Douluo Makes Noumenon Sect Great in Advance

Author, what do you think of these characters?

It's rare for an author to write fan fiction with a thoughtful mind and from the perspective of sects and human nature. It's so rare. Give the author an idea to cultivate a few successors to the divine throne, such as Shui Bing'er, the Ice God, whose divine throne is inherited in the far north. Ye Lingling inherited the God of Healing (original second-level God). Poseidon Duguyan, Shuiyue'er Water God, Huowu Fire God, these people don't necessarily have to be accepted into the harem, they can be accepted as apprentices (serious ones). Don't be reckless if you don't have the strength. Don't be like the protagonists in other works, who make all kinds of mistakes under the eyes of Titled Douluo, expose soul rings that exceed the limit range, and even participate in the soul master competition to expose the strength far beyond ordinary people, as if they are afraid that others will not take action to eliminate the threat. Low-key, low-key, even more low-key, just hide behind the scenes and do evil. Don't force hatred, let alone kill indiscriminately, whether it's a soul master or a soul beast.

This book's rating of 9.1 Is too high, it only has a rating of 8.3 At best. 1. Mainly because there is too much nonsense and too much ink in the introduction background. 2. As a time traveler, my mind is like that of an indigenous child, and I am constantly surprised. 3. When writing group portraits in Douluo Dalu, there are a few chapters about the protagonists, and most of them are just nonsense. 4. Treating the protagonist like that in Tianshui Academy. At that time, the sect already had four titled Douluo. I couldn't figure out what they were doing. 5. When writing Yuanyang Hot Pot, it was too watery. Although I am a new author, I wouldn't do it like this. Overall, this platform is considered good among the updated Douluo fanfics, and it relies entirely on the support of peers. You can take a look at Shuhuang.

The first ten chapters! The golden 10 chapters of the novel! The protagonist only appeared once and explained the effect of whale glue! What does it mean for you to write a protagonist? Use Golden Chapter 10 to introduce the background of the protagonist's sect, Noumenon Sect? Ah? ? ? A group of fans, okay? The protagonist only awakens his martial soul in Chapter 11? Ah? ? ? We readers are here to see the protagonist and the plot, not to see you introduce the background, buddy! Be careful when you write!

More than 100 chapters and 300,000 words, you have only reached less than 20 levels. Isn't it true? (Absorbing three soul rings, you have been promoted to four or five levels. If you skip level absorption, you have been promoted to fifteen or sixteen levels in total.) Don't say that time is too short. Water is water, and you may have absorbed golden glue and fairy grass.

I'm convinced. I have written "A Ice and Fire Eye" from chapter 73 to chapter 90. I really don't understand why it's so tedious. The extra chapter is said to be a 4,000-word chapter, but it's actually just a piece of nonsense. Please 🙏, although I'm not short of money, but what you did made me not want to continue reading. When I opened it, the plot didn't advance at all, and I kept talking nonsense.

The main plot is quite interesting, but it also has a lot of flaws. For example, the writing is too long-winded. It takes a long time to kill three insignificant people. I thought it was very pretentious, but it is actually very embarrassing. I even thought it was a book 5 years ago, and I really don't have a lot of nonsense literature. I have the desire to read on. The protagonist has the blood of a mythical beast and encounters the inheritance of the God of Thunder. The God of Thunder goes to the divine world to stay behind, and the protagonist awakens his martial soul and absorbs the soul ring. These plots need to be written and put on the shelves. 9.1 Is too high, and 8.1 Is about the same. At least the plot is interesting and there is no problem with the logic.

Now that you are ready to be born, you should kill a tiger to let the wolves below know the existence of your group of lions. You should cripple the Bone Douluo, let the world know your existence, and make the wolves below fear you, and then you can vigorously develop your hair. You can extort a wave of Qibao Glaze to scrape three or five layers of total savings, and then use the gold coins to build a headquarters near the new forest. I feel like I have the strength to not eat beef. If I do those things, we still need to discuss them.

I'm convinced. The Tianshui part is really stupid. Maybe my word choice is inappropriate but it's really disgusting.

This article is good or bad depending on the person. I can only say it is average.