The Young Master of the Flame Tribe of Dou Po

What kind of woman does the Yan tribe want to lick a Medusa? It's so funny. Medusa offends the protagonist and instead of killing her directly, she helps evolve. Just a hehe. I feel like a nouveau riche.

Don't create too many original storylines. Refer to the Flame Clan and the Resurrection of the Thunder Clan in Dou Po. Make some unique features of your own. That is, write more about your family's rise and diplomacy, and write around the eight clans. After all, the protagonist of your book has a very high starting point. He is the son of the leader of the Yan Clan. He is not the Xiao family collateral branch in other novels and has no background. You and Xiao Yan are not on the same level now. There is no need to follow the original story line. Don't force the original story line. You can really write some characteristics of your own!

Chapter 40 left me feeling so embarrassed. It was said before that the military mayors were from hostile factions, but this is the result? If you can't beat you, do people still believe you? Funny? Why do they go through so many twists and turns when they are both members of the Yan Clan, and they are so powerful that they can crush people to death? Why on earth does a commander still have to look at the faces of his subordinates? Don't you want to keep it for the New Year? There were millions of people from the eight ancient tribes. Is it difficult to die just a few of them? Look at the Soul Clan, among the hundreds of Fighting Saints, who dares to refute the Soul Emperor? Looking at Yan Zhen, even several fighting emperors are showing mercy. It's important to have potential, but what can you do if you keep it if you're disobedient? In terms of status, the son of the clan leader and the commander of the third army are equal to the elders. Can't even kill someone? Doupo is not a society governed by the rule of law. If you have strength and status and still feel so aggrieved, when will you be able to stand up!

Let's open a harem. If you fancy it, just take it away by force. That's the style of the young leader of the Yan clan. It's best to build a power.

Don't have too much interaction with Gu Xun'er

Most of the fights are close combat, with no fighting skills, and the protagonist of the novel makes people feel that he is not the protagonist. Too useless. Is Baidi's foundation building so useless? It feels like a martial arts novel. It doesn't feel like fantasy at all. Especially the fighting part.

Others give sauce to the supporting actors, but this guy just gives sauce to the pig's feet.

A late eight-star clan leader was bullied by a group of low-star Dou Sage elders? Funny

Urgent update, urgent update.

I don't know what the poison punishment is. I can't stand it. I skipped the competition part and went to the Overweight Empire. After that, it was the same old-fashioned way of trampling on the protagonist, seizing Xun'er, grabbing the burning battle, and seizing the ancient spirit cold fire. The beginning was not the same old-fashioned plot. Isn't this old-fashioned? ? ? This kind of... Either only seizes the opportunity, seizes the heroine, and then destroys Yaochen and immortalizes Xiao Yan, or else, or seizes everything and subdues Yaochen. Isn't this cliche? What did you say at the beginning? ? What does the author write in the opening chapters? Isn't this cliche? ? There's nothing new at all. You're just talking about yourself.