Galactic Nobles

I hope that in the second part of the book, Grilled Fish will stop abusing the heroine. I don't like separation between life and death. Of course, this is just a suggestion. How to write it depends on the grilled fish. Chasing for a year. You can tell that Grilled Fish is trying very hard to write a good story. I hope the next book, Grilled Fish, will tell another good story. Come on, wait for the next book of Grilled Fish.

The biggest advantage of this book is that the story in it is very realistic. The villain is not a stupid idiot. The last few chapters are really abrupt. The capital has just been captured and Lin Zijun charges into the battle like no one else and takes the capital. This part made me very uncomfortable. The Hundred Lies Army is so weak. . . Are the Susa people so weak? This lacks a reasonable explanation. After all, it took you three days to rush back to the country from the front line. Then there were so many interceptions in the middle of your journey to the capital of Susa. It shouldn't be considered that the journey is so fast. I understand the distance as a star map crossing. The fact that the Susa people are so weak can be understood as a country that has gone through many battles and lost its elite. , But Lin Zijun eats steamed buns like a Bailiejun in one bite, and a black armband in each bite. These powers are not at all what they should be. In the end, Safi Moss performed a very eye-catching gank. If you add that I let you in on purpose, you will have a very different feeling. It has been two years since I finished reading this book. At that time, I was passionate about Lin Hai's class breakthrough. I was fascinated by the galaxy world, the gentle and dignified Nolan. Thank you to the author for presenting us with such a charming world (which made me want to write a book). I hope that all of us can let our childhood dreams soar into the sky, and let our beliefs continue to move forward even after the erosion of time. I will wait for you on the other side of the galaxy.

I just read a few chapters and I have some personal opinions. Regarding Lin Hai, the article said that he has outstanding personal abilities and can still defeat two people from the special forces. It feels so far-fetched. Not to mention that his food and clothing on the civilian planet are very rudimentary and his nutrition may not be able to keep up. How can he be comparable to the special forces? Furthermore, don't the military's special forces have any fighting skills? Being frightened by a young man in his twenties who came from a civilian planet, does this tell us that everyone on the civilian planet is a master who defies the will of heaven, or does it mean that the military's special forces are just decorations for a living? It is not right to say that Lin Hai can achieve such a strong force after twenty years of training. Unless he has received the guidance of some famous teacher and has systematic and reasonable training, he can achieve such a result. It's not that this article is not good. In terms of the chapters I just read, the writing in other parts is quite good. This is why I can't help but leave a comment. I hope the author can pay more attention to some logical details.

Everything is talked about and introduced. It's too boring. I'm skipping through chapters now. Four-fifths of one chapter is devoted to introducing the environment and mission characteristics. Why don't you also introduce them to the toilet👎

Looking at it from the beginning to the ending, Xia Ying feels so pity, why must she be tortured, big brother! Can you send me the blade?

There are too many and too detailed descriptions of irrelevant events, but the overall situation and world structure are very powerful. It is just too much to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger... Some plots are still incomprehensible, and I feel sorry for the money I watched.

The ending is a bit sad. Xia Ying has put in a lot of effort but there is no good ending. I feel a little sad after reading it.

I still think I should write a follow-up, such as how I am doing with Ruolan, etc. . Thanks.

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It's over, I'm so happy to see it red