
Mystery: Lucky One
by There Are Stars In The South China Sea
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A new book has been released, the title is "Secret: Pretending to be a Pure White Angel at the Beginning", please support Meow~--------The bad news is that he is dead. The good news is that time has passed. The bad news is that the wear is mysterious. The good news is that I haven't read the book. The bad news is... What you just swallowed seems to be a copy of Lucky's Extraordinary Properties. -------- "Writers need to be logical, but fate never follows logic." -------- Provincial version introduction: mysterious fan fiction, female protagonist, no cp, monster path, cloud reader (?) This article is also called? Tarot Club Raising a Baby?
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Female protagonist article, no cp, completed The bad news is that it's dead. The good news is that time has passed. The bad news is that the wear is mysterious. The good news is that I haven't read the book. The bad news is... What you just swallowed seems to be a copy of Lucky's Extraordinary Properties. "Writers need to be logical, but fate is never logical." Introduction to the provincial version: mysterious fan fiction, female protagonist, no cp, monster path, cloud reader (?) This article is also called "Tarot Club Raising a Baby"




2.07 Million words. Completed. Female protagonist, no cp, path of destiny. Atypical and mysterious fanfic. The fate path of this article is set to be either a living being whose characteristics are directly fed into the mouth, or a lifeless one who is sent to the former as a potion, but neither of them can fight at all (the author cannot write it). Combined with the attributes of the naughty child (a born mythical creature stitched together from the memory of a human child and the essence) set by the author for the protagonist, the tone of the full text is different from the main line of ordinary fan fiction, where the sequence of promotions is the main line. Instead, the protagonist's own unconstrained whims and behaviors become the biggest attraction, but that's all. So all the interactions with Amon are very interesting. Klein is to the protagonist what the Red Angel is to Amon. Many of the plots involving children are also interesting. In addition, the protagonist's high status but non-human mind and child's knowledge level can also create a cool point: all people below a certain status must serve and support the protagonist. But this setting of the fate path and the protagonist's style also brings disadvantages. One is that there are almost no battle scenes related to the protagonist in the entire text, because the protagonist is completely illiterate in mysticism. He has the status of an angel but his actual methods are not as good as sequence five. He basically has no other tricks except showing the form of mythical creatures. This situation is throughout the entire text - after all, the protagonist does not have to do anything and can just wait for the magic potion to be delivered to his door. Naturally, he has no motivation to learn about mystical knowledge. The demigod enemy who was shown the form of a mythical creature by the protagonist seemed to have no means and just stayed there and lost control. It can be seen that the author is not good at depicting battle scenes in other ways. Second, the whole text contains a large number of thoughts and actions based on inspiration rather than logic. At the same time, there is no advancement and progress in all aspects of the protagonist, which may cause aesthetic fatigue to readers. In my opinion, the protagonist is still essentially a mythical creature who seeks advantages and avoids disadvantages, bullies the weak and fears the strong, and has no knowledge or abilities. The protagonist has power but does not know how to use it; he has no knowledge but is unwilling to learn*; he thinks about things as soon as they come up, forgets urgent matters in the next second, and does not think of them until the consequences happen. He is often unable to deal with the aftermath by himself, and does not have the ability to take responsibility. This can make it difficult for readers to anchor on the protagonist's own charisma. After all, personally, I don't think the above-mentioned naughty characteristics and the thinking of mythical creatures can bring any charm to attract readers. Maybe only the power of mythical creatures can, but the protagonist does not have this thing (he has a personality but can't use it). He can only fry fish in the Tarot Club, and he is very afraid of death when he meets Ulotius and Amon. Such a protagonist can become a god in the end, which highlights the unreasonableness of a fate, but the fate set by the author is indeed this style. However, it is very likely that the author set the "endless chaos" of fate to come up as he imagined, in order to fit his own writing comfort zone - this style has greatly reduced the requirements for the author, and there is no need to consider logical coherence and rationality, nor the need to consider cohesion, foreshadowing, and the self-consistency of the characters themselves. After all, the protagonist is set up to be chaotic. But the result is that an uncharismatic protagonist can hold up part of the story, but not the entire story. Overall: Grain-, you can read as appropriate.




No.: 085 Recommendation index: 🌟🌟🌟★ Update status: Completed Tendency: changing orders Rating: Writing style: 🌟🌟🌟★ Characterization: 🌟🌟🌟★ Creativity: 🌟🌟🌟★ Logic: 🌟🌟★ Evaluation time: (2025.11.28) Mysterious fan fiction that is above the excellent line in all aspects should be fine if it is an original masterpiece of the same level. Basically, readers who have not read it or have not read the original work can also read it. I have never read the original novel, but have only read some of the second creations about Time Traveler, Monster Path, and Destiny Sequence Zero. The plot is also very reasonable. It is a novel worth reading in the near future.




It's so beautiful, a rare heroine, and one who is not prophetic, so well written!













