Heavens: My Sect is Not Upright and Has Become Evil

This is what a neurotic dog licker can do.

The protagonist has traveled through several worlds. The previous writing was so impressive and systematic, but he lost the moment he met Zhang Sanfeng in Heaven Sword and Dragon Sword. I found that this is the case in many novels. No matter how awesome the protagonist is, even after practicing for hundreds of years, he is no match for Zhang Sanfeng in Heaven Sword and Dragon Sword. This setting is rubbish.

It's so boring. I was a bit egotistical at first, but then I became more and more selfless. I acted like a saint. It's boring.

I wrote about whether I know Minglan, as a father, does he really want his daughter to be a stepmother? There are so many people throughout the Song Dynasty, can't we find others? We must follow the original work. If we deviate from the original work, will we not be able to write it? ? There is also Ru Lan and Wen Yanjing. Wen Yanjing knew clearly that Sheng Hong was negotiating for him with Mo Lan, but he still secretly hooked up with Ru Lan and had a tryst. Don't tell me, he doesn't know how much impact this has on women under the feudal system, and the little ninety-nine in his heart, he has a good character? ? What's really missing is that he clearly knew that his mother treated Ru Lan harshly, but he also stood by his mother's side. His final appointment as prime minister must have been supported by the connections of the Sheng family and the entire Sheng family. Not just a person from a peasant background can casually rise to the upper echelons of the bureaucracy. There are not many class barriers, and he is like a phoenix man; Gu Er is really not a good match. Even if someone throws dirt on him, he is indeed responsible for many things, and no one puts a knife to his neck and forces him. According to the original drama, Gu Er has a lot of schemes against Sheng Minglan and even the Sheng family, but because he is the male protagonist, the audience automatically whitewashes him. In the original book, the incident of Sheng Minglan's meritorious service was suppressed by his suggestion. In fact, he was afraid that other better matches would come to compete with him for Minglan. Also, after Minglan married into his family, she had been wiping his butt and going through hell and fire for him. Minglan is a very good person, and she will be wonderful with anyone she marries. Many people say that Gu Er is very good to Minglan after marriage. I accept it. Minglan has done a great job in sending imperial edicts. If she hadn't been suppressed, Minglan would definitely have received various rewards. Does she still need support from others? To put it bluntly, Minglan's glorious life was maliciously plagiarized by the male protagonist. Just like the smelly man in reality, he married an outstanding woman who was originally shining in society, and then imprisoned her in the back yard to handle the dirty things in the back house for him. The biological father personally gave his daughter to someone else to be a stepmother. Hahahaha, it was amazing. In Gu Tingye's heart, his sister Rong and Brother Chang had higher priorities than Minglan. Minglan knew that Brother Chang was dead, but she didn't dare to tell Gu Tingye that it was because of her. She is well versed in how husband and wife get along, as high as the sun and the moon, as close as they are to each other, and she only dares to guide Gu Tingye to discover the truth. Just as she said she should treat her partner as her boss, but if she can't tell her own position, she will become the next Old Mrs. Sheng

The Holy Mother's article licked Lin Zhennan and his son until they were flying.

After reading the introduction, it's probably a NP stallion story. It's a bit hard to accept.

The content coherence is very good. Much better than many novice writers

Are there too many typos? I can't read it at all. I couldn't tell the plot, and I didn't want to read it after just two chapters.

The character of Ning Zhong, who is gentle but has a strong heart, is written to look like Master Miejie.

The writing at the end is really confusing, and I couldn't read Crane and Needle from the beginning!