I Work as a Soldier in the City Lord's Mansion, and My Strength Has Surpassed That of the City Lord
About This Novel
In the city lord's mansion, the city lord looked at Su Xuan, his eyes were shining, and he spoke righteously: "Su Xuan, your strength has surpassed mine. Being a soldier is too humiliating! The city lord ordered you to take this piece, and you will be the city lord from now on!"... On top of the tower of Tiangang City, looking at the overwhelming tide of monsters and beasts all over the mountains and plains, the defenders were desperate and the citizens were wailing. "Lord City Lord, come and save your people!" Su Xuan covered the demon beasts with a palm, and then he jumped into the group of demon beasts and tore the demon king alive with his bare hands. The whole city was shocked! This man is actually wearing the lowest uniform of a government soldier? Can ordinary soldiers tear apart the demon king? ? The combat power configuration of the City Lord's Mansion has become so outrageous? ? ? ..."Su Xuan, you are only eighteen, and your strength exceeds that of the city lord. How can you be a soldier in the city lord's palace? Why don't you consider forming a Taoist partner with me?" Saint No. 1'S eyes were burning, fiery and bold. "If you want to get married, you will also become a Taoist couple with me. You go to the other side and line up!" Saint No. 2 Immediately rushed. "Obviously I came first!" Saint No. 3 Looked at Su Xuan pitifully. "The three sisters are all so outstanding." Saint No. 4 Sighed: "I envy them for being so close to my brother. Now that I'm close to my brother, the three sisters won't be angry, right?" Su Xuan shook his head: "Women are really troublesome."
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Official(45)Scraped 12d ago
This book is good
The writing is quite interesting, the author's writing is good, and the protagonist has also killed a lot of people. It's not the Holy Mother. It's okay so far. I hope there will be a female protagonist in the future.
The writing is not modern, the language is too modern and it loses its appeal.
A little suggestion
I've read a lot of cool articles. The fun part of a plot like this, where the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, lies in the information gap. How to create this information gap is the key to a good article. However, if the pretentious plot always involves the protagonist meeting a brainless villain and then bringing someone to the door to slap him in the face, it will easily make people tired. In the early stage, it feels like having a Yang family is enough. It is best for the show-off plot to be one in which the protagonist inadvertently or passively shows off. When the protagonist takes the initiative to show off his strength, it's better to avoid the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. It's better to be more direct. (Of course, this only represents personal preference) It is best to have the blessing of the main plot so that the writing will not be empty. Generally, the main plot of this kind of book is about becoming stronger through cultivation, driven by major world events, or forced by the character's emotional system. I see that you have written more than ninety chapters and still don't understand what the main plot is. If that's the case, the first part is pretty good and the second part will inevitably be empty and boring. I hope the author can work hard! I'll take care of it for a while and then come back.
The book is a good book. Why don't I have a car or a road? My driver's license is in vain😎😎
The rhythm and excitement here are pretty good, why can't the data come up?
Speed up the update speed, it's not enough
Is this a eunuch? ? ? ?
To be honest, the writing is pretty good. I'm ready to keep chasing it. Hey, times are bad.
Can
Sorry, I have to write a comment in ten Chinese characters
some feelings
The book was on the recommendation page. I thought that the setting and the fact that this book is quite novel in the same type of novels should be good. But after reading it, I have to be careful and don't speak much. But I just want to say that there are some parts, such as the plot of the fine, which really poisoned me. It is really amazing. Let's not talk about the outrageous fine. A soldier is usually given some flowers. The beer thing and the boss became brothers. This different world setting seems to give me a tribal feeling. I didn't mean to give him points or anything. If I see a new book that doesn't suit my taste, I won't read it. However, the rating of this book is really a bit outrageous. Some good books can only get about 7 points. Is it refreshing or poisonous? When an author said it was pretty good, I really thought it was outrageous. When I saw that Good Guy had written more than a million words, no offense intended, Shuangwen Master Dou Po Cang Qiong didn't even dare to write like this. It gave me the feeling that he was just imagining it. Let me explain, imagining is not the same as imagining, but the writing style is okay, and at least it doesn't feel like he's jumping into a drama. I can't deny it completely. This creative inspiration is really attractive. I've been a bookworm for 5 years and give it a fair review. If anyone criticizes me, I can only say: Ah, yes, yes
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Not bad, it suits my personal taste
Rating
Community(0)
Official(45)Scraped 12d ago
This book is good
The writing is quite interesting, the author's writing is good, and the protagonist has also killed a lot of people. It's not the Holy Mother. It's okay so far. I hope there will be a female protagonist in the future.
The writing is not modern, the language is too modern and it loses its appeal.
A little suggestion
I've read a lot of cool articles. The fun part of a plot like this, where the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, lies in the information gap. How to create this information gap is the key to a good article. However, if the pretentious plot always involves the protagonist meeting a brainless villain and then bringing someone to the door to slap him in the face, it will easily make people tired. In the early stage, it feels like having a Yang family is enough. It is best for the show-off plot to be one in which the protagonist inadvertently or passively shows off. When the protagonist takes the initiative to show off his strength, it's better to avoid the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. It's better to be more direct. (Of course, this only represents personal preference) It is best to have the blessing of the main plot so that the writing will not be empty. Generally, the main plot of this kind of book is about becoming stronger through cultivation, driven by major world events, or forced by the character's emotional system. I see that you have written more than ninety chapters and still don't understand what the main plot is. If that's the case, the first part is pretty good and the second part will inevitably be empty and boring. I hope the author can work hard! I'll take care of it for a while and then come back.
The book is a good book. Why don't I have a car or a road? My driver's license is in vain😎😎
The rhythm and excitement here are pretty good, why can't the data come up?
Speed up the update speed, it's not enough
Is this a eunuch? ? ? ?
To be honest, the writing is pretty good. I'm ready to keep chasing it. Hey, times are bad.
Can
Sorry, I have to write a comment in ten Chinese characters
some feelings
The book was on the recommendation page. I thought that the setting and the fact that this book is quite novel in the same type of novels should be good. But after reading it, I have to be careful and don't speak much. But I just want to say that there are some parts, such as the plot of the fine, which really poisoned me. It is really amazing. Let's not talk about the outrageous fine. A soldier is usually given some flowers. The beer thing and the boss became brothers. This different world setting seems to give me a tribal feeling. I didn't mean to give him points or anything. If I see a new book that doesn't suit my taste, I won't read it. However, the rating of this book is really a bit outrageous. Some good books can only get about 7 points. Is it refreshing or poisonous? When an author said it was pretty good, I really thought it was outrageous. When I saw that Good Guy had written more than a million words, no offense intended, Shuangwen Master Dou Po Cang Qiong didn't even dare to write like this. It gave me the feeling that he was just imagining it. Let me explain, imagining is not the same as imagining, but the writing style is okay, and at least it doesn't feel like he's jumping into a drama. I can't deny it completely. This creative inspiration is really attractive. I've been a bookworm for 5 years and give it a fair review. If anyone criticizes me, I can only say: Ah, yes, yes
Follow and see
Not bad, it suits my personal taste
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