Qi Shan

Overall rating: 2.5 Stars Have you finished reading: No Whether to review: No Author's brief comment: They are all works that are biased toward parents and parents. Hostess design: Time-travel heroine, strong, virtuous and housekeeper Male protagonist: a farmer's boy, from the imperial examination, down-to-earth Supporting characters: There are so many, most of them are relatives of the male and female protagonists and relatives of relatives Plot line: Observation of the daily lives of the male and female protagonists and a large number of relatives around them Emotional line: It seems to be there, but it seems not to be. The only thing that can be called an emotional line is probably that the male protagonist doesn't take concubines, and he has a relatively high opinion of the female protagonist. Completeness: In fact, it doesn't seem to make any difference if you choose the ending of a chapter at random. Extra: a follow-up extra Writing style: simple and unpretentious, with occasional modern vocabulary (such as hotels), and a lot of names. Brief comment: After reading the whole article, the most impressive thing is "separating the family" and "harmony". Let's talk about family division first. In the book, the heroine's family division (the seventh room is divided), the male protagonist's family division (the male protagonist's generation), and the male protagonist's eldest brother's family division are all written over and over again. The main reason for the separation of the male protagonist's family was because the brothers were persuaded by the sisters-in-law and did not want to continue to support him in education. They said this countless times when the male protagonist appeared, when the male and female protagonists got engaged, after the male and female protagonists got married, after the male protagonist became an official, when the male protagonist's nephew separated, etc., The basic rhetoric and content were similar. The second is "Harmony". In the book, whether it is the heroine's best neighbor Fa Xiao, the hero's best sister-in-law, the heroine's best aunt, the hero's snobbish colleagues with different attitudes, the male and female protagonist's soft-eared mothers, etc., There are endless kinds of them. However, none of them apologized or corrected themselves because they realized from the bottom of their hearts that they had done something wrong. Either because of the situation, or because you want to build a relationship, just say a few nice words and then reconcile. Among them, the male protagonist's mother's soft ears appear repeatedly. Listen to the eldest daughter-in-law's instigation and be picky about the heroine, listen to the education of her son and husband, and adjust her mentality. It's like a reincarnation, appearing countless times. Beyond that, the entire article can be seen as a guide to being a good wife. Countless times from the heroine's mother's mouth, "Men don't like women who are too troublesome", "You can't just care about your parents' family and not your husband's family", "You have to listen to your mother-in-law" and so on. Another problem is the heroine's golden finger. I don't know why it is set that the heroine awakens her memories before time travel. After awakening, is she supposed to learn to hide her gift of strength, and then become a virtuous and virtuous little lady so that she can get married easily? Do you need to travel through time to know this thought? Isn't this the most native idea in ancient times? The powerful golden finger set for the heroine only appears at the beginning, and is used to make the heroine disliked by her family and unable to marry. He didn't appear until the end. I don't know if the comment was made, but he briefly appeared in the extra chapter to fight off enemies. Then there is the plot setting. Finally, the plot appears to be at least complete or purposeful. For example, there is a section in the middle where the male protagonist is studying in the city and chatting with his female family members. When the female protagonist's family found out, they were worried that he would change his mind and said they would ask questions next time. Then the next plot is that the two families have agreed on the date of getting married. Then what is the purpose of writing this paragraph? This is not an essay. Ordinariness does not equal a running account.

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A story about a strong woman pretending to be a little girl. The writing style is bland, but you can keep reading. Linglongxiu's writing seems to be a routine, relying on top-notch characters to advance the plot.