After I Became an Immortal, I Discussed the Theory of Lifespan with the Longevity Elf
by Qingmu Qiji
About This Novel
Lin'er traveled through a fantasy world and loaded the immortal cultivation panel. Goblins, undead, orcs, elves, dragons... The world is full of all kinds of crises. Encountering a blond elf by chance, the two parties established a deep bond during the adventure. They were more than friends, but not lovers. Act 1... Flora: I'm sorry, a mortal's life span of several decades is too short. I can't accept your confession. Some years later. Flora finally agreed to the confession and accepted the wedding: you must always stay with me. A thousand years later. Flora's life was coming to an end and she fell into the arms of Lin'er in the Mahayana stage: Sir, is it really impossible to cultivate immortality without spiritual roots? This book is also called "As long as the title is long enough, it's a light novel." Ps: The author solemnly promises to make dumplings in the ending and not to do things like handing out knives.
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Official(6)Scraped 3d ago
Chapter 125
It was okay to read, but the author started to go off topic. The theme should have always been elves, and there were too many other female characters mixed in. Irene and Luna were really unnecessary, especially Luna's setting, which would make the lifespan theory a joke. Luna might become the biggest heroine in this book, and transform into a spirit after death? Are you kidding? It's just that the protagonist is alive and she lives, and the protagonist is dead and she is still alive. Even a pure-blood elf can't survive a weapon spirit. In the end, Luna and the protagonist will stay together and fly together? Qi Ling might as well let Shui Yue, a brainless person, take charge. And Irene is even funnier. Irene is the first to die. Is she here to create an inner demon for the protagonist to cultivate immortality? If this book has a happy ending, then the lifespan theory will lose its greatest charm. It is better to concentrate on falling in love with the elf and follow the introduction and title of the book. The other female characters have their own happiness just like the two junior brothers and sisters and the two muscular men and women. The protagonist is just a beautiful scenery passing by in their lives. It is an indispensable part of the longevity theory to flirt without marrying, and it is even more indispensable to flirt with someone not to marry. The theme of cultivating immortals is inseparable from the wealthy couple. The elves themselves can provide everything the four of them have. As long as the author is willing, after all, low-end characters such as the protagonist during the Qi refining period can provide what the elves need in exchange. The protagonist keeps running outside to join forces in exchange for various resources. This is an act of buying gold and silver. I'm even more looking forward to the author writing a story in which the protagonist encounters various immortal species, including elves, mermaids, Medusas, angels, demons, dragons, goblins, and elemental creatures. Isn't this more interesting than people? Anyway, it seems that the author has written more than a hundred chapters and there are no national events involved. There should be no mention of racial war in the outline, so the protagonist does not need to worry about the identity of the human race. It is not bad to be a traveling immortal cultivator, and then teleport home to sleep at any time.
The subject matter and design are good, but the plot is inferior, childish and far-fetched.
Nice looking, please update The plot is reasonable, the force value is normal, and there is no collapse.
Fresh ingredients are a tribute to gourmet food, and after trying all the delicacies, we are still craving for the taste. We call it home🍜
Lin'er, this name sounds like Ling'er
Average, everything is average, the plot setting is average, the setting is about cultivating immortals in a western fantasy world, no more, everything else is the same old story, the plot, where the protagonist fights a bear, I thought I was going to write about the darkness of human nature, but it turned another corner halfway. It's okay to pass the time
The subject matter is okay but the plot is not good.
If the plot is a long one or a travel story, it would be better. If later it is added that you can recruit disciples or kill some so-called gods, the quality of the plot can probably be improved. If you go to some churches or holy cities to show off and slap people in the face, this kind of exciting plot can be even better.
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Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 3d ago
Chapter 125
It was okay to read, but the author started to go off topic. The theme should have always been elves, and there were too many other female characters mixed in. Irene and Luna were really unnecessary, especially Luna's setting, which would make the lifespan theory a joke. Luna might become the biggest heroine in this book, and transform into a spirit after death? Are you kidding? It's just that the protagonist is alive and she lives, and the protagonist is dead and she is still alive. Even a pure-blood elf can't survive a weapon spirit. In the end, Luna and the protagonist will stay together and fly together? Qi Ling might as well let Shui Yue, a brainless person, take charge. And Irene is even funnier. Irene is the first to die. Is she here to create an inner demon for the protagonist to cultivate immortality? If this book has a happy ending, then the lifespan theory will lose its greatest charm. It is better to concentrate on falling in love with the elf and follow the introduction and title of the book. The other female characters have their own happiness just like the two junior brothers and sisters and the two muscular men and women. The protagonist is just a beautiful scenery passing by in their lives. It is an indispensable part of the longevity theory to flirt without marrying, and it is even more indispensable to flirt with someone not to marry. The theme of cultivating immortals is inseparable from the wealthy couple. The elves themselves can provide everything the four of them have. As long as the author is willing, after all, low-end characters such as the protagonist during the Qi refining period can provide what the elves need in exchange. The protagonist keeps running outside to join forces in exchange for various resources. This is an act of buying gold and silver. I'm even more looking forward to the author writing a story in which the protagonist encounters various immortal species, including elves, mermaids, Medusas, angels, demons, dragons, goblins, and elemental creatures. Isn't this more interesting than people? Anyway, it seems that the author has written more than a hundred chapters and there are no national events involved. There should be no mention of racial war in the outline, so the protagonist does not need to worry about the identity of the human race. It is not bad to be a traveling immortal cultivator, and then teleport home to sleep at any time.
The subject matter and design are good, but the plot is inferior, childish and far-fetched.
Nice looking, please update The plot is reasonable, the force value is normal, and there is no collapse.
Fresh ingredients are a tribute to gourmet food, and after trying all the delicacies, we are still craving for the taste. We call it home🍜
Lin'er, this name sounds like Ling'er
Average, everything is average, the plot setting is average, the setting is about cultivating immortals in a western fantasy world, no more, everything else is the same old story, the plot, where the protagonist fights a bear, I thought I was going to write about the darkness of human nature, but it turned another corner halfway. It's okay to pass the time
The subject matter is okay but the plot is not good.
If the plot is a long one or a travel story, it would be better. If later it is added that you can recruit disciples or kill some so-called gods, the quality of the plot can probably be improved. If you go to some churches or holy cities to show off and slap people in the face, this kind of exciting plot can be even better.
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