only possibility is God. Very powerful, but the god (Wood God) disappeared again, which is interesting. 2. It was mentioned earlier why the Black Planet-level body was not built for so long but instead built a battleship. If it had been built earlier, wouldn't Black's computing power be stronger and create more advanced weapons? 3. For people from alien universes, the article mentioned It requires a lot of energy to open a channel in this universe (the SSS-level mecha used three-quarters of it to return to more than 60%, but the energy is used up when opening a fifth-level portal). How strong technology and energy do people from other universes have to have to open a channel? If this is the foundation of this universe Don't be afraid, because the enemy can't teleport their highest combat power at all. If you can, what else can the protagonist use to resist? From the perspective of the article, as long as the technology can be teleported, it will be very advanced. The protagonist only has an SSS-class mecha, an intelligent man, and more than 180 battleships. How big is it? This is a question. Ever since I read this novel, I have never liked other novels. I support the author greatly.

I really like this book. Every time I want to gain weight, I read it but I can't help it. It's not enough!

In fact, I had a bad feeling when Lao Dang said it would be completed in two months. I think this book is only about half-way through. Mu Fan has not left his own universe, let alone found his origin, and Zege has not dealt with it (the matter between the fighter and Zege must at least be dealt with). I like this book very much and I like Mu Fan's purity. Although it is a bit naive, it is precisely in this way that he can show his state of mind. I believe that his indomitable spirit must have ignited the heroic dream in the hearts of many male readers. I will cry and laugh when I read this book. I don't want it to end like this. If the author doesn't want to write it anymore, he can end the current chapter and continue it later. In this way, even if the author stops writing, people will not delete this book from the bookshelf. People who really love this book will be willing to wait until the author is willing to continue writing this book or come back when the second season is released. I hope the author can see The book review should be revised a few times to account for sensitive characters. There may be sentences that are not fluent, please understand.

In fact, I only read three chapters of this book. The overall writing is very good. It's just that I don't really like this strong protagonist setting. So I personally rejected this book.

The pace of the book is actually very good, but in the end due to some external influences, the holes dug in the early stage were not filled in, and the emotional description was also slightly lacking. Overall, it is a book worth reading. I hope the author can create more and write better books.

First of all, the end of Chapter 10? Let me ask the author, is it really good for you to be perfunctory like this? New book? You have written like this in the middle stage of "Bao Xinghe", how dare you publish a new book? From the moment I first started watching Jiba, I was deeply attracted by the story structure. But the mid-term was even more exciting. However, starting from about 1,000 chapters, every chapter gave me the feeling that it was perfunctory, completely perfunctory. Up to now, there have been too many pitfalls in the game. Author, you not only don't fill the pits, but you also plan to end it hastily? I have been completely disappointed. I will never follow new books again. It's not worth it for a perfunctory author like you.

I have the urge to beat the shit out of the author, so I agree and raise my hand.

Five stars for the opening chapter, five stars for setting, and five stars for ignition. However, after seeing the image of his father, the protagonist said that no one can bully him from now on. I thought it was a big turning point, but there was no difference before and after. He was still bullied for no reason. The turning point failed to three stars. The federal law is too strange. I spent dozens of chapters writing some positive stories. When self-defense is illegal, it is illegal to kill a criminal in self-defense. The criminal comes to kill you and causes social disorder. The responsibility lies with the victim, so much so that the angry female officer of the Secret Service shouted angrily at the protagonist, and her plump breasts were squeezed out of her clothes (I still don't understand why the author suddenly I wrote about breasts, okay, that's not the point). During this period, the protagonist did two things. First, he asked for a bounty. Second, he used connections and means to exonerate himself (didn't those criminals kill many big guys and no one spoke up? Mutants are defined by the author as evil and terrifying, non-human beings. They are almost public enemies of mankind, why do the laws protect them so much?) In dozens of chapters, he killed two interstellar mutants who wanted to kill him. The other party made the first move, and then started to argue with the police, army and the Secret Service. It was very confusing and boring, and the plot was dragged out. I gave it one star here. I haven't watched the subsequent one, but overall it's four stars.

Passing by... Would you like to read this book?