Secret: I Jumped Repeatedly between Two Timelines

I really like this setting. It would be better if the protagonist in the author's works had the IQ of a normal person. Why does he have to talk to himself all the time? (I think just saying what comes to mind is a sign of low IQ. What's more, in a mysterious world, what's the difference between this and streaking in the street? How can you succeed if you can't hide what's on your mind? Big thing? ) Let everyone know what you are thinking? Based on this alone, no matter how unlucky the protagonist is or how powerful he is, I can only give him negative points, because such a protagonist without ordinary people's IQ can do this. If he is a normal person, he should be able to do better. This setting is really a pity. If the protagonist's IQ was more normal, or the author's writing style was stronger, I would really give it five stars and order it all, but the protagonist likes to talk to himself, which really ruins all the impression points, so I give it three stars.

The protagonist of Ox and Horse talks to himself every day, wouldn't he think about such important information in his heart? If the author doesn't change what he says, it will be annoying to watch.

You are a symbol of evil spirits and trickery You are the faceless person who steals lives and tells fortunes You are a Taoist of weirdness and teasing

I'm very happy to see the new work of Wei Mi, Wrong way, don't like it Su Huan didn't want to see it, so he withdrew.

Let's just talk about it. When I was chatting with a friend about Suhuan, we were talking about Squid's characterization of Lumian, and suddenly I discovered a big problem: Although Lumian is said to be desperate and self-destructive, he is still a bit "cowardly" in nature. He has no idea of ​​actively seeking to resurrect his sister. When encountering things, he often wants to use death to escape pain... This kind of image, so when I watched it, I was quite puzzled. Even Tang San went to kill the spider blocking the way after Xiao Wu died (no). He doesn't look like a hunter or a hunter, but really looks like a witch, which actually fits the character Squid has given him. Well, I won't say more about Lumian's image. After all, it is a subjective idea. Everyone has Lumian Lee in their eyes. Maybe the traits I hate are the types that others like. But my thoughts when I started this book were: Write a Lumian who is different from the one in Suhuan, a "iron-blooded knight" Lumian who unites his companions. In addition, Su Huan had been finished for a while, and there was a lot of criticism on the Internet, so I basically started writing it as soon as my mind got excited. The thought in my mind at that time was, "Damn it, how could a masterpiece like Mysterious be written like this in the sequel? Is Tian Zun so crotch-stretching?" I wrote the beginning, strengthened Tian Zun, and then started writing furiously. Then, I'm very sorry that there were some problems in the early stages of this book. This is also the case. There are many settings in this book that have not been carefully considered, including the travel time of the electric meter being reversed. However, some settings were modified later, and it should still be possible to get it back to normal, right? The second problem is the conflict with the squid setting. Well, please forgive Yue Hu. Many of the settings in Yue Hu's mind are still from the mysterious period. Many of them are the speculations of book friends and fan authors at that time, and some are preconceived. In addition, when I wrote the outline of this book, Cuttlefish's official account didn't even publish the recipe for the "wrong" potion, let alone the questions that were answered in the articles on the official account. After the cuttlefish official account is updated, it is also very difficult to find out whether there is any conflict with your settings. It's not that I don't want to look for it, it's that sometimes it's really hard for me to find it perfectly. For example, questions and answers related to the Moon Path may appear under the Abyss Path, and the setting of a certain person in the past may be under another article... Then there are some plots that are exclusive to physical books, and Baidu Encyclopedia is so smart that sometimes it will include people's settings, so you can only search for keywords and translate the original text. Then Su Huan adds about 7 to 8 million words of mystery, which is close to 10 million words... When Cuttlefish sends out a new setting, I look at my outline and oh wow, that's it, the setting is wrong. If you look at it again, well, it's about hundreds of thousands or even hundreds of thousands of words ago. If you change one word, you'll have to change the subsequent plot of hundreds of thousands of words. So when you see this part of the BUG, ​​please forgive me. Yuehu tried his best to modify it, but QwQ really couldn't change the main plot.

I really like the setting and character of the protagonist, but in some aspects I feel that the protagonist is a bit suppressed and transcended. Shouldn't a person with a pillar status melt in his mouth? He directly occupies the symbol of Tianzun. Why can't he melt in his mouth and still be afraid of Amon?

What's wrong with mumbling to yourself?

It's boring after that. I haven't been promoted. After reaching the fourth sequence, I might as well become an ancient scholar. After all, I have been a bacon on the Source Castle for thousands of years.

What is written in Zhenzhuoshenjiang is extremely unreasonable. The Storm Divine Punishment directly destroys an area (the storm you described punishes one person after another. When did the gods become so merciful?). Can the Red Angel stop Sequence Three? (The Red Angel is in the body of a Sequence 4 gatekeeper, and a red sacrificial card is added) (The opponent is in full state, Storm Path Sequence 3) There is also Lumiana. When she comes to this world, the Ring of Fate package appears. The protagonist is believing in fate at this time. Has his brain been stolen by mystery? (The appearance of Lumiana is equivalent to the dark screen of the Ring of Fate, and system guidance suddenly appears)

It's quite interesting. There are very few novels with two timelines: Lord of Mysteries and Circle of Fate running at the same time. I hope the author can continue to update them.