Douluo: I, Swallow the Martial Soul, Upgrade Infinitely
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Traveling across the Douluo Continent, he became Tang San's half-brother and grew up in the same mother's womb. However, Tang Bai only had one martial spirit, Blue Silver Grass, and gained the Devouring System at the beginning. [Congratulations to the host for successfully swallowing Tang San's martial spirit, and the reward for the martial spirit's upgrade. [Congratulations to the host for successfully devouring Yu Xiaogang's martial soul and being rewarded with a ten-thousand-year soul ring. ... Tang San: Where did my martial spirit go? Yu Xiaogang: Finished! Where is my Luo Sanpao?
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Official(47)Scraped 23d ago
Great author, who is the heroine? Is it Gu Yuena?
book club
Everyone is welcome to come in and chat, the author is always online
Oops, I read it again and really complained about you, the author.
Tangshan was not so selfish in the early stage, otherwise it would not distribute the fairy grass to everyone. You must have a basis and don't fool Tangshan without thinking. What's more, the protagonist is still there and is in Tangshan's position. So do you think the Tang Sect's hidden weapons will be passed on to others? He should be moved with affection, not bully Tang San, and give him appropriate guidance. Tangshan will definitely obey you. After all, how can an ancient person defeat modern people? I always feel that the protagonist's IQ is lower than that of a fifteen or sixteen-year-old child. After all, children know how to take in a younger brother. What does it take to take in a younger brother? Move it with emotion, understand it with reason. Oops, it looks so frustrating. In the same position as Tangshan, there is also Black Tangshan. I really don't know what to think, and Tang Shan may have innate first-level soul power. Without Xuantian Kung, Tang San could only awaken one martial soul at most. So there is no point in swallowing Tang Shan in your belly. The most essential thing is that you both have the Blue Silver Emperor's martial spirit and have the right to inherit. Tang San's martial spirit can be given to the Blue Silver King. I don't have any objection if you really want to swallow Tang San's martial spirit, but don't write nonsense. Now it seems to me that the protagonist's IQ is lower than that of a fifteen or sixteen year old child. It's really frustrating to read! I suggest you take a look at my simulation of the road to immortality. The mind in it is that of an adult. Even if your writing is not good, you still need to use your basic brain! In one word, follow the trend. Just blindly follow Tang San. If you want to write something different, it will be the same, who will read it? When engaging in innovation, don't stick to the same old routine and keep fooling Tangshan, or just stall. The current development trend of QQ reading is to have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. Accepting Hu Lina does not mean that there will be a female protagonist, do you understand? Let me tell you the truth. If you want to write something wonderful, don't follow the trend. If you want people to read it, you can't follow the trend. If you want to write something different, everyone will complain about it. What's more, if you don't use it to criticize Tang San, those people who don't think Tang San will read your book, do you understand? Your reading volume will definitely increase. What I mean is that you should not follow others casually and do not mindlessly criticize Tang San. Standing is very important. When writing Douluo fan fiction, the first thing is to have a good name, and the second thing is to be original. Innovation also has a title, you can write the title like this: Douluo's Beginning, I made Tang San a good dog. Doesn't this name sound good? Those who are ignorant and disloyal to Tang San will also come in to watch. What I mean is that there is no need to blackmail Tang San. Tang San has value. Let me tell you, the protagonist of your novel is a pure waste without a golden finger, and his mind is not mature at all. Anyone can abuse him.
It's very exciting. I hope all book lovers will come and watch it.
The content is wonderful, and the writing is like a spirit and imagination
elder brother as father
Tang San knelt down and said: My eldest brother is my father. Now that my father is gone, you are my eldest brother again. I will listen to you from now on. Sister-in-law is like a mother, Sister Xiaowu, I will listen to your words from now on
Not very good
It's not necessary. It's so sloppy. I feel disgusted when I look at it.
Do it right after birth, there is something
single heroine
Gu Yuena Gu Yuena Gu Yuena Gu Yuena
If you are confident in your writing skills, then just have a single female protagonist, otherwise you won't be popular. Single female protagonists are a test of your writing skills and not many people will read it. If you want to write a harem, as long as the plot is reasonable, a lot of otakus like to read it. I understand personally. I haven't read many books recently because I just comment on them. Most of them have been read. The number of words that I haven't read is pitiful and I plan to read it in a while.
