Fairy Tail: Captured by Precht at the Beginning

I've read about 30 chapters, so let me give you my opinion. First of all, the setting of the protagonist's abilities is actually quite novel, and the way of describing the protagonist's magic is also reasonable. (Personally, I don't think my imagination is too big) Secondly, what I don't like the most is that the protagonist is taken away by Hades (that's what he calls it) and then becomes an undercover agent. I felt speechless when I finally admitted this scene to Makarov. You are a time traveler, you may be emotional and easily moved, I can accept that. But taking the initiative to admit it, I don't think that this undercover identity will greatly promote the subsequent plot, and taking the initiative to admit and solve the problem is the lowest. Uchiha Madara can detonate the talisman under Obito's heart. Why does a dark magician believe in his own charm so much when he can't control a child? Does the protagonist really believe that Hades didn't do anything to him? Even the undercover agents Makarov sent to the prosecutor's office knew how to clear their memories. Personally, I feel that the identity of an undercover agent can be fully utilized. The protagonist is in Fairy Tail, constantly accumulating strength, and at the same time deepening the bond with other people in the guild (this way, the protagonist can integrate reasonably). The protagonist can completely disrupt Hades's plan externally, and can also appropriately reveal the whereabouts of the second generation president. And when the protagonist is an undercover agent, then everything that follows the plot and develops has a certain reason. You can wait until the Devil's Heart chapter to explain to Makarov that after all, you are not only an undercover agent of Devil's Heart, but also the disciple of the second generation president of Fairy Tail. The protagonist can be a fun person.

It was still watchable at first, but the main plot was immediately cut off later on. My second creation was not that good, so I just gave it up to Leo, 🐮

In the last two paragraphs, the protagonist said he didn't know anything, but in the following paragraphs, he said he was familiar with manipulating magic and defeated Laxus. Are you treating everyone as a fool?

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Are you AI? This is when Laxus was a child, and no one joined the protagonist group except Laxus, so Laxus's character is not like this. His character only changed after Ivan was driven away.

The protagonist in the front was too pretentious

The writing is good, and it is the only fic in Fairy Tail that I can read. The story narration and timeline arrangement are flawless, and the plot changes are also reasonable. What surprised me was the exchange between the protagonist and the double wall of the Empire, the cooperation between the two dark guilds, and the five dragons. I feel that the author can use his imagination to improve the deficiencies in the plot, such as the origin and setting of gods and demons. I hope the author can continue to work hard and not stop updating. After all, there are too few fics in Fairy Tail. Let's see if this can become the Fairy Tail version of the Tenseigan.

It's really so poorly written that I can't read it.