
You Can Become Stronger by Hanging up the God of Death
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Warriors, elementalists, enhancers, transformers... The world is peaceful and peaceful on the surface, but underneath there are turbulent undercurrents, extraordinary powers emerging one after another, and dangers everywhere. As an ordinary person, the only thing Lin Lichuan can rely on is the golden finger Shinigami's small game. He practices diligently 24 hours a day (gua) and practices (ji). When he has ten or eight Zanpakutō, plus a mask, he can go out and wander around. Oh, I almost forgot, there is also Beng Yu. Book club group: 959255191, welcome to chat.
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Official(221)Scraped 2d ago
If you don't know how to write a love line, just don't write it, okay?
A good novel changes completely just because of the appearance of that woman, and it feels like the protagonist is revolving around that woman. Moreover, that woman is weak and has no brains.
Very nice.
But I had already arranged less than 20 chapters and already started arranging the girl. The same routine as the pretense and slap in the face, I guess the heroine is almost him. I am sure that because the protagonist and he are at the same table, the chance of meeting is very, very high, and they are eating all the time, and it is ambiguous. Needless to say, the protagonist must be someone. If not, why did you have the opportunity to reject you? It's completely okay to refuse, it's completely okay to treat him as if he doesn't exist. Since the protagonist met this heroine, he has been in almost every chapter. Seeing this, I didn't say anything to arrange the heroine? But then what happened was that his aunt was so and so, and she even sent someone to come on board, all of whom were women. Do you want to start a harem? You've been given such a good opportunity. Are you saying you want to start a harem? Feel. I already suspect that you want to start a harem. But, I'm looking at the title of your novel? Your topic is normally about farming, but you wrote about having a harem, so I'm confused. Can you write it after the title? So that I can recognize it clearly and I won't read it. Author, you are good to me, whether you want high scores or not, everyone is fine, but can you write it down? When I saw this, I thought, oh, isn't this a harem? I won't see it right away, personal opinion. There is no need to be secretive about having a harem.
Is this a 9.0 rating?
I am still a little patient when it comes to novels, especially high-scoring novels. But this one has broken my mind! First: Hang up the system, you become a system that fights against the sky and the earth. Second: Two lives, time travel, the protagonist's mind is like a ZZ. In order to conceal his identity when he committed a murder, he actually chose to go into a store to buy clothes! Do all stores have video heads these days? Can't go to the night market? Or a stall place? Can't you just wear a hat and keep it low and grab some clothes? Third: A large group of brothers eating in the book review area! Can you take me with you? No heroine, no heroine? I'll fuck you big YE! After the novel introduced the system, I stayed up until the Special Administration Bureau and Qian Zhong tracked down the protagonist. In every chapter, even every three or four pages, Jiang Han's beautiful lady appears! Over twenty chapters, she is always there, and she still has the IQ and behavior of a three-year-old child. Throw it up, let's make some money together! Brother, take me with you. Does this deserve 9.0? That's it?
............I'm anxious to see it, who's even looking at it!
There is a way to improve your strength. If you don't improve it, just exchange 2 crystals for strengthening points. Keep the remaining 10 crystals. It's easier to do things with strength. I don't understand this.
It's so noob, it's simply poisonous
1. The protagonist can absorb the energy of meteorites and become stronger, so he thinks that all the meteorites in the world should be his? 2. Did the protagonist think too hard when choosing his faction? Have you ever learned more about these forces and what they do? Although these underworld forces are basically not clean. But just because the female deskmate is the daughter of the boss of this power, he will help this power? The enemy who opposes this force must be very bad, the enemy of the protagonist? 3. The protagonist meets a woman with extraordinary luck. If you draw cards by her side, you can draw good cards. If you don't draw cards by her side, you will draw not-so-good cards. But whether it is a good card or a bad card, the protagonist can use it immediately. I drew a magic gun and encountered a mission target. The defense around me was extremely tight, so I couldn't get close at all and could only assassinate it from a distance. The effect of the magic gun is for long-distance and rapid assassination. After drawing the Black Rope God's Punishment King's Broken Armor Rope Clothes, he encountered an enemy whose strength was much higher than his own. None of the existing cards could deal with it, so he had no choice but to fight. Moreover, in the original work, Komamura Zuojin's desperate move can only be used at the risk of his life. When the protagonist uses it, his spiritual pressure drops a little, without any other side effects. I drew Senbonzakura and was surrounded by a large group of low-strength enemies. Senbonzakura is the sacred weapon of the Qingzao soldiers. After drawing a gourd pill with healing power, I met my aunt who was injured. After drawing the second stage of Black Wing Demon's transformation, he encountered an enemy that was much stronger than him. This whole world revolves around the protagonist and his system?
