The Tribulation of Ten Thousand Races: Accepting Su Yu as a Disciple at the Beginning

Why don't you write it? Very beautiful

Very nice. Love it. Like it. Very nice.

I was so speechless. I read it for a long time and didn't know what I was writing.

3.1415916, I haven't read it yet. It's so difficult to write ten words. I've got enough water.

A person with 160 divine orifices and 240 yuan orifices can fight against Ling Yun. After the willpower is realized and the resources are available, it is the peak of Lingyun. The combined divine orifices are mountains and seas. If you insist on being an ordinary nurturing person, no one can do anything about it.

Some readers said it was too watery and asked them to go directly to the battlefield of the heavens. I would like to explain. First, it's not that it's too shabby. I haven't seen the protagonist for a long time. The fundamental problem is that there aren't many updates. It's four thousand words a day. I spent 14,000 words introducing the Shan Shenwen series (the big villain in the next period of time). This resulted in not seeing the protagonist for a few days. This problem can only be said to be solved after it is released. It used to be four thousand a day, but it will be six thousand or eight thousand a day after it is released. It will be better than now. Secondly, I spent a lot of space to write some other perspectives because this book is not about the protagonist appearing alone and being able to change everything in seconds. One clan has a clear disadvantage against all clans. This should not be something that the protagonist can do alone. It requires the cooperation of many people. Some of the things in the original book that I am not satisfied with are Some characters who were well portrayed in the past are no longer seen in the future. For example, Zhu Tianfang, who went undercover to hunt Tiange for the sake of the human race, has no plot in the back. There are also Xia Longwu, Xia Houye, Zhu Tianfang, Wan Tiansheng... Although they may be overestimating their abilities, I want to write their stories. Third, as mentioned earlier, one clan is too exaggerated against all clans. The human clan also needs allies. In addition to humans, gods, demons, and immortals, there are also demon clans in the world. The little blood and beast taming systems are paving the way for this. Fourth, if you don't prepare the ground well in the beginning and go directly to the battlefield of the heavens, you will inevitably have to paste and copy a large area later. It is better to read the original work directly. There is some preparation ahead. I went to the battlefields of the heavens so that I can write my own things and fill in some pitfalls, such as the research on the Yuan Shen Aperture in the original work, what will happen if Wu Lan's research on willpower extraction is published, and the research on divine combat skills... Moreover, the plot in the human realm in the original book has more than 300 chapters, and the whole book only has more than 900 chapters. Things in the human realm account for one-third, and they are an important part of the calamity of all races. In the end, this book was more fully prepared than the previous one. I had an outline and a main line. It was not like the previous book where I was suddenly signed and had no preparation at all. I just wrote whatever came to my mind.

The plot at the beginning contains too many layouts and characters of Invincible and Palace Master. Why don't you just jump to the level of writing about King Wu? You and Su Yu have not even reached the air, and are still in the stage of cultivating your health. Why bring so many high-level people out? Develop the plot around the protagonist, and gradually write about the layout of the big shot according to the protagonist's strength. For example, if you originally wrote the story of Zhang San, a high school teacher in a certain province and city, you keep describing the layout of the provincial governors and party secretaries of each province? What everyone wants to see is the process of how you use Lao Liu, a relatively low-level character, to rise up. Most of your writing will stay on the protagonist. Your own strength is too weak, writing about high-level figures is of no use, and you can't participate in any of them. It was off-putting, so I gave it up.

This old eunuch has always suppressed his fighting power, and so did the previous book and this one too.

This is the most useless investment return system I have ever seen.

It's been more than half a month and you haven't written anymore? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? What do you think