Ultraman's Guide to Earth Care

What I want to see is the awakening of the will of the earth or the completion of symbiosis with the earth to become the will of the planet. But it's almost 50 damn pictures. The protagonist has been stuck preventing symbiosis on the planet. That's where co-authoring gets stuck, right?

Let's be honest and see if you can accept it. 1. I can't find the angle of entry, or I don't know who the protagonist is. The angle of the supporting role is the same as that of the protagonist or even lower than that of the protagonist. There are too many supporting roles, and the protagonist can be said to be dispensable or even unnecessary. This is very bad, because the subsequent change of this angle will appear very abrupt. 2. There is no progressive relationship between the plot and the environment or it is very vague. The environment switches quickly and is not gradually unfolded. It is difficult to construct the scene in the mind. Although you use a lot of descriptions and rhetoric in some scenes, it is useless. The scenes jump quickly and the importance of the scenes cannot be distinguished. 3. There is no main line, or the main line and branch lines cannot be distinguished, and the distribution of importance is abnormal. It may be that what is to be done is described in the previous article, and some unimportant things later are re-described, confusing the connection. The following is my personal view 1. The narrative angle is a bit unfamiliar and confusing. You interrupt and I interrupt. I don't know who said it or who is the main idea. 2. The protagonist is a little bit of a primary school student, and adults can't fit in. Elementary school students are not so naive, or how to describe "no"? Who is the audience? The protagonist has very few roles, and even if there are any, other people's perspectives are higher and more important than the protagonist. Can you bring in the perspective of a passerby who is barely a character?

I came up with some ideas and checked in successfully.

I haven't used the three golden ones well, so I have no desire to read them. Inexplicable

I really like the red clay one! ! I will also like this one very much! Come on, author

After reading three chapters, I have no interest in reading anymore🤐

I originally thought there would be no more Ultraman series, but now there is another one, so happy! The writing of this book is as good as the previous one, Hong Tu. The feeling has been greatly improved, and the character creation also has a very three-dimensional feeling. I like it! Especially the character where the protagonist is a ball. I have really seen enough of Tiga's opening. I have become a Buddha. There is nothing new. Now I can even see a ball. The biggest problem now is the lack of updates! At least 10,000 words are updated every day!

Just slowly put together ten words.

It looks good, I love reading it, the author will update it soon

Okay, self-feeling, plot and character description