I originally saw that there were relatively few books about the God of Death, so I thought about reading it, but after reading 5 chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. If the writing is not good, why don't I just work on the plot a little bit? But it turned out that the plot is so cliche that it's almost dead, and there are also embarrassing scenes in many places. I really can't stand it.
How did I abandon books step by step?
First of all, I was attracted by the title, mainly because I am also an anime fan, and the Zanpakutō in Bleach is also one of my favorite contents, so I clicked on it and took a look. Then, from the beginning to the first killing with pig's feet, I could still accept it, and it didn't seem to be a big problem. Including the system hang-up upgrade, etc. I accepted it all. Then came the poison. The first poison is the person who is going to intervene in the place where gangsters are involved. Since there are surveillance bacteria, as a reborn guy, let's do some details. The god was wearing something similar to that woman. Therefore, monitoring bacteria is almost a decoration. . The second poison is that I guess my identity every day. Needless to say, all old bookworms should have a deep understanding of this, so I won't say more. Anyway, after watching it, I really suddenly had no motivation to watch it. To be honest, I hope someone can help me try the drug in the future. I don't mean to belittle the author, I just say that these two parts made me feel like I didn't want to read it. It's like if I eat an apple and a worm comes out, I just throw away the rest, even if it tastes good.
Typical novice novel, novice plot. The only attractive thing is probably the two labels System and Death, right?
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Official(221)Scraped 2d ago
If you don't know how to write a love line, just don't write it, okay?
A good novel changes completely just because of the appearance of that woman, and it feels like the protagonist is revolving around that woman. Moreover, that woman is weak and has no brains.
Very nice.
But I had already arranged less than 20 chapters and already started arranging the girl. The same routine as the pretense and slap in the face, I guess the heroine is almost him. I am sure that because the protagonist and he are at the same table, the chance of meeting is very, very high, and they are eating all the time, and it is ambiguous. Needless to say, the protagonist must be someone. If not, why did you have the opportunity to reject you? It's completely okay to refuse, it's completely okay to treat him as if he doesn't exist. Since the protagonist met this heroine, he has been in almost every chapter. Seeing this, I didn't say anything to arrange the heroine? But then what happened was that his aunt was so and so, and she even sent someone to come on board, all of whom were women. Do you want to start a harem? You've been given such a good opportunity. Are you saying you want to start a harem? Feel. I already suspect that you want to start a harem. But, I'm looking at the title of your novel? Your topic is normally about farming, but you wrote about having a harem, so I'm confused. Can you write it after the title? So that I can recognize it clearly and I won't read it. Author, you are good to me, whether you want high scores or not, everyone is fine, but can you write it down? When I saw this, I thought, oh, isn't this a harem? I won't see it right away, personal opinion. There is no need to be secretive about having a harem.
Is this a 9.0 rating?
I am still a little patient when it comes to novels, especially high-scoring novels. But this one has broken my mind! First: Hang up the system, you become a system that fights against the sky and the earth. Second: Two lives, time travel, the protagonist's mind is like a ZZ. In order to conceal his identity when he committed a murder, he actually chose to go into a store to buy clothes! Do all stores have video heads these days? Can't go to the night market? Or a stall place? Can't you just wear a hat and keep it low and grab some clothes? Third: A large group of brothers eating in the book review area! Can you take me with you? No heroine, no heroine? I'll fuck you big YE! After the novel introduced the system, I stayed up until the Special Administration Bureau and Qian Zhong tracked down the protagonist. In every chapter, even every three or four pages, Jiang Han's beautiful lady appears! Over twenty chapters, she is always there, and she still has the IQ and behavior of a three-year-old child. Throw it up, let's make some money together! Brother, take me with you. Does this deserve 9.0? That's it?
