Swallowing the Starry Sky: I Want to Become a Master of Human Beings
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Official(36)Scraped 2mo ago
So verbose
Are you trying to popularize the original work? You repeat the various content settings of the original work and add your own expansion of understanding. It feels like a book that is devoured by popular science. What you wrote is a fanfic. For those of you who have not read the original work, you don't need to repeat it.
heroine
Is the heroine Janet? I think she has been playing with the protagonist. I guess so.
Author, don't you think your writing is too verbose? It's a lot of nonsense. Why don't you explain this? It was all common sense in the original work, but it turned out to be nonsense for several chapters.
Do you know why you haven't been able to put it on the shelves until now? 60% Of a chapter used to be nonsense, and it was barely popular science. Just like the recent chapter, Thunderstorm Wine. This thing took nearly two chapters to write? One chapter of introduction is not enough, why should I write a chapter of tasting? Just refine all your current chapters and fold them in half, and you'll be able to put them on the shelves a long time ago
No introduction needed
Many people who read fan fiction know some common sense about the original work. If the author of the fan fiction introduces too many common sense about the original work, it will be self-defeating. In this way, readers will feel that you are just cheating on the numbers. If you say you don't want to read it for money, you can just cheat on it. No one will be willing to put it on the shelves.
The author lives by the sea. I am not fishing. I am on the way to the sea. The sea is full of water. I read Chapter 20 and the author is addicted to Chapter 19. I am suspicious of life because of water.
Chen Kaige: "Do you think you are very humorous? You stole my lyrics."
There are too many useless words, so I just skip them.
I don't want to read it just by looking at the title. It's all about Luo Feng. Are you writing about Luo Feng or about time travel?
Fuck, I thought this was pretty good. Who the hell hasn't read the original work? You're introducing him. We're here to read the book. We're here to see how you write the introduction. It's too shabby.
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Official(36)Scraped 2mo ago
So verbose
Are you trying to popularize the original work? You repeat the various content settings of the original work and add your own expansion of understanding. It feels like a book that is devoured by popular science. What you wrote is a fanfic. For those of you who have not read the original work, you don't need to repeat it.
heroine
Is the heroine Janet? I think she has been playing with the protagonist. I guess so.
Author, don't you think your writing is too verbose? It's a lot of nonsense. Why don't you explain this? It was all common sense in the original work, but it turned out to be nonsense for several chapters.
Do you know why you haven't been able to put it on the shelves until now? 60% Of a chapter used to be nonsense, and it was barely popular science. Just like the recent chapter, Thunderstorm Wine. This thing took nearly two chapters to write? One chapter of introduction is not enough, why should I write a chapter of tasting? Just refine all your current chapters and fold them in half, and you'll be able to put them on the shelves a long time ago
No introduction needed
Many people who read fan fiction know some common sense about the original work. If the author of the fan fiction introduces too many common sense about the original work, it will be self-defeating. In this way, readers will feel that you are just cheating on the numbers. If you say you don't want to read it for money, you can just cheat on it. No one will be willing to put it on the shelves.
The author lives by the sea. I am not fishing. I am on the way to the sea. The sea is full of water. I read Chapter 20 and the author is addicted to Chapter 19. I am suspicious of life because of water.
Chen Kaige: "Do you think you are very humorous? You stole my lyrics."
There are too many useless words, so I just skip them.
I don't want to read it just by looking at the title. It's all about Luo Feng. Are you writing about Luo Feng or about time travel?
Fuck, I thought this was pretty good. Who the hell hasn't read the original work? You're introducing him. We're here to read the book. We're here to see how you write the introduction. It's too shabby.
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