Douluo Continent, I Become Chang Yeyue

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The author is very attentive. He does not join any forces at the moment. He relies on "Mystery" for development. There is no slap-in-the-face plot. He does not lick the original owner. He was abducted when Tang Ya was young. There is no love but friendship. The protagonist is very sober. There is no big poison. He does not go against history without reason. He has objective evaluation. But I feel that there are too few people. I hope all book friends can help the author of this book.

For a novice writer, the writing style of this setting is very good, but there are some problems with the details. Many people have wrong identities and status, which leads to problems in character dialogue. There are minor problems with character levels (not a big problem). The plot connection is not smooth (not very stiff). The character panel displays *** (asterisk) which affects the look and feel. It's still great, good luck to the author! 😶

Author, author, I really beg you, please update as soon as possible. Can you update more?

It's just a bit slow, can it be faster?

When will it be updated? Please update.

Come on, author. As long as you work hard, you will definitely be able to write a few more chapters.

All in all, it's very attentive and the content is not too bizarre.

Come on, although it's a little watery, you really wrote it carefully👍Looking forward to your update😹😹😹

For a newbie, the writing is already very good. Please help.