............I'm anxious to see it, who's even looking at it!
There is a way to improve your strength. If you don't improve it, just exchange 2 crystals for strengthening points. Keep the remaining 10 crystals. It's easier to do things with strength. I don't understand this.
It's so noob, it's simply poisonous
1. The protagonist can absorb the energy of meteorites and become stronger, so he thinks that all the meteorites in the world should be his? 2. Did the protagonist think too hard when choosing his faction? Have you ever learned more about these forces and what they do? Although these underworld forces are basically not clean. But just because the female deskmate is the daughter of the boss of this power, he will help this power? The enemy who opposes this force must be very bad, the enemy of the protagonist? 3. The protagonist meets a woman with extraordinary luck. If you draw cards by her side, you can draw good cards. If you don't draw cards by her side, you will draw not-so-good cards. But whether it is a good card or a bad card, the protagonist can use it immediately. I drew a magic gun and encountered a mission target. The defense around me was extremely tight, so I couldn't get close at all and could only assassinate it from a distance. The effect of the magic gun is for long-distance and rapid assassination. After drawing the Black Rope God's Punishment King's Broken Armor Rope Clothes, he encountered an enemy whose strength was much higher than his own. None of the existing cards could deal with it, so he had no choice but to fight. Moreover, in the original work, Komamura Zuojin's desperate move can only be used at the risk of his life. When the protagonist uses it, his spiritual pressure drops a little, without any other side effects. I drew Senbonzakura and was surrounded by a large group of low-strength enemies. Senbonzakura is the sacred weapon of the Qingzao soldiers. After drawing a gourd pill with healing power, I met my aunt who was injured. After drawing the second stage of Black Wing Demon's transformation, he encountered an enemy that was much stronger than him. This whole world revolves around the protagonist and his system?
I originally saw that there were relatively few books about the God of Death, so I thought about reading it, but after reading 5 chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. If the writing is not good, why don't I just work on the plot a little bit? But it turned out that the plot is so cliche that it's almost dead, and there are also embarrassing scenes in many places. I really can't stand it.
How did I abandon books step by step?
First of all, I was attracted by the title, mainly because I am also an anime fan, and the Zanpakutō in Bleach is also one of my favorite contents, so I clicked on it and took a look. Then, from the beginning to the first killing with pig's feet, I could still accept it, and it didn't seem to be a big problem. Including the system hang-up upgrade, etc. I accepted it all. Then came the poison. The first poison is the person who is going to intervene in the place where gangsters are involved. Since there are surveillance bacteria, as a reborn guy, let's do some details. The god was wearing something similar to that woman. Therefore, monitoring bacteria is almost a decoration. . The second poison is that I guess my identity every day. Needless to say, all old bookworms should have a deep understanding of this, so I won't say more. Anyway, after watching it, I really suddenly had no motivation to watch it. To be honest, I hope someone can help me try the drug in the future. I don't mean to belittle the author, I just say that these two parts made me feel like I didn't want to read it. It's like if I eat an apple and a worm comes out, I just throw away the rest, even if it tastes good.
Typical novice novel, novice plot. The only attractive thing is probably the two labels System and Death, right?
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Current ranking of the book list: Not ranked (will be deleted in the next update) Readability score: 4 Reading experience score: 3.5 Plot-rich score: 3 Characterization score: 3 End of story score: 2 Number of reads: 1 Overall score: 15.5 Other comments: The overall story structure is actually quite good, but it is a pity that the author's writing style and ability to control the plot are limited, and he failed to develop it in depth, so that many plots are anticlimactic, and even Goldfinger, which should be brilliant, always reveals a small-minded atmosphere. If it weren't for the short length of the whole work, after all the characters that were foreshadowed in the middle and late stages disappeared, I would actually want to quit. Generally speaking, this story is just for fresh reading. Once the author has revealed all his cards, you can withdraw if you feel there is no need to persist.




I finished reading it in one go, and it's pretty good that there are basically no major problems. I haven't watched Bleach+, but it doesn't matter! Seedling



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