The Ancestors Are Supreme

Do you know the author? In fact, no one reads your book at all. They are all my trump account. Believe it or not, they will deduct 666 from me when I give the order. ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧~~~~~I'll give you two more pictures. 😏😏😏 Come on, Ollie.

There have been many books of this type by this author recently. Let's call it the ancestral style. I read several of them one after another, but since they were all new, I finished them all in a short time. Generally speaking, the author's book is currently a fairy grass, non-toxic (maybe I have high poison resistance, but I really haven't found any poisonous points). As for the setting, since it is a cultivating family and the family has a large population, there is a lot of room for development. Unlike the one I read before, there are only a few people in the family, and I don't know how to develop it. Maybe a few decades will pass. There is still a lot of room for the author to keep writing. Not to mention becoming a god, but at least he can become a small celebrity. As for the writing style, I don't pay too much attention to it, just don't make it too white. And I also hope that it won't be written as a mindless novel, and that the villain will be given a little more intelligence.

The writing is good and the content is substantial and the theme is clear. But some things are still not handled well. First, it is true that the Foundation Establishment Pill is a golden key, but the price is still too expensive. Second, some small details are not handled well, which does not affect reading very much, but there are always loopholes. Thirdly, some of the cool points are not provided in place. Many things can be used to make the book fun, but the author ignores it. After all, reading a book always requires some intelligent cool points to make you happy. Fourth, the prices are really not equal. I feel that the system is not very complete. Just talking about the Foundation Establishment Pill, under normal circumstances, it can only be sold to cover the cost? What about profits? What about the promised alchemist becoming rich? Fifth, it's a bit long-winded. I have nothing to say about the previous free chapter. The later subscription chapters are said to be streamlined, but they are still a bit long-winded. I hope they can be corrected. Even if it is a waste of time, don't spend three chapters on one thing, and other things, such as small jokes, small jokes, and the like. Sixth, no more. That's all I've seen so far. If there are fellow Taoists who are better than me, please add more.

The first time his eldest son became a golden elixir. Second, waiting for his family, there are three golden elixirs. Third, wait for his eldest son to become Nascent Soul

After resurrecting from the theme, it's time to finish the book. In fact, the pig's trotters should be on the tablet to indicate how to play resurrection. Resurrection will turn into a novel about cultivating immortals. Then why bother holding up the corpse in front of it? There is no need for it. If it goes off topic, no one will read it. My personal opinion, don't scold me if you say something bad.

Then let the protagonist break through the Nascent Soul and then take charge of the family. Then the protagonist can cultivate future generations at home.

When this book had more than 200,000 words, I started to catch up on it and have been catching up until now. At the beginning, my memory was still very clear, but now I have forgotten the names of my descendants. I hope the author will open a separate chapter to explain it. For example: Ancestor: Lu Qing Generation: Lu Chaoxi, Lu Chaohe, Lu Mingchao Second generation:? ? ? Third Generation:? ? ? Generation N: Lu Weiwen? ? ? Let's post a single chapter like this to summarize all the names! Please! It's also for the author's benefit.

I hope the author will provide more data statistics in tables to avoid making mistakes every time.

I don't mean to leave negative reviews out of bad faith, nor am I here to cause trouble. The main thing is that it is a bit watery. Although it is not as exaggerated as in the jokes about water gods, it is still a bit watery. The old bookworm should have read the joke.

I'm a girl, why am I so fat when I suddenly appear here?