The Mysterious Time Manipulator
About This Novel
A time traveler who is familiar with the plot; The sequence in which the hidden sage stares; The glance cast by the Lord of Steam; A mind full of memories that can lead to contamination; There is also a Time Stone that comes with it; Look at this hereditary son of a marquis, What an impact it can have on the mysterious world!
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Official(18)Scraped 2mo ago
I have read dozens of chapters, and everything else is okay, except for the plot of Gena, which is too disgusting. He is a subordinate. The protagonist provides him with Sequence 9 and Sequence 8 potions, and will also provide him with them later. In a sense, the protagonist also saves Gena. However, the protagonist's behavior depends on his face, just like a licking dog.
What do you think, don't you just drink the potion directly? Do you still need to bring it with you? You said just bring the potion formula and ingredients. Why do you say that potions can be brought with you? I really doubt that you are writing a fanfic if you haven't read Mystery.
The writing is not good, the writing style is not good, the story is not good, the protagonist is not good
It's really not well written, the main character is not well described, I feel like a fool
The front is okay, but the back is scary to let yourself go.
Knowledge, always remember to focus on knowledge. Fighting scholars are not martial artists. You said that scholars are the main thing, but your article is all about fighting. Shouldn't it be based on summarizing fighting knowledge? Why is it still focused on actual combat? It's all about fighters.
A sea turtle doesn't drink the sailor path potion but instead drinks the audience path potion. Logically speaking, isn't a sailor more suitable for it?
It's basically useless writing, and the main character is just a novice.
I can't stand it anymore, I really can't stand it anymore.
Can you change the way you speak? It should be added after each sentence.
The character of Genna is really disgusting. He is a subordinate, not a friend, and he is also an ordinary officer waiting to retire. He is as disgusting as that white lotus.
Don't read the original text at all, it's all trash
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Official(18)Scraped 2mo ago
I have read dozens of chapters, and everything else is okay, except for the plot of Gena, which is too disgusting. He is a subordinate. The protagonist provides him with Sequence 9 and Sequence 8 potions, and will also provide him with them later. In a sense, the protagonist also saves Gena. However, the protagonist's behavior depends on his face, just like a licking dog.
What do you think, don't you just drink the potion directly? Do you still need to bring it with you? You said just bring the potion formula and ingredients. Why do you say that potions can be brought with you? I really doubt that you are writing a fanfic if you haven't read Mystery.
The writing is not good, the writing style is not good, the story is not good, the protagonist is not good
It's really not well written, the main character is not well described, I feel like a fool
The front is okay, but the back is scary to let yourself go.
Knowledge, always remember to focus on knowledge. Fighting scholars are not martial artists. You said that scholars are the main thing, but your article is all about fighting. Shouldn't it be based on summarizing fighting knowledge? Why is it still focused on actual combat? It's all about fighters.
A sea turtle doesn't drink the sailor path potion but instead drinks the audience path potion. Logically speaking, isn't a sailor more suitable for it?
It's basically useless writing, and the main character is just a novice.
I can't stand it anymore, I really can't stand it anymore.
Can you change the way you speak? It should be added after each sentence.
The character of Genna is really disgusting. He is a subordinate, not a friend, and he is also an ordinary officer waiting to retire. He is as disgusting as that white lotus.
Don't read the original text at all, it's all trash
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