Douluo: Intercept Hu Elex at the Beginning

After reading it, the writing is mediocre, there are a lot of typos, and the plot generally contains some personal stuff. If nothing else, the Supervision Department is a failure. How is a group of geniuses giving up their prime time in training to hunt down evil soul masters different from Shrek? Other fans used this as a point to criticize Shrek. You were the first one I saw to write this.

Spirituality and metallicity don't go together? ? No brain? Take Magneto for example. How can you rub a gun with your bare hands and lack of energy? Directly low-end King's Treasure House. It can also directly control the metal of the human body, and it has mental bonuses. It is just like turning on the self-aim in a gun battle game. You and I don't agree with each other.

The author probably didn't read the original work carefully. Some places are quite private. There are also some places where the characters are subdued and I feel like the introduced characters account for a relatively large proportion. Moreover, I just keep exclaiming that it's okay once or twice. The more times I feel, it's quite annoying. And the most important thing is that when I read it, I felt like I had a serious female pornographic taste.

The writing is okay, but some parts are too disgusting. What is the difference between you and Tang San, who is both upright and independent?

The writing is average and there is no impressive plot. Among the Douluo fics I have read, some good ones include Douluo: Spirit Pearl Divine Sword and Douluo: Emperor Dragon Jingshi. I recommend the author to check it out. I hope to see amazing stories in the subsequent plots.

To be honest, you wrote Tang Shenwang's IQ too low. I feel that Tang San's IQ is like a fool. "Douluo Dalu" hammers his back garden. Can I not notice your art? If I were Tang San, I found you directly intervening in the lower world and slapped you to death. "Douluo Dalu" is all my back garden. What else do I talk about the rules of the gods?

I've read more than a dozen chapters and I can't stand it anymore. It's really stupid.

Why don't you kill your mother too? I want to write his father to death

If a martial spirit is really taken over and given up, if you can't think of the words "spirit skill", don't look for excuses.

There is so much bullshit. It takes one or two chapters to talk about one thing, and the content is too watery.