The Evil Lord is Going Crazy

Everyone has their own things they like or dislike. Don't argue in the comment area, especially about forensics. I said all the things I couldn't say just to argue, don't do that, dears.

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The style of my book writing may involve one person speaking a long paragraph. At this time, you need to break a paragraph into several natural paragraphs to write it more clearly. "Xxx" "xxx" "xxx" These are three paragraphs spoken by different people. "Xxx "xxx "xxx" The same paragraph spoken by the same person is divided into three natural paragraphs "xxx" indicates what the character is thinking [xxx] represents a proper noun or text In addition, if you have any questions about the plot of this book, you can post it in this comment. I will read it and answer it. Besides, I will persist 10,000 updates per day on shelves

The idea is good, the subject matter is good, but the problem is that the author's writing style seems to be a bit uncontrollable. There is a hammer here and a stick here and there. There is obviously a big problem with the rhythm of the plot, which is a bit hard to read.

It's a good book, but the way it's written is tiring to read. The twists are stiff and not clear enough. The story is indeed a good one. Come on, author.

The author who doesn't pretend to be dead is worth recommending

I have read more than 30 chapters so far, and I feel pretty good. It's quite to my liking. Just don't be a eunuch.

Do you know why the dinosaurs became extinct? Because their front limbs are too short to applaud your beauty

I read it faster, because the author's writing was a bit messy, so I just skipped it and read about 30 chapters. Generally speaking, it was okay, but there are some issues that the author needs to understand. There is no need for the author to specifically look up the information. You just need to understand a little bit about the background and conditions of the world. For example, the one with the wooden erecting at the city gate is only effective in one situation, that is, if you really have talents on the ground and your deeds can be spread, it is easy to use, but the problem is that the current fact is that the protagonist's place is blocked. In this case, this method is not easy to use at all, and it cannot attract talents.