Dou Po: Emperor Yan, but Xiao Yan

Why can't it be Lily? The author is great?

I really want to give this book a thumbs down. The title is catchy, and there's nothing wrong with it, but he threw the title into the shit. I thought that as a time traveler, no matter how low your moral character, you would never be so shameless. No matter how stupid you are, when you are working part-time, you understand that strength is the strongest. If you don't have the strength, why should people give you face? Look at the part about breaking off the engagement. Do you want to read what you wrote? He didn't care about what he was thinking, but he immediately started to curse the next second. And those of you who are commenting, how many books have you read? If it's written according to his original plot, why should I read this? Why shouldn't I read the original? So what's the point of writing it down?

The author obviously has something, and he really understands Doupo. I was stunned to see so many wild and unconstrained ideas that he could still do this! Sure enough, Tudou is a book writer and he knows a lot about p😯 If the author regards writing fan fiction as a hobby, then there is no need to read the following comments, just treat them as my P. If the author does write books as a side job, then I think the author needs to improve a bit. The biggest problem in the book is the plot. The protagonist in the author's writing is Xiao Yan, who has turned on the simple mode and is very lucky. Many of the pitfalls that Xiao Yan has stepped on have been avoided by the author either by modifying the settings or by thinking of new ideas. It can be said that the journey has been smooth sailing. Although the author can write the plot however he likes, but at what cost? You can use elixirs by setting the protagonist's fighting spirit, so the coming-of-age ceremony is about fighting directly, so hurry up. The price is that the first few chapters are very bland. There is no aggrievement of being ridiculed by the Xiao family, no shame of being broken off, and of course there is no exhilaration of defeating Xiao Ning with seven levels of fighting spirit. Readers will not be drawn into the emotions of the protagonist, and they will feel, oh, cultivation is so fast. It was set to be a fighting master in Qingshan Town, and it was so easy to take away the little medical fairy. The price is that the relationship with the little medical fairy is completely a superior benefactor, and the relationship line cannot progress at all. If we don't watch out for each other and cooperate in treasure hunting, there will be no closeness. If there are no fighters who rush into the Dou Master headquarters to save people, there will naturally be no emotion. Where does the bond come from? Set the Qinglian Earth Core Fire to run on its own, replenishing more than it consumes. It is recommended to change it to Qinglian brand perpetual motion machine. It's directly the power of my thinking The setting allows the Motie mercenary group to go directly to the Xiao family, avoiding the original plot of the Mo family and the Tianshen Mansion. The price is to be like the Little Medical Fairy, with no bonds and no emotions. Fortunately, this is a fanfic and everyone knows the character. If this were original, I wouldn't understand the significance of this character's appearance. I probably won't even be able to remember the character's name after reading the book. It is set that there is no Douzong in the three surrounding empires, and Xie Biyan was brutally wiped out. The protagonist leads Medusa to easily defeat the three empires. The price is that without the tempering of the flames of war, Xiao Meng is completely a grassroots team. Without turning the tide in times of crisis, the protagonist cannot become the spiritual pillar of the alliance. The entire Xiao Alliance is completely about the protagonist saying "I have a background, I have an elixir, you all listen to me, you know?", And then the alliance is established. Compared with the original Yanmeng, it is simply a copycat. I won't talk about the rest, there are too many, not to mention I haven't finished them all. Although Tudou has some logic problems in some details, he is a real genius in terms of plot routines and fun points, so Dou Po can last for a long time. The author seems to have cleverly bypassed the pitfalls of the original protagonist, but in fact every change goes against the refreshing foundation of the original work. Of course you can say that Doupo's routines are too old and people don't want to watch them anymore. Then you should come up with new routines and new plots instead of deleting routine plots. I don't come to Dou Po fandom to see how you beat the game in easy mode with one life.

This book by the author has not been read by many people. But what about Feng Qing'er's arrangements? After all, she is the most dedicated woman in the original novel.

Let me give you five points first. I like the female version of Xiao Yan.

I found out that the author chose the wrong name. The little medical fairy could be called Xiao Yixian or Xiao Xianer or Xiao Qinger.

I have to say that the author has a very deep understanding of Dou Po.

Is it a hundred? (Damn, why does it have to be ten words?)

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