
I'm Not a Savior
About This Novel
The Lord God who loves games comes and the barriers of the heavens are broken. And in those worlds, the same legend circulates, the legend of a savior. The protagonist of the legend, the "Savior" Lin Jian said helplessly, "I am not the savior, just an enthusiastic citizen passing by."
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Full of faintness Must be full of faintness Articles about practicing as a novice He wrote so hastily Obviously, the rhythm is not very good. It's true that the worldview has just begun to expand a bit. So that I can't finish it later Not even to the end The author was forced to stop because he didn't have enough imagination. For novices, it is best to write independent small articles to practice their skills at the beginning. In the future, pay more attention to the rhythm, pay attention to the coherence of the context, and describe the details of the actions. And the most important thing! That means don't eat the settings 😎 It's best to make an outline (😹) Finally, I would like to make some suggestions for the new book. There is nothing much to say about the settings and characters, they must be perfected You can boldly write about characters with different personalities Also, just prepare a small area for the world view at the beginning. After you become familiar with it, start focusing on expansion. There's nothing to say about emotions. Look at the author (Pure love warriors are unmatched) I feel that the author can also write on a daily basis, which may be a new approach. Okay, that's all for today.
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Official(1)Scraped 7d ago
The author must see it
Full of faintness Must be full of faintness Articles about practicing as a novice He wrote so hastily Obviously, the rhythm is not very good. It's true that the worldview has just begun to expand a bit. So that I can't finish it later Not even to the end The author was forced to stop because he didn't have enough imagination. For novices, it is best to write independent small articles to practice their skills at the beginning. In the future, pay more attention to the rhythm, pay attention to the coherence of the context, and describe the details of the actions. And the most important thing! That means don't eat the settings 😎 It's best to make an outline (😹) Finally, I would like to make some suggestions for the new book. There is nothing much to say about the settings and characters, they must be perfected You can boldly write about characters with different personalities Also, just prepare a small area for the world view at the beginning. After you become familiar with it, start focusing on expansion. There's nothing to say about emotions. Look at the author (Pure love warriors are unmatched) I feel that the author can also write on a daily basis, which may be a new approach. Okay, that's all for today.