The author is wondering, is this a harem novel with multiple heroines or a single heroine novel?
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Official(47)Scraped 23d ago
Great author, who is the heroine? Is it Gu Yuena?
book club
Everyone is welcome to come in and chat, the author is always online
Oops, I read it again and really complained about you, the author.
Tangshan was not so selfish in the early stage, otherwise it would not distribute the fairy grass to everyone. You must have a basis and don't fool Tangshan without thinking. What's more, the protagonist is still there and is in Tangshan's position. So do you think the Tang Sect's hidden weapons will be passed on to others? He should be moved with affection, not bully Tang San, and give him appropriate guidance. Tangshan will definitely obey you. After all, how can an ancient person defeat modern people? I always feel that the protagonist's IQ is lower than that of a fifteen or sixteen-year-old child. After all, children know how to take in a younger brother. What does it take to take in a younger brother? Move it with emotion, understand it with reason. Oops, it looks so frustrating. In the same position as Tangshan, there is also Black Tangshan. I really don't know what to think, and Tang Shan may have innate first-level soul power. Without Xuantian Kung, Tang San could only awaken one martial soul at most. So there is no point in swallowing Tang Shan in your belly. The most essential thing is that you both have the Blue Silver Emperor's martial spirit and have the right to inherit. Tang San's martial spirit can be given to the Blue Silver King. I don't have any objection if you really want to swallow Tang San's martial spirit, but don't write nonsense. Now it seems to me that the protagonist's IQ is lower than that of a fifteen or sixteen year old child. It's really frustrating to read! I suggest you take a look at my simulation of the road to immortality. The mind in it is that of an adult. Even if your writing is not good, you still need to use your basic brain! In one word, follow the trend. Just blindly follow Tang San. If you want to write something different, it will be the same, who will read it? When engaging in innovation, don't stick to the same old routine and keep fooling Tangshan, or just stall. The current development trend of QQ reading is to have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. Accepting Hu Lina does not mean that there will be a female protagonist, do you understand? Let me tell you the truth. If you want to write something wonderful, don't follow the trend. If you want people to read it, you can't follow the trend. If you want to write something different, everyone will complain about it. What's more, if you don't use it to criticize Tang San, those people who don't think Tang San will read your book, do you understand? Your reading volume will definitely increase. What I mean is that you should not follow others casually and do not mindlessly criticize Tang San. Standing is very important. When writing Douluo fan fiction, the first thing is to have a good name, and the second thing is to be original. Innovation also has a title, you can write the title like this: Douluo's Beginning, I made Tang San a good dog. Doesn't this name sound good? Those who are ignorant and disloyal to Tang San will also come in to watch. What I mean is that there is no need to blackmail Tang San. Tang San has value. Let me tell you, the protagonist of your novel is a pure waste without a golden finger, and his mind is not mature at all. Anyone can abuse him.
It's very exciting. I hope all book lovers will come and watch it.
The content is wonderful, and the writing is like a spirit and imagination
elder brother as father
Tang San knelt down and said: My eldest brother is my father. Now that my father is gone, you are my eldest brother again. I will listen to you from now on. Sister-in-law is like a mother, Sister Xiaowu, I will listen to your words from now on
Not very good
It's not necessary. It's so sloppy. I feel disgusted when I look at it.
Do it right after birth, there is something
single heroine
Gu Yuena Gu Yuena Gu Yuena Gu Yuena
If you are confident in your writing skills, then just have a single female protagonist, otherwise you won't be popular. Single female protagonists are a test of your writing skills and not many people will read it. If you want to write a harem, as long as the plot is reasonable, a lot of otakus like to read it. I understand personally. I haven't read many books recently because I just comment on them. Most of them have been read. The number of words that I haven't read is pitiful and I plan to read it in a while.
The author is wondering, is this a harem novel with multiple heroines or a single heroine novel?
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