Doomsday Simulator, I Use Swordsmanship to Prove Extraordinary

I looked at more than 30 pictures and the words were garbled. I want to improve the quality of my work, but my language skills are limited. The logical explanation is also confusing. The first level is level eight, and then it is changed to level seven. It is also said that the actual difficulty level should be level six.

I saw Chapter 50, which was all about narration, settings, nonsense, three or four chapters of a fight with two tricks, and a lot of nonsense about various psychological descriptions, which looked very much like writing a composition. It was all nonsense. The description of the plot progress in Chapter 50 was only three or four chapters long, and the rest were all tedious setting descriptions, close-ups, and two chapters of various introductions about what was learned in school, which are similar to currency for buying things. If you write something that has no effect on the protagonist at all, I can't stand it anyway.

I've seen 60 pictures, and the more I look at them, the more I feel like this girl is trash and disgusting. Then there are so many beauties, what do you want to do? Is it disgusting to think about having too many female protagonists? And why should you be so ambiguous with your sister? You can't be more cool. Alas, you are no longer good. I still remember that your first book was very decisive.

To be honest, it's too long-winded. I'm here to read the novel, not for your popular science. And this is just like urban immortality cultivation. I really don't understand why sword cultivation became the mainstream in a peaceful era?

The writing is quite good, but the explanation of practice is too detailed. I feel like I am always explaining practice.

The explanation of spiritual practice does not require you to be too detailed or too ink.

I don't know what the author is thinking, but the monks in this book seem to be wholesale from the same mold, with too little self-esteem! The characters' personalities are so suppressed by the so-called state of mind! It's like I'm gradually eroding myself!

The third golden chapter kind of dissuaded me, so I might as well give up after reading the 20th chapter. There is too much background introduction, which is not to say that it should not be introduced, but it is too verbose and contains too much invalid information. I feel like the first 20 chapters have been reduced to three or four, which is pretty good.

Brother, you must be very good at politics. You are the most needed to study politics. I have written a lot. Some of them look very awesome. In fact, they are just ordinary people wielding swords. What you wrote is the same as the battle between the immortal kings. What do you think about for a while? You will make progress one by one while writing. The book is very good. To be honest, it's really good, but the disadvantage is that the plot is very long-winded and the plot is very slow. The first thirty chapters are summarized in one sentence. Goldfinger wakes up after returning home from martial arts practice in school, then fumbles and then disappears. It's very superficial. It can be said that he is mostly writing the settings of other stories, but can it really be used if you write it so clearly? It's a novel, and you've even written down the specifics of how to practice cultivation. You also said that the world is different, so why did you write it in such detail? Apart from showing off your setting and word count, I really can't think of anything interesting.

The writing is too poor, there is too much nonsense, and the plot is slow.