Winning the Holy Grail War Turns Out to Be the Virtual Tree Universe

What normal person would like such a sense of being a protagonist? This is the beginning and I'm not interested in any sense of involvement at all.

It's not bad, and the subject matter is relatively new, but the protagonist's personality is a bit both upright and upright, and it often overwhelms the protagonist's combat capabilities.

It feels like watching a diary. There is no plot or interaction at all. It's all the monologue of the protagonist.

Generally speaking, the protagonist is both decent and well-established, but has a bad personality.

This book is undoubtedly a masterpiece among Bengtie fan fiction. There are many advantages, but there are also many disadvantages. But in general, the flaws do not hide the advantages, and it is much better than those who only know how to follow the plot. But as we all know, the game Bengtie is still under development. It has seven combat attributes: physics, fire, ice, wind, thunder, quantum, and imaginary numbers. There are already 4 protagonists, and there are at least three more major versions to come. Many plots are actually difficult to write, and it is easy to be stabbed in the back. The author was so procrastinating in the middle period because he was waiting for the plot of version 3.8. But the author's efforts are visible to us readers, and updates are guaranteed, unlike other fanfics that end hastily. But there are also many shortcomings. For example, the combat power increases too quickly. The protagonist is now an envoy. If he continues to accumulate strength, he will reach the throne and become a star god. But now that the game plot is only halfway through, the author will definitely not write it too fast. The protagonist has become a star god, and he will not be able to write the subsequent plot. Therefore, the protagonist's combat power will be reduced to the level of the Commander, and at most, several other life paths will be allowed to reach the Commander level. Although the combat power is strong, they are still at the Commander level. The concept of the throne has only appeared in a few small versions, and there is no other news at all. The author will definitely not write it lightly. There are also the frictions between major forces that the author wrote about before. Although the protagonist is always winning, others are losing. But it feels too deliberate, like forcing the protagonist to upgrade his qualifications. Especially when fighting against the Lord of Destruction, except for Huanhuang, who was better written, I felt that the other Lords had been forcibly reduced to their wits. Xingxiao had been fighting interstellar wars for so many years, and he was an envoy of the same harmony, and he was well prepared, but in the end he came back with a huge defeat. I'm not saying that she can't come back in defeat, I just want to say that the protagonist's preparation and operation are not enough for Luofu Xianzhou to make Xing Xiao return in defeat without heavy losses. You must know that Tongxie is very good at legion combat. The book does not mention how she applied various Tongxie buffs to the Anti-Material Legion. It gave me the feeling that she was messed up without using a few of her abilities. I felt like a clown. Moreover, the character Xingxiao was only known in detail through the PV that was released some time ago. The relevant descriptions in the game are also very vague. Isn't the author afraid of being backstabbed again when he does those things? Moreover, in the part where Guiji ran away, the protagonist left a hand behind, which I felt was unreasonable. The Immortal Killing Sword shot by the protagonist has the power of the Envoy, but not much. I think it would be reasonable for Guiji to be injured, but when one of his hands was taken off, I felt it was too exaggerated. The image Dan Lei gives me now is that he is too aggressive and aggressive, he has a lusty heart but not a lustful courage. The good thing is that his responsibilities are other people's, and he is too expressive of emotions. Maybe it's because I like to watch the behind-the-scenes boss scenes too much. I prefer the steady appearance of the protagonist. The protagonist has been through so many storms, but still likes to show expressions on his face, which gives people an immature feeling. For example, in the scene where Sunday's temptation goes too far, the protagonist can certainly show anger, but it shouldn't be an angry look on his face. There is also the issue of the harem. The protagonist wants to have a harem. Now anyone with a discerning eye can see that. Then why don't you accept the Butterfly Ninja from the front? The reason given is still high-sounding, long-lasting species and short-lived species are not suitable. There is also the setting of time travel, which you seem to have forgotten. Overall, this book can make up for a lot of settings that I didn't know or forgot about in Bengtie. Although there are still many details that are not perfect, the author is more obedient and is still making progress. I believe this book will get better and better in the future.

The author could use less embarrassing explanations. For example, the protagonist is seriously injured and does not want Danzhu to know that he is still conscious, for fear of being lectured by her. This is a bit vulgar.

1 This book is written very seriously. Even if you are afraid of being stabbed in the back, you can predict the plot crazily and perfectly avoid the thunder of the new plot. The author of 2tmd is amazing, Erxiang Paradise predicted it. I thought it was useless to fix Avalon, but it turns out it was just to show off. 3 I suspect it's an insider🤔

There are so many things about immortality, but there are no adopted girls in Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba world. I'm worried.

Update, update, update, update, update, update, update, update

The protagonist's time travel is reasonable. The world of King Arthur also belongs to Beng Tie. Gui Naifen is King Arthur's wife. You really can't tell that she is from the same world without looking at the information. The influence of the Holy Grail in Beng Tie is not great, and the rules are different.