I Can Log into Zhutian
About This Novel
[Original Login Device is being activated...] A young man from Earth Star accidentally came to another world and awakened the Origin Login Device. In the early days of the martial arts world, he let his horse run wild, taking pleasure in grudges and grudges, and living in the world of mortals... In the Qingcang Realm, he embarked on the journey of cultivating immortals, flying with a sword, and killing demons with his sword...
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Official(7)Scraped 25d ago
The emotional scenes are so awkwardly written. I can't stand it.
It feels pretty good, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch
For me, I feel that the whole story is pretty good, but I hope that the protagonist will not forget his father in the later stage, otherwise the emotional scenes in the early stage will be very awkward.
good
Hard work leads to no good development. Come on💪
The flaws are so big that I can't stand it!
Those who log in to the interstellar era are a failure. If people from the interstellar era can log in, any world will be turned upside down! The result is that nothing has changed! It would be better for the protagonist to travel through the heavens alone!
The writing is okay, and I can read it. There is one thing. The difference in speed between the protagonist's time in the Yin and Yang world and the time in the original world is not written. Moreover, if he returns to the original world at the age shown on the panel, his father may not be able to recognize him.
Poor writing
Too novice. I think the author needs to practice more.
I'm watching Mortal, and I'm reading it well. What are you writing about, Shushan? You've finished writing one world, and then write the next one. Don't jump to the next world after writing only half of it. What you're doing makes me not in the mood to continue reading.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 25d ago
The emotional scenes are so awkwardly written. I can't stand it.
It feels pretty good, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch
For me, I feel that the whole story is pretty good, but I hope that the protagonist will not forget his father in the later stage, otherwise the emotional scenes in the early stage will be very awkward.
good
Hard work leads to no good development. Come on💪
The flaws are so big that I can't stand it!
Those who log in to the interstellar era are a failure. If people from the interstellar era can log in, any world will be turned upside down! The result is that nothing has changed! It would be better for the protagonist to travel through the heavens alone!
The writing is okay, and I can read it. There is one thing. The difference in speed between the protagonist's time in the Yin and Yang world and the time in the original world is not written. Moreover, if he returns to the original world at the age shown on the panel, his father may not be able to recognize him.
Poor writing
Too novice. I think the author needs to practice more.
I'm watching Mortal, and I'm reading it well. What are you writing about, Shushan? You've finished writing one world, and then write the next one. Don't jump to the next world after writing only half of it. What you're doing makes me not in the mood to continue reading.